SwaSan SS: Another Chance at Happiness (Epilogue on pg 19[23/05/17]) - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Rumadiv

Dear Nita,

Its happy that u have come up with this ss after long gap. Though the serial is over. We all fans had expected swara to realise her mistake and how much she had hurted sanskar by blaming for disappearance of laksh and choosing Ragini over him. But since the serial was ending the writer ended up by making sanskar was at fault and swara was right. At end only sanskar apologized but not swara. Tat left all fans at disappointment.

But once after reading your ss its nice that u made swara realise her mistake and her one decision as caused so much trouble in her own life. And how much guilty swara is. I hope u write in such way that how much gem she as lost(sanskar).

And as for sanskar don't make him to accept swara so easily. Make her realise how much she had hurted him and how much he means to her. Now also she cared about ragini and laksh while sanskar was crying as once again because she hurted.

Hope at least u will write how all our fan expected and consider their thought. U r going on the correct story path and making us wait how swara will face once laksh truth comes out ( I don't know wat u will write laksh's reason for disappearance)Once the truth is out and wat will be sanskar's decision and how swara will mend her mistake and how she will gain again sanskar's trust. Waiting for the suspense to enclose soon.

With love,
Divya


Hi Divya,


This SS and long gaps are kind of happening to me all the time.. I managed to come up with the next update.. So that good right.. I am sure Sanskaar would have apologized even if show didn't go off.. I trust our cv's that much 😡


I know your expectations.. I hope I do justice to it.. Thanks dear for such a lovely feedback.. And I totally get your thoughts.. I really hope I can write this SS and forget the horrible track of the show.. Sorry for short comment back.. I am excited to update the next part and I am also typing from mobile..

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nita my doll...

Fantabulous update...

I seriously hated this track in swaragini...but here im enjoying alot...in show they did not give justice to this track...
Start was great...well it was difficult for swara to believe sanky moved on...but he himself insisted that he had move on...why exactly is he acting as lover to othergirl????favour for friend..liked how swara fainted...she loved him more ..could not bear the thought of seperating from him..awww cute...

I was little annoyed with nikhil n ragini...she know sanky do not like nikhil ... but still he have to be all touchy n concerned for swara infront of him...well itmade sanky jealous.n annoyed..enjoyed his n swara convo...he is quite astute ...swara realised her mistake...n ran to him..butsaw laksh...by chance

I was like..here we go again...another mission in her list...thing which sanky hate most...swara not giving him priority...i did not like the fact that she broke sanky hope of having reunion with his life...but that how she is always thinking about others..

Nita plzzz make sanky her only priority...now...excited for more..

Love
Talia


Hi Talia dear..


I am jumping up in joy because I finally managed to come up with an update for this one.. I was always stressed about it.. Because it been son long since I updated this one..

Didn't we all hate the track in the show.. How much we wished the track played out differently.. He Was just helping out her friend. It not much.. She was hurt by her best friend and finance.. So she was helping her stand up to them.. He didn't admit to be her boyfriend.. That a plus right


I know Swara might have not made an impression that not favorable.. But I am planning to make her work for not only his heart but also our trust. I hope you like the next update.. Will try to post soon..

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.



love you more nita. but you know that.
🤗
and you and your presence never ever fails to bring that big bright smile of happiness to me.

signature..😆. aren't we Siamese twins. that's totally my life motto.



We are Siamese twins indeed.. My motto indeed..

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
I think I have replied back to all comments from chapter two and I have chapter one comments yet to be replied back... I will try to reply them soon..
Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Res - And I am not sure when I will unres, but I will.
love,
Nyna


Okay, this is the sadist me - I think Swara is getting away a little easily (I am not going to forgive her so soon) but then I trust you.

Will be back with a detailed comment in a decent amount of time.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res - And I am not sure when I will unres, but I will.

love,
Nyna


And I love you too Nyna dear.. You Take your time.. I have yet to reply back to your comment from chapter 1.. So we all know how much behind I am.. So relax.. I am happy as long as I see you here..

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res - And I am not sure when I will unres, but I will.

love,
Nyna


Okay, this is the sadist me - I think Swara is getting away a little easily (I am not going to forgive her so soon) but then I trust you.

Will be back with a detailed comment in a decent amount of time.

love,
Nyna


Don't worry Nyna.. This is so not over.. She just entered his house.. There is a long way to his trust and heart

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Dear Nitu,

As Nyna said its like swara getting easy there and agree with her even i wont forgive her easily. But you must have your own idea of her redemption but hoping it ll be hard. Only cvs dissapointed but hope not you.

Ragini again taking her laksh ji side and not thinking about her sis marriage life. Nikil's daughter..??? So Nikil new whereabout of laksh and playing wity them. So his part of story is to yet revealed.

Still its hard tat swara went to sanskars office to talk about them. Still i cant disgest it but dont know y. Sujatha was right in her place. I liked her were she asks not to allow swara inside. But sanskar will always choose swara over anyone though knowing he ll get hurt at last. I know he loves her but after this cant imagine. Sorry this is how i feel.

At the moment wen he bought swara home i hated sanskar. But its his nature which cant be changed. I feel sad. Hope you ll give Justice to sanskars feeling for 6months. I know sanskar is also at his fault as always he forgives easily with out her any trying. So swara obviously thought he ll forgive her soon.

Waiting how swara will earn forgiveness and sanskar will react .

With love,
Divya :-)

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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: NitaReid



I wish I can forget.. But I can't.. I started it so I feel like I have to end it as well.. That kind of helped because I finished the next update.. Will post it by tonight.. My index.. Gosh that something I totally have to update...

Let not talk about the cv's. I still hate them so much though it been long time since the show ended..

Love

Nita

same here still hate cvs & some characters may be for life time😡 i still miss my swasan dear everyday try to read few stories of them just to console mine. thanks to all of u who writes on them & make them alive & more special to me.
soon read ch 3
Bye
Love u dear🤗

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