Swasan SS/FF - Fire & Arrow - Chapter 1(PG 1) 22/12 - Page 5

Loved the first look, lucky. It was awesome. Sanskar is an archer. Ahh, it sounds really interesting. And his FOCUS on the target. Gaani sanskar oka FOCUS veranga inkori meeda shift avutundi kada 😆 😳. Laksh is a prince. Highly delusional and child like mind as in the show 🤢. Swara is the princess. So it's princess and her protector. I'm loving it. I forgot to mention sanskar promised someone in the beginning. Was it swara's mom. And does yudh, who happens to be sanskar's friend, have any role in bringing swasan closer. Waiting for the story to be proceeded. Update soon.

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Okay, I am back.

I am simply enchanted, the princess and her Protector, masked one at that. Prince Laksh, confused vibes from him. Shona, whom Sanskaar has never seen yet has sworn to protect with his life, make her his life - strong determined and focused (as his skill so his outlook).

I just loved it, keep writing it will be mind blowing and absolutely beautiful tale.

love

Nyna

Originally posted by: showrav24

Nice prologue dear
what is the relation between swara mom & sanskar & why she asked sanskar to take care of swara & sanskar agree on that for life time.
like sherni swara here that she want to fight but bold out by hero eyes 😉
waiting for their love story dear.
Bye
Take care.

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

You are sending me PM or atleast notify on Twitter

Originally posted by: Nivijo

Loved the first look, lucky. It was awesome. Sanskar is an archer. Ahh, it sounds really interesting. And his FOCUS on the target. Gaani sanskar oka FOCUS veranga inkori meeda shift avutundi kada 😆 😳. Laksh is a prince. Highly delusional and child like mind as in the show 🤢. Swara is the princess. So it's princess and her protector. I'm loving it. I forgot to mention sanskar promised someone in the beginning. Was it swara's mom. And does yudh, who happens to be sanskar's friend, have any role in bringing swasan closer. Waiting for the story to be proceeded. Update soon.

🤗for the pm.

Love u loads

Nivi

Hi Lucky darling, 🤗
The prologue is so intriguing! 😉 Yayyy! Sanskar is Swara's protector! 😳 So Swara is a princess here. 😃 And Laksh is a prince too! But what's his role here? 😕 And so what is Sanskar?? 😕 Update soonish dear. 😛 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Hey All

Dearest Lucky,

Swara's princess by birth, but daughter of nature at heart... Her maternal blood imprinted her soul... Her paternal blood will rub in too, just like her father she would give her heart to someone who is not royal... Old lovestory reapeating in the next generation, just gender reversal... Like Sharmistha, Sanskar gonna be a saviour... Aww he's a hopeless lover! He knows she is not going to be his, but can't make place for anyone else in his heart!

Call me skeptical, but why I feel Janki is not that great as she portrays herself... I think she played by that rule, "Keep your friends close, but enemies closer." in case of Sharmistha. And had a role in removing her out of her way, yet regained place in Shekhar's life..
I may be wrong, it may be anyone else... Janki can be really sweet... But I'm infamous for shooting wild theories! Ask Saku, she had to bear my brunt in her December project. 😊

You're getting more versatile with each passing days. Each installment of your F series bring different flavours. 😊

Love,
Dyuti