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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

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My dearest Lucky I'll be back with a reply to your fabulous comment soon🤗

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Talia dear, I read and loved your take. Will be back with a detailed revert soon!😊

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Wow sakura...what a start to this story and thanks for the pm...

Seems that this story is going to be one heck of a roller coaster ride...loved the prologue and the sensitive dude if the father and son duo...The story indeed is mysterious yet emotional and I loved the way the element of various shades of love and longing has been show in there bond...

Must say sanskaar as a doctor is truly dreamy and cannot wait to read more about him in the story and the mystery girl...

Waiting for swara entry and at the end that was one heck of a cliff hanger...

Update soon and sorry I have not replied to vajra yet still to catch up with all the magical happens in that realm...till then dreaming away in swasan land...and waiting...

Raz

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sakura24

Will be waiting dearest🤗

Well as I said, I am back, for all it is worth.

The prologue was hard hitting, a twist in the gut and a wrench in the heart, a shared loss and a common pain of losing someone between two people who now appear to have none but each other.

Durga Prasad has still not recovered from the pain of losing his wife while Sanskaar is still dealing with his loss. The agony is still raw still fresh for Durga Prasad.

But then I do not think your story is linear, firstly you mentioned that Durga Prasad was alone, as usual for the past ten years. Then his words in the ending, which Sunny remembers , "I promise I will not let you down" somehow, I feel there is an "Again" missing and Sanskaar's bitter rejoinder, "Home?"

Sanskaar as a surgeon, sharp and precise, yet too empathetic perhaps for a profession that deals directly with death, a brilliant characterisation. Did the present surgery, which unfortunately did not end in success cause the recollection of his earlier loss and thus makes him reach out for his father? I do not want to guess who that tall girl was, that one who caught his attention on that spring day and is the possible cause for his present heart break.

Will wait for your update.

love,

Nyna

I am yet to get back for Chapter 19 and 20 of Vajra, will do so, just caught up in confirming a DD report.

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Sanya17

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Me coming

No no no 😭 😭 😭 😭 swara has heart problem . the person she bumped into was sanskar right ?

You know the coincidence I was imagining how it will turn out if someone write a story about swara on the verge of dying the difference in my imagination and your story is I was imagining a pregnant swara going away from sanskar because she was on the verge of dying because of complicated pregnancy in my imagination swara was adult in your story swara is quite young in my imagination swara was too mahan to be true but in your story swara is more realistic I loved that I loved how you keep your characters in the story so realistic

That shekhar😡 can't he be a good father for once he is the one of the worst father in the history of TV show I hate him

You always manage to hold the secrets and keep us hooked by writing past and present together yet you write so perfectly that we never get confused

Edited by Sanya17 - 8 years ago

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Unres..

So Swara has a fatal heart condition... DP and Swara has very warm relation . Father and son are on the way to be shattered again... Swara and Laksh loved each other... though I'm Swasan Fan, I felt bad for the other pair.. They both were hurt.. but unlike Lucky, Sunny is going to drink the poison of loving someone, who is expected to leave him permanently.

Loving the story very much . Update Vajra too!

Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago

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suwas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Very nice start of the story. swara has serious condition which may need surgery & Sanskar is surgeon. Looks like he has already fallen for her. Can't wait to read what happens next

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sanya17
Me coming

No no no 😭 😭 😭 😭 swara has heart problem . the person she bumped into was sanskar right ?
You know the coincidence I was imagining how it will turn out if someone write a story about swara on the verge of dying the difference in my imagination and your story is I was imagining a pregnant swara going away from sanskar because she was on the verge of dying because of complicated pregnancy in my imagination swara was adult in your story swara is quite young in my imagination swara was too mahan to be true but in your story swara is more realistic I loved that I loved how you keep your characters in the story so realistic
That shekhar😡 can't he be a good father for once he is the one of the worst father in the history of TV show I hate him

You always manage to hold the secrets and keep us hooked by writing past and present together yet you write so perfectly that we never get confused

Welcome Sanya dear! too sleepy to form a coherent sentence. so I'll reply in detail later. For now, honestly I considered your option too but that was too much for me to bear hence I did that with DP and ap instead.

Thank you so much for the kind words I'll be back with a proper reply soon.

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: iamreader
Res.Am I 1st?

Hi Dyuti,

Glad to see you here!😃

Nah, Sanya swooped in before you did😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: suwas
Very nice start of the story. swara has serious condition which may need surgery & Sanskar is surgeon. Looks like he has already fallen for her. Can't wait to read what happens next

I'm glad you think so. Yes, they do have kind of entangled fates. Let's see how the story shapes up. I will update again soon.

Cheers!

Sakura