Swasan SS/FF - Fire & Arrow - Chapter 1(PG 1) 22/12

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JungleeBilli

@Phir_Mohabbat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

What?! Why would you make her guy? Half the phun gone😒😆

Electrons and protons oooh sounds interesting...OK just finish them and come back

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: .Avengers.
What?! Why would you make her guy? Half the phun gone😒😆
Electrons and protons oooh sounds interesting...OK just finish them and come back

😆 Kavya ..may b Ekta inspired me from serial kavyanjali🤣 We already have a sister duo ..cant tolerate other ..hence Kavita has a bro Kavya😆 .. and Uttara ..would be making an entry soon ..as Sanskaar's sister in coming chapters ..Dadi... Nope ..I didn't dare to make her Rajmaata ..😆I would prefer not to have her at least in this SS

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res Lucky dearest. 😳

Aheli Sweet heart .🤗.Good to see you back

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Sushma Yadav

@Limerence

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Dear

Its amazing, Sanskar love a girl from childhood. Sawra is free spirit or can say chanchal mann type. Amazing bonding shown between both queen. Both queen are positive minded always watch things from positive side. Life has less time instead of spending in remembering pains enjoy life by seeing situation in positive way.

Sushma

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Lucky dear...

Terrific update...all the places...characters n background were stupendously etched...loved each n every character...swasan charaters has soo much charm..swara bubbly n sanky charismatic..both attract attention...has an magnetic aura...

Swara"s parents background story was touching...felt bad for sharmishta death..also felt bad for janki..i dont want her to be evil...ragini though not much revealled..but im soo hoping she is not evil too...fingers crossed..but im sure i wil be wrong...someone is after swara'slife...n sanky his night in shinning armour will reach to save her always...

Well Dp is here n in negative part..ooops i forgot kavya n kavita is here..kavya im accepting but kavi...nooo...not again.why this eomen enters inevery story..n loves sanky in it...im annoyed...but still...story soo far is captivating..waiting for next...excited

Talia

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showrav

@showrav24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Hello lucky dear
beautiful 1st chapter dear nice set up for the rest. I just love historical type love story by the way do u know bangla then we can communicate in bangla.
swara is as usual care free & full of life is ragini is the one who overhear swara & janaki convo u know by history it easy to guess I hope it not her or janaki is pretending good infront of all don't know but I feel that.
now the best part our hero introduction u did it very well & girls are trying his attention but they don't know sanskar only for swara.
firse kavita sanskar ki piche keya karo main uska pls usse haddi mat banana between swasan.
Sanskar & samay deadly combo just imagine sanskar ride on horse.
look like hero swara pe bachpan main hi kurban ho geya.
but how they meet then waiting for revelation & waiting for fair like swara.
update soon dear
Bye
Take care.

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blindassassin

@blindassassin

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Lucky

Before my entry to the forum I always avoided two genres of stories, historical and Fantasy. But shru and Saku proved how wrong I was ,with.DK and Vajra resp.And today I was very excited to read your fire and arrow. I love swasan in a historical background. A stunning princess and a handsome charmer. Very well set, interesting first update. Just hope this will have a 100 chapters.Always greedy for swasan.

As usual I have my reservations on Janaki ND Ragini.I think Sharmishta s death was not accidental.

But Shekhar here is otrayed much better, hope he stands for his daughter too.Anyway super excited for next updates.

B/ w where is Fanaa?

Love, veena.