SwaSan SS: Another Chance at Happiness (Epilogue on pg 19[23/05/17]) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res - And I am not sure when I will unres, but I will.

love,
Nyna


Okay, this is the sadist me - I think Swara is getting away a little easily (I am not going to forgive her so soon) but then I trust you.

Will be back with a detailed comment in a decent amount of time.

love,
Nyna


Second that ..Add me too for the certified sadist when it comes to Swara .. and yes I believe Nita.like she said Its juts start .. and now Sanskaar's miss you is going to get into her head😆

Nita ... I say again .. anything that has got to do with Swara's redemption .. I love it and same goes here 😛⭐️

Love
Lucky



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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Nice OS
Read the OS and 3 parts in one go.
Swara is taking him for granted.
I am feeling so sorry for sanskaar that he is still having hope with broken heart.
Wtng to read abt their journey...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Hello Nita dear
Beautiful update & much needed to overcome that horrible track which destroyed swara & swasan.
you make what I wanted from sanskar in serial & wanted swAra mend their relation & show her loved to sanskar what sanskar did every time without any expectations I know I not used right words but I know u understood.
let see how swara convinced sanskar though he will melt just one glance of her because she come first always for him.
I know he also hurt knowing she stand since afternoon & how he scold himself for not coming early this little little things show how he loved her.
Update when u can but try soon but don't pressurized yourself for that.
Bye
Take care
loads of love
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74









its really good so finally swara got a good mission. now she won't care for anybody except her realation with sanskar. i would love to see how swara is going to that.
i really felt bad for Swara, she is ready to do anything for family but what she got in return.
i really never thought Ragini knew about Laksh still after finding out coincidentally again they are family Swara means really like what the hell.
well i liked it awesome one. waiting for further ones.

sushma










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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Rumadiv

Dear Nitu,

As Nyna said its like swara getting easy there and agree with her even i wont forgive her easily. But you must have your own idea of her redemption but hoping it ll be hard. Only cvs dissapointed but hope not you.

Ragini again taking her laksh ji side and not thinking about her sis marriage life. Nikil's daughter..??? So Nikil new whereabout of laksh and playing wity them. So his part of story is to yet revealed.

Still its hard tat swara went to sanskars office to talk about them. Still i cant disgest it but dont know y. Sujatha was right in her place. I liked her were she asks not to allow swara inside. But sanskar will always choose swara over anyone though knowing he ll get hurt at last. I know he loves her but after this cant imagine. Sorry this is how i feel.

At the moment wen he bought swara home i hated sanskar. But its his nature which cant be changed. I feel sad. Hope you ll give Justice to sanskars feeling for 6months. I know sanskar is also at his fault as always he forgives easily with out her any trying. So swara obviously thought he ll forgive her soon.

Waiting how swara will earn forgiveness and sanskar will react .

With love,
Divya :-)


Hi Divya dear..

I totally understand you and your disappointment but as I told Nyna.. This is so not over . You might not like it now but don't think swara is getting forgiven easily.


Yeah laksh had an whole back story and yeah nikhil knew about it.. I drafted the next two part and I haven't touched upon this aspect yet. Because it won't play a role till later..

I will update next one soon. Once I re-edit it.. I am not sure if you will like the way swara gains her forgiveness.. But I promise too make it happen logically as possible..

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: showrav24


same here still hate cvs & some characters may be for life time😡 i still miss my swasan dear everyday try to read few stories of them just to console mine. thanks to all of u who writes on them & make them alive & more special to me.
soon read ch 3
Bye
Love u dear🤗


Take your time showrav.. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: lucky.m


Second that ..Add me too for the certified sadist when it comes to Swara .. and yes I believe Nita.like she said Its juts start .. and now Sanskaar's miss you is going to get into her head😆

Nita ... I say again .. anything that has got to do with Swara's redemption .. I love it and same goes here 😛⭐️

Love
Lucky




Thanks Lucky dearest for the vote if confidence.. I try to make it work.. As I said I try. I might set you all up for an ultimate fail. I have thought it again and again till I have managed to have the draft for next two updates . But this SS is indeed an tricky one. I really hope to do justice to it..

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
As Nynu said, Swara seems getting away easily & I neither want that nor like that!
Bt I believe you when you said it's just the beginning & I will be patient!
I don't care if I sound like a sadist but I want Swara tarpaoying for Sanskaar!
Me too can't forgive Swara easily this time! And I trust you that you will do a lot better job than CVs :)
Love,
~ Nupur
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: srividhya87

Nice OS

Read the OS and 3 parts in one go.
Swara is taking him for granted.
I am feeling so sorry for sanskaar that he is still having hope with broken heart.
Wtng to read abt their journey...


Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you like the update so far.. Well that is swara for you. And sanskaar will always have hope.. Will try to update soon dear..

Love
Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: showrav24

Hello Nita dear
Beautiful update & much needed to overcome that horrible track which destroyed swara & swasan.
you make what I wanted from sanskar in serial & wanted swAra mend their relation & show her loved to sanskar what sanskar did every time without any expectations I know I not used right words but I know u understood.
let see how swara convinced sanskar though he will melt just one glance of her because she come first always for him.
I know he also hurt knowing she stand since afternoon & how he scold himself for not coming early this little little things show how he loved her.
Update when u can but try soon but don't pressurized yourself for that.
Bye
Take care
loads of love


Hi Showrav,

Thanks showrav..Really happy to know you like the update 😃.. Well I am trying to recreate the track.. But it hard.. I don't want to end up disappointing everyone.. But I am not going to change my train of thoughts.. I really hope you end up liking it


While I want to make swara beg and plead.. Sanskaar stone cold to her attempts that doesn't how I imagine sanskaar to behave.. Hence he will melt at her slightest presence... But still the scars she created will always always plays it part in keeping him away from her.. I hope you get what I am trying to say.. You will understand it when you read the next update.. I intend to shock you all..


Love

Nita

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