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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Welcome Sanya dear! too sleepy to form a coherent sentence. so I'll reply in detail later. For now, honestly I considered your option too but that was too much for me to bear hence I did that with DP and ap instead.
Thank you so much for the kind words I'll be back with a proper reply soon.
Love,
Sakura

Yah that will be very tough to bear but if swara remains alive in the end the story will be beautiful

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blindassassin

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Saku

That was a fast update dear. So when is the next one...Just kidding, Take your own time .. I know how exhausting it must be to write something like Vajra and we should be grateful you are attempting another one simultaneously. It's just that we are always greedy for more.

Coming to the update eventhough the fate of the female protagonist was already known,it was heartbreaking to read swaras desire to live more. And lakshya was a surprise,never thought he will appear in this story but loved the twist,it adds to the charm. Shekhar as usual..good for nothing and now I know where the tall girl came from...So the meeting is postponed to the next chapter but has sanskar noticed her?. Waiting for all answers..

B/w speculations of Vajra ending...please don't do that. I am hopeful of a 100 chapters of Vajra. So keep going...

Love,veena.

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Dear Saku,

Res - I will read and get back, pinky swear, as quickly as possible

Love,

Nyna

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Sakura baby...
You are on fire...what a sensational start..again i learned something..story of orpheus n eurydice...felt proud that i met people soo talented..whom i can call friends or guides...provider etc ..thank u...for this

Coming to story...Dp past was sooo touching..his love.. adoration..longing for his wife n son was highly evident...even sanky part was great..his past story reveal his personality..little bit..he is sensitive...n successfull n determined.too...rest will come as story unveils...im sure..but enjoyed reading it.well..eager for more.. swara official entry...

One question is vajra going to end soon??i hope not...

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Talia

Hi Talia,

Thank you sweetie, I'm genuinely happy you learned something through this story. it's gonna be an emotional one, so had to start on that note of loss. This is a story of how you learn to deal with it in a way.

No Vajra is still young in terms of the huge bulk of events yet to unfold. we'll be having at least twenty more chapters there. Hope you enjoyed chapter one as well.

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: raaz19
Wow sakura...what a start to this story and thanks for the pm...
Seems that this story is going to be one heck of a roller coaster ride...loved the prologue and the sensitive dude if the father and son duo...The story indeed is mysterious yet emotional and I loved the way the element of various shades of love and longing has been show in there bond...

Must say sanskaar as a doctor is truly dreamy and cannot wait to read more about him in the story and the mystery girl...

Waiting for swara entry and at the end that was one heck of a cliff hanger...

Update soon and sorry I have not replied to vajra yet still to catch up with all the magical happens in that realm...till then dreaming away in swasan land...and waiting...

Raz

Hi Razia ,

I'm so glad to see you after a long time. Take your time with Vajra, that struck is complex after all.

Yes the story here is emotional and also a tad bit mysterious too (can't forget my trend now can I?) I hope you will enjoy the many layers of the characters as they unfold and the twists yet to come. There is so much still waiting to happen. hope to hear more from you.

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Saku🤗
You made him a doctor😛 😃Oh I so love this many forms of Sanskaar😳 I tell you ,but DP..I never imagined you would paint him as such a delicate and beautiful soul👏👏.👏I almost had tears when he held Sanskaar as tiny baby in his arms and then the class room episode, fairy part ..😭😭 So touching yaar.

And You broke my heart and I am scared about what happened to Swara ..but assured its a happy ending ...bring it on.. and some similarity struck me here DP losing AP and Sunny Losing Swara ..😭😭 atleast for a while ..Now you had me all wrapped up waiting for next part But I am saving my heart ..hoping it would not break💔 in coming parts

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Lucky

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Oh you can't even imagine what I have in store for this story😈the only thing I will sat is it's different from the myth. yeah, DP deserves to be the good dad once in a while right? This story requires the readers to be emotional so I tried to jab at your hearts with the prologue. thrilled you likes the dad and sunny boy duo.

Please do tell me what you thought about chapter one as well.

Waiting to hear from you.

Love ,

Saku

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Well as I said, I am back, for all it is worth.

The prologue was hard hitting, a twist in the gut and a wrench in the heart, a shared loss and a common pain of losing someone between two people who now appear to have none but each other.

Durga Prasad has still not recovered from the pain of losing his wife while Sanskaar is still dealing with his loss. The agony is still raw still fresh for Durga Prasad.

But then I do not think your story is linear, firstly you mentioned that Durga Prasad was alone, as usual for the past ten years. Then his words in the ending, which Sunny remembers , "I promise I will not let you down" somehow, I feel there is an "Again" missing and Sanskaar's bitter rejoinder, "Home?"

Sanskaar as a surgeon, sharp and precise, yet too empathetic perhaps for a profession that deals directly with death, a brilliant characterisation. Did the present surgery, which unfortunately did not end in success cause the recollection of his earlier loss and thus makes him reach out for his father? I do not want to guess who that tall girl was, that one who caught his attention on that spring day and is the possible cause for his present heart break.

Will wait for your update.

love,
Nyna

I am yet to get back for Chapter 19 and 20 of Vajra, will do so, just caught up in confirming a DD report.

Dear Nyna,

Your detective brain is at high alert these days isn't it? Yes? the story is not linear, there are some fishy spots yet to be encountered. That's the thing with those stories right, where at beginning everything seems just too alright?

This is kind of a twisty tale and I was worried about the emotional spectrum it has to handle. ...that's why it took so long to make up my mind in posting too. But you finding Sanskar's characteristics good is enough for me at the moment.

I'm desperately trying to hold on to my cards here.

Hope you loved chapter one.

Lots of love ,

Saku

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: blindassassin
Saku
That was a fast update dear. So when is the next one...Just kidding, Take your own time .. I know how exhausting it must be to write something like Vajra and we should be grateful you are attempting another one simultaneously. It's just that we are always greedy for more.
Coming to the update eventhough the fate of the female protagonist was already known,it was heartbreaking to read swaras desire to live more. And lakshya was a surprise,never thought he will appear in this story but loved the twist,it adds to the charm. Shekhar as usual..good for nothing and now I know where the tall girl came from...So the meeting is postponed to the next chapter but has sanskar noticed her?. Waiting for all answers..
B/w speculations of Vajra ending...please don't do that. I am hopeful of a 100 chapters of Vajra. So keep going...
Love,veena.

Hi Veena ,

The next one will be soon😆 Yes it is a lot of work, but gladly I have understanding readers like you.

I wanted her to be realistic, nothing too Saint like, nothing too out of place, I hope I managed it and did not make her look rather selfish at the same time.

Lakshya is important here, at least in the first half of the story. And he is not going to be a problem for SwaSan like he was in the serial. I'm trying to handle him that way, hopefully.

I can't really reveal what is waiting for you in the next part But hopefully you will find it interesting.

Love,

Saku