SwaSan SS: Another Chance at Happiness (Epilogue on pg 19[23/05/17]) - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago
Dearest nita
Before I go and say sorry or apologise for the delay in response let me say never thought yourself and your beautiful writing skills...

From your awesome mystery thriller whin focuses on what would you do to protect your loved once to a fairly tale of how does one move away from judging one by how the act or look...

Each tale is unique and for that your deserve a big hug and remember we love you for all your hard work...

Back to the update and this is what I will say...

" slowly slowly come and fall in love..."

"Slowly slowly come and fall in love" and when we do stay with me for all eternity..."

"They say seeking and finding is a difficult task but the mere acknowledgedment of knowing that one has been wronged is the biggest acceptance of all.."

"Love me...hate me but talk to me.."

"Hold me to trust me...hold me to love me...hold me to treasure for without you I see a to exist..."

They say family is everything yet sometimes we have to accept that not all broken relationship can be fixed...

And I loved that you showed the reality that wounds take a time to heal and love can be found if one walks together...

Loving the concept of having faith in the idea of living and talking together...For trust can be shown thorough actions and words...

For as they say the biggest trust can always been seen through ones eyes...

Yes this is how much I loved the story and it's ending...yet I do wonder did swasan ever plan to give asha a sibling? And what happened with ap and dp?

As always a magical tale of misunderstanding gone wrong...

Beautifully woven...

Take care

Razia

Sorry for being late :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Before I forget...
This what each update made me think

8 - "caring is sharing and sharing is a step closer to finding what one has lost"

9 - "worrying is fearing that one may make the same mistake but does that mean we can never fear to say what we rrally feel..." for one needs to say and feel for there to be bond at all..."

Final - "family is one that holds and guides yet sometimes one needs to focus upon what they desire a day what they feel they deserve is right...not all relationship can be fixed but Tues can never be forgotten..."

Epilogue - "trust is by accepting and moving on and holding one to what the present had to offer and what one may seek I the future"

I see that swasan has seen all the above but through this both have seen that although they will face storms they can walk and get past it by being together...

Yes and indeed there little angle is a blessing for without her they would have never learnt to forgive and forget...

Sometimes relationship need to break for them to see what they have is unique to begin with...

Dear love you for giving us this story and loved swasan in it very minute of the updates...

Truly a unique tale form a awesome writer...so no more worrying :)

Take care

Razia
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful update Nita
Again Dadi & her laadli accused swara why swara can't get over them for them she destroyed her relation hope this time swara not accept ragini demand.
like how sujata support & care for swara.

loads of love
showrav
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Posted: 8 years ago
unres for rest chapters 😆 😃
Nita u didn't disappoint us at least I liked how it turn out.
How swasan worked their relation.


I can understand sanskar hesitation to tell about laksh if I were in sanskar place I will do same cuz swara leave her impression like that her sister happiness & family reunion.
atlast swara understand where she gone wrong.
& what I say about ragini & her haq ji u assume what u want I know i will like it & I knew u also know my take on them.
but glad swara this time give some to her sister & want to support her husband.
How we wanted swasan leave those spinless people & the house u make it true & thanks for that. Glad that they not back there after ap realisation & dp attack & what I say about laksh how low class & ungrateful person he is. he deserve ragini as a life partner both are same & selfish u all can give better adjectives than me.
loved all swasan moments their nok jok & how they overcome their broken relation & become stronger thanks to Asha their world now.
Take care buddy
Bye

love you buddy

p.s. saw your new story hope catch soon read recap on wattpad yesterday I m confused so will try to go through chapters To understand.




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Posted: 8 years ago
I am sorry guys.. I know I have yet to reply back to the lovely comments.. Just know I read them and cherished them and will surely reply them back ASAP
Love

Nita

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