Sail Through Styx A SwaSan SS complete pg 1 (12/20) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Coming back after reading

Wow every time every time you manage to make me speechless and spellbound with your writing

Originally posted by: iamreader

Unres! Me 2nd! Yippeee! 😃

Sakura dear, The premise of the tale had been set up eloquently... DP is another tragic hero.. his gnawing pain over losing his soul mate and crying with little Sanskar in his arms... the melancholy runs in Maheswari blood... So DP saved another but lost his sunshine at the same time... But God gave him another sunshine in return! Our Sunny boy... The place and settings where Sanskar first met the her (Hopefully Swara), I could just picturize it... beautiful!!! And I like Sanskar's character here .I love Sanskar's characterisation here. boyish, bright, fun loving, but sensitive enough to feel grief not being able to save someone... I remember my early days in hospital. 1st death I witnessed had shaken me. When I had to declare death to the relatives first time, it was like the heaviest weight on earth. when you've to inform a parent a child's impending or recent death... It's difficult to deal you know?

Blabbered a lot! Felt a deep connection with Sanskar and DP actually! And oh, I loved you started it with mentioning Zeus... gave the story a semi - mythological feel..

Dyuti

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Wow every time every time you manage to make me speechless and spellbound with your writing

Take a bow girl 👏

It was so beautifully written 👏 👏 👏 👏 no matter how much claps I give for your writing it will be less

When i read the theme of the story I should have come with tissue before reading the prologue

This story seems a love story that goes beyond life and death but it seems to be a love story of eternal wait too Orpheus has lost his love because he was unable to bear the wait but this story will be a love story which will be strong enough to bear the eternal wait

Sakura baby...

Saku dearest 🤗

Saku

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Saku

Beautiful!!!! I would say poetic...as usual. But a doubt...tall girl? Is it ragini? And swara his second love? Waiting anxiously for your next update...

Veena.

Veena,
Thanks. Haha if I answer that the whole secret will be out! Will update soon 😊

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Saku dearest🤗

Absolutely superb prologue.👏Loved the back story of DP and AP, his immense love for her and his anguish at her untimely passing. Now this is a love story in its own right. You made DP a worthy father to Sunny here.😊

I loved the way you sketched Sanskaar's character. His bond with his dad in the flashback, their lovely relationship in the present. Sunny is one responsible and committed Doc here...his determination and sensitivity was so well highlighted. The way he feels so responsible , so emotionally involved when he lost a patient despite his best efforts...

Eagerly looking forward to more, to reading more about that girl whom Sanskaar had glimpsed several times and could not help but take note of.😉

So chapter 1 here will be after you finish beautiful scars and Vajra?

Am on the road now hence not able to probe deeper into the prologue the way I'd like. Do bear with me.

Lots of Love

Viji

I can't tell you how grateful I am that you took time in spite your travels to read and share your take dearest 😳 We had imagined dp as many things in the past no, in my case I have almost made him a potential criminal. 😆 so I thought he deserves this beautiful role too. Their father son bond is at the very core of this story.
I'm thrilled that you liked Sanskar, yes he is very balanced as an individual. Let's see how you like Swara when you meet her in chapter one. Umm no dearest, while I'd be writing Vajra on the side I have postponed working on beautiful scars. It is so that with the current situation and the load of nonsense on the show I had given up watching it...somewhere there my muse to Beautiful scars seemed to have lost. I don't believe in writing unless you have your heart in it, and ml track surely isn't where my heart is at. So until I feel some motivation I've decided to hold it. Hope you understand. So you'll be getting the first chapter sooner than you thought!
Thanks a ton for making my rather dull Saturday day a brighter one.
Love you loads,
Saku