SwaSan SS: Another Chance at Happiness (Epilogue on pg 19[23/05/17])

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

I totally forget about this story hehehesorry
& u also not update ur index may be three stories of your u not update in ur writing index today see all this three stories..
Update as usual beautiful what I say cvs destroyed this track & swara this track fully with their overhead idea consolation is u all writing what we want.
let see how swara mend their relation
Update soon dear
Bye
Take care
love u buddy

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Rumadiv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Dear Nita,

Its happy that u have come up with this ss after long gap. Though the serial is over. We all fans had expected swara to realise her mistake and how much she had hurted sanskar by blaming for disappearance of laksh and choosing Ragini over him. But since the serial was ending the writer ended up by making sanskar was at fault and swara was right. At end only sanskar apologized but not swara. Tat left all fans at disappointment.

But once after reading your ss its nice that u made swara realise her mistake and her one decision as caused so much trouble in her own life. And how much guilty swara is. I hope u write in such way that how much gem she as lost(sanskar).

And as for sanskar don't make him to accept swara so easily. Make her realise how much she had hurted him and how much he means to her. Now also she cared about ragini and laksh while sanskar was crying as once again because she hurted.

Hope at least u will write how all our fan expected and consider their thought. U r going on the correct story path and making us wait how swara will face once laksh truth comes out ( I don't know wat u will write laksh's reason for disappearance)Once the truth is out and wat will be sanskar's decision and how swara will mend her mistake and how she will gain again sanskar's trust. Waiting for the suspense to enclose soon.

With love,
Divya

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Sushma98999
Dear Nita
Your stories are amazing no doubt, I can't describe properly because I am not a expressive type of person and I really don't know how to express the feeling. I think I have to work on that.

But really nice to see without even rationalise proper examining the situation and things related to Sanskar, Swara always reached the conconclusion and give up as according to Sanskar till yet said. Whenever Sanskar think yaa ya now everything is going to be alright again everything messed up.

Waiting for next part

Sushma

Hi Sushma dearest,

You know comments like yours make me grin like an fool all day.. So please don't even think you are not expressive.. You comment made me really happy.. I am glad you liked the update.. And you have said everything perfectly about swasan and their dynamics .. Will try to post the next update soon.. Once again thanks for such an lovely feedback

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

@showrav and Divya - Your comments made me so happy.. And will try to reply them back ASAP.. Thanks guy for such an lovely feedback..

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Nita my doll...

Fantabulous update...

I seriously hated this track in swaragini...but here im enjoying alot...in show they did not give justice to this track...

Start was great...well it was difficult for swara to believe sanky moved on...but he himself insisted that he had move on...why exactly is he acting as lover to othergirl????favour for friend..liked how swara fainted...she loved him more ..could not bear the thought of seperating from him..awww cute...

I was little annoyed with nikhil n ragini...she know sanky do not like nikhil ... but still he have to be all touchy n concerned for swara infront of him...well itmade sanky jealous.n annoyed..enjoyed his n swara convo...he is quite astute ...swara realised her mistake...n ran to him..butsaw laksh...by chance

I was like..here we go again...another mission in her list...thing which sanky hate most...swara not giving him priority...i did not like the fact that she broke sanky hope of having reunion with his life...but that how she is always thinking about others..

Nita plzzz make sanky her only priority...now...excited for more..

Love

Talia

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb.. 👏

Thanks Sneha dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃

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Nita

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nimmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

sweetest thing..
just thought of letting you know that i miss you.
and love you.🤗

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.
sweetest thing..
just thought of letting you know that i miss you.
and love you.🤗

I miss you too Nimmi dear.. Lots and lots.. It feel so good to see you around.. 😃.. And I love you too my sweetest friend.. Thanks for stopping by.. You have successfully managed to make me so much happy just by your mere presence. 😳

Love

Nita

P. S: Your signature.. Wow that brilliant.. It my life motto too.

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nimmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: NitaReid

I miss you too Nimmi dear.. Lots and lots.. It feel so good to see you around.. 😃.. And I love you too my sweetest friend.. Thanks for stopping by.. You have successfully managed to make me so much happy just by your mere presence. 😳

Love

Nita

P. S: Your signature.. Wow that brilliant.. It my life motto too.

love you more nita. but you know that.🤗
and you and your presence never ever fails to bring that big bright smile of happiness to me.

signature..😆. aren't we Siamese twins. that's totally my life motto.

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: showrav24
I totally forget about this story hehehesorry
& u also not update ur index may be three stories of your u not update in ur writing index today see all this three stories..
Update as usual beautiful what I say cvs destroyed this track & swara this track fully with their overhead idea consolation is u all writing what we want.
let see how swara mend their relation
Update soon dear
Bye
Take care
love u buddy

I wish I can forget.. But I can't.. I started it so I feel like I have to end it as well.. That kind of helped because I finished the next update.. Will post it by tonight.. My index.. Gosh that something I totally have to update...

Let not talk about the cv's. I still hate them so much though it been long time since the show ended..

Love

Nita