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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Unki theer ki shikaar hogayi ,
Parne gaye the, fangirl hogayi 😳🤪
Comment updated page one🤗

😆😆🤗 Oh God ..Saku ..How do you come up with those awesome lines ..running to read your take.Will be back in while.😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: lucky.m

😆😆🤗 Oh God ..Saku ..How do you come up with those awesome lines ..running to read your take.Will be back in while.😊

Hehe glad you liked it, I'm over dosed with good humour today. 😆 Seriously I loved the opening, this is a historical I take it? yum, my favorite genre😃

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sakura24
Lucky darling🤗

You're a life saver to a insomniac like me. I was trotting around the forum looking for something juicy and was struck by your archer.

Between you and me, that opening where he was taking aim, birds eye was it, with those words on focus...that was...at the loss of a better word...fiery hot 😳 As you might have guessed I LOVE archers and Sanskaar does have the athletic built of a one doesn't he?

Now the second part...hmm...princess Swara. Her entire escapade and getting saved gave me Robin Hood vibes. I'm losing my marbles I guess. But I guess before I started blubbering crazily I gave you the general idea. I LOVE IT. Please do continue and consider this humble woman an impatient fangirl waiting to read.

Love you loads,
Saku

Saku🤗

Well ..we share common interests, the major one being Yuvraaj and Our Sanskaar😆 😉I dont know but I felt he would be hot as archer with the bow in his hand focusing ..😳 I am happy to share the similar sentiments .I wanted to add lines on his muscles ..😆 but held back my fantasies🤣for a while and many prospects of teaching Swara archery in coming episodes ..You get what I mean😆😉

Robin Hood ..I had him in mind you know skilled archer ..swordsman and he is no prince here ..so He can be our Robin Hood😉

Wait seems to be long ..I don't have draft in place ..juts typed out some stuff .. and two ongoing stories to close on mad work schedule😡 ..*Sigh* ..Lets see how it shapes up 😛 ..and Cant tell you how happy I am to see you here🤗 .😳 We can gush about our robin hood here and yuvraaj and his eyes In VAJRA😳

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Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hehe glad you liked it, I'm over dosed with good humour today. 😆 Seriously I loved the opening, this is a historical I take it? yum, my favorite genre😃

That scares me Vajra Lady the word historical,I tell you..I am really scared ..I bow down to you , Viji , shru and nynu .. The amount of research you guys do👏.👏I am poor with places ,Dates and all that have least amount of patience to do so .How do you guys manage?

Intended to be an historical romance ..but I may mingle it up with contemporary😆 I am worried guess I am losing my mind now .. 🤣 Have been reading few historical romances recently ..They took toll on my head I guess😆.

Hitting the bed ..Right now..Gud night😊

Edited by lucky.m - 8 years ago

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: lucky.m

Saku🤗

Well ..we share common interests, the major one being Yuvraaj and Our Sanskaar😆 😉I dont know but I felt he would be hot as archer with the bow in his hand focusing ..😳 I am happy to share the similar sentiments .I wanted to add lines on his muscles ..😆 but held back my fantasies🤣for a while and many prospects of teaching Swara archery in coming episodes ..You get what I mean😆😉

Robin Hood ..I had him in mind you know skilled archer ..swordsman and he is no prince here ..so He can be our Robin Hood😉

Wait seems to be long ..I don't have draft in place ..juts typed out some stuff .. and two ongoing stories to close on mad work schedule😡 ..*Sigh* ..Lets see how it shapes up 😛 ..and Cant tell you how happy I am to see you here🤗 .😳 We can gush about our robin hood here and yuvraaj and his eyes In VAJRA😳

Love
Lucky

I'm glad you didn't add flexing muscles too, cause that would have set my screen ablaze. Hold on your horses girl...I see, he will be teaching the correct position and how to aim and stuff...hmm? uff It's too hot in here😳 already!

I am all about swords in Vajra, so will be looking forward to see more arrows here.

BTW , did you meet Dr. Sanskar Maheshwari in the prologue of Sail through styx yet? Just reminding, not harping my own trumpet😳

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: lucky.m

That scares me Vajra Lady the word historical,I tell you..I am really scared ..I bow down to you , Viji , shru and nynu .. The amount of research you guys do👏.👏I am poor with places ,Dates and all that have least amount of patience to do so .How do you guys manage?

Intended to be an historical romance ..but I may mingle it up with contemporary😆 I am worried guess I am losing my mind now .. 🤣 Have been reading few historical romances recently ..They took toll on my head I guess😆.

Hitting the bed ..Right now..Gud night😊

At the risk of sounding crazy I'm reading Chinese novels these days. translations of cause. But ther historicals have a different kind of elegance and sorrow.

I am a very academic sort of girl so research is as normal as lunch to me, but you do grate yourself. Don't be too nervous, if your earlier works were anything to go by I'd say you have a fabulous talent.

Have sweet dreams, good night!

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StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Hi Khushi

You know me by now I guess .Sanskaar in my stories will be the ultimate hero and How can I not make him interesting😉 😳.You are right about Laksh & Swara being Prince & Princess and you will get answers to all your questions as story moves forward

Thanks for Dropping by 🤗

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Lucky

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That what I love about your stories your Sanskar(s) are different and interesting .. if it be Fitoor , Fanna or Fida ( sorry I am still stucked in my translation phase and still I have a lot of chapters to read )

I hope you will make it easy for me in this story 😃 ..

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

BTW ..I just met our Doctor ..and he touched me to the core,I am gonna fall for him again in your story ..😳 and on that note you made me cry ..😭

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Unres!

Lucky,
You blew in again! Another glorious addition to your 'F' series... Archer Sanskar! Wow! Is he a commoner/ warrior / outlaw?

Amazing start! The forum is on fire recently! You people are writing so much Stories that I forget where I typed Res or not! 😆
Love,
Dyuti

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Lucky..dear

OMG...new story n a different one...fairy tale backdrop..ooo...👍🏼..nice...read the prologue...quite fascinating...so sanky promised someone to protect shona..but she doesnot know him...that was interesting change...mention of laksh gave me bad feeling..he will be related to swara somehow.im sure...nooo..plzzz make him her bro...🤢 situation were awedomely penned...now...patiently will wait for further unfolding of mystery...eager for next..

Love

Talia

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