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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: lucky.m

😆<font size="2">I know Showrav ..This is just prologue.I will close on Fitoor and next would be fanaa.. F & A would be next😉😛..Gald to see you her</font>e😛

yeh bhi koi pochne wali baat hai jaha swasan waha main
even I m glad to be here to read another beautiful swasan story so bring it dear.

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Dear lucky

Thanks for the pm interesting start...sanskaar is always the dark shadow I see on the story and swara the princess...

Loved the mystery in the story seems there is a lot more to come...and he is hear guardian is see..

Seems to me she is unaware of sanskaar...and the element of lakhs story seem intriguing wonder were he went when swara was like this...

Update soon and must say intro of our hero was hot...

Amazingly written...

Hope you update fanaa too...

Razia

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: raaz19
Dear lucky
Thanks for the pm interesting start...sanskaar is always the dark shadow I see on the story and swara the princess...

Loved the mystery in the story seems there is a lot more to come...and he is hear guardian is see..

Seems to me she is unaware of sanskaar...and the element of lakhs story seem intriguing wonder were he went when swara was like this...

Update soon and must say intro of our hero was hot...

Amazingly written...

Hope you update fanaa too...

Razia

Hi Razia🤗

Thanks for dropping by

Yes there's lot more to come..not much of a mystery , just a bit of it but as events unfold in coming parts you will have a clear picture .Swara is unaware of Sanskaar ,Yes and missing of Laksh in this scenario will have a connection to the story as well.

I am glad you found the entry of 'Rakshak' Sanskaar hot ...😳 and start interesting and intriguing😳 😛

Fanaa... I have to and will soon. I am struggling for time these days esp in weekdays ..All I have is few hours in weekend but my focus would be on closing ongoing stories ..so next would be Fanaa😳

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Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb start.. 👏

Thank you Sneha😛

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: iamreader
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Dyuti😛

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Asyalover
interestng teaser...cont soon

Thank you😛

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Lucky..dear
OMG...new story n a different one...fairy tale backdrop..ooo...👍🏼..nice...read the prologue...quite fascinating...so sanky promised someone to protect shona..but she doesnot know him...that was interesting change...mention of laksh gave me bad feeling..he will be related to swara somehow.im sure...nooo..plzzz make him her bro...🤢 situation were awedomely penned...now...patiently will wait for further unfolding of mystery...eager for next..

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Talia

Talia🤗

Yes a new story ...different one😉. Glad you found prologue fascinating dearie. Yes ,Sanskaar promised someone to protect princess and Swara have no clue of Sanskaar.

Laksh 😆🤣 and Swara's bro ...Lol ..I cant, He has an important role to play and is related to Swara..but trust me Swara will be of Sanskaar's only 😉

Wait would be longer as I intend to close Pending works first😊.Thanks for dropping

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Lucky

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nynu🤗

Take your time bangaram...😳😳 Will wait and you are never late to drop in😉😳🤗

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Lucky

Okay, I am back.

I am simply enchanted, the princess and her Protector, masked one at that. Prince Laksh, confused vibes from him. Shona, whom Sanskaar has never seen yet has sworn to protect with his life, make her his life - strong determined and focused (as his skill so his outlook).

I just loved it, keep writing it will be mind blowing and absolutely beautiful tale.

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Nyna

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: lucky.m

😆<font size="2">I know Showrav ..This is just prologue.I will close on Fitoor and next would be fanaa.. F & A would be next😉😛..Gald to see you her</font>e😛

Nice prologue dear
what is the relation between swara mom & sanskar & why she asked sanskar to take care of swara & sanskar agree on that for life time.
like sherni swara here that she want to fight but bold out by hero eyes 😉
waiting for their love story dear.
Bye
Take care.