Untamed - A Swasan Story-EPILOGUE (PG-30) - Page 21

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Posted: 8 years ago
Aah.. 😭 Oh my god.. 😭
Res.. Don't know how many reses i have to unres
Sorry lucky😒 (holding ears)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello lucky dear
How are you now hope u fine buddy
Update is beautiful dear full on actions drama love pain longing for each other & arrogant sanskar though he had reason to become like this but he not right with swara.
she also realised how damage done by her mother I like how she reply to her mother.
& their argument damage more he take swara talk wrong way.
though their argument they don't lost their trust or care how he anxious about her missing & other side swara belief that sanskar will save him & her warning to that kinara that agar mujhe kuch hoa sanskar tumhe nehi chorega bah keya confidence hai or hume bhi hai
& the favourite part kinaara dhulaye kaha tha na panga mat liyo sanskar maheshari se swara ne bhi Kia but nehi suna.
ab swara ko kuch mat karna dekhte hai isi bahane purana sanskar wapas ata hai ki nahi.
Waiting for next update eagerly dear
but first take care yourself
Bye
with loads of love
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you for the PMs. I am SO MUCH in love with these two!!! <3 Keep up the good work :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dearest Lucky,
At last I managed to grab the keyboard for chapter 10. This one was a whirlpool of some untoward happenings and heart wrenching emotions. Years of taunts and insecurity had hardened Sanskar so much, the wedding fiasco being the final nail on his coffin. Swara's saying that she didn't care whether she was with him in rags or riches, was a proof of her fierce love, but he misinterpreted. And that was his undoing. of which that Sahil took chance.

Then it was pain. suffering, agony for both side... some action... unleashing the beast inside Sanskar. But Sahil did the damage, before accepting defeat. I was kind of scared after their wedding that creepo may do something like that, and it happened. I hope Sanskar won't get such a big punishment for his mistake.

Last but not the least, their weeks in honeymoon... As usual you define what romance truly is... even if in few lines... that reminded me of my Darjeeling trip last year. it was so calm and serene, unlike my this trip which was crazy and adventurous.

Waiting eagerly for the next part. and I miss Fanaa too!

love,
Dyuti

Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
If I have to say one word then it would be beautiful.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m


Nynu 🤗

I know you are busy with CM's birthday .. wish cutie on my behalf too .. loads of love for him .. and don't worry about res ..Take your time😛


love
lucky


Vaadiki kisses and cuddles yekuva aypoyai, nethi meda kurchuntunadu, not that I mind, I am simply going to give him some more😊

And I have finally managed to unres for all of them

Chapter 7 - Page 21

Chapter 8 - Page 24

Chapter 9 - Page 27

Chapter 10 - Pager 28

love,
Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Vaadiki kisses and cuddles yekuva aypoyai, nethi meda kurchuntunadu, not that I mind, I am simply going to give him some more😊

And I have finally managed to unres for all of them

Chapter 7 - Page 21

Chapter 8 - Page 24

Chapter 9 - Page 27

Chapter 10 - Pager 28

love,
Nyna

😆


So many Un res😆 nynu🤗..on way to reply ..but in short I wanted Sanskaar and Swara to be flawed in Untamed ...you know how I abhor mahaan aatma's😆😆 Bade dilwale in SR .I guess I was hit hard by mahaanta ...I ended up making them super flawed😆 and I love the conflicts flaws bring in anytime over perfection


Love
Lucky

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ria2794

If I have to say one word then it would be beautiful.


😳Thanks Ria
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: showrav24

Hello lucky dear
How are you now hope u fine buddy
Update is beautiful dear full on actions drama love pain longing for each other & arrogant sanskar though he had reason to become like this but he not right with swara.
she also realised how damage done by her mother I like how she reply to her mother.
& their argument damage more he take swara talk wrong way.
though their argument they don't lost their trust or care how he anxious about her missing & other side swara belief that sanskar will save him & her warning to that kinara that agar mujhe kuch hoa sanskar tumhe nehi chorega bah keya confidence hai or hume bhi hai
& the favourite part kinaara dhulaye kaha tha na panga mat liyo sanskar maheshari se swara ne bhi Kia but nehi suna.
ab swara ko kuch mat karna dekhte hai isi bahane purana sanskar wapas ata hai ki nahi.
Waiting for next update eagerly dear
but first take care yourself
Bye
with loads of love


@ Showrav

Mere bhai ... Thank you so much ..I am glad you liked dhulaayi of kinara😆 and Swasan's confidence on each other .. Trust is the base of love na ..Glad to know you liked drama part as well😛 Swara ko kuch nahi hoga and Sanskaar will be back ..😉

Love
Lucky
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kryztal

Thank you for the PMs. I am SO MUCH in love with these two!!! <3 Keep up the good work :)


Thanks kryztal😛😳

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