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Posted: 8 years ago
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<p align="center">Chapter:10</p>

The Episode starts with Swara - Sanskar arrive at the mansion n Dadi
is there with arti and tilak Swara
looks happily around the mansion n Sanskar looks at Swara - Sanskar smile!!
Dadi is doing arti! Dadi asks
Swara - Sanskar to enter and Swara - Sanskar enter. Looking at each other..!!
Sanskar stops...n Dadi says. Why stopped Swara?? Sanskar makes someone get the
ceramic plate for putting footprint


Dadi asks Swara to step forward.
And then Swara knocks the kalash with right Foot!! . (Sanskar self thot...That I
want to imprint every moment with u in my memory. And spend every moment in
that memory..!! ) Swara - Sanskar step on the ceramic plate and their feet's
imprinted!! Dadi asks Sanskar to carry Swara in his arms for another
ritual..!... Dadi asks Swara to immerse hand in sindoor
filled bowl and imprint the hand on the wall...n Swara asks Sanskar to put
her down n Dadi says. It's to be done in hubbys arms..!! Uttara teases Sanskar n
says...now ritual done so put her down... Swara - Sanskar take Dadi blessing...
Uttara ties Swara - Sanskar hand behind n ask them to jump and bite the apple n
winning person will have dominant position in family!! Swara says...I know why
u want me to play so not playing and Sanskar teases Swara that...so u dun want to play means I win...and
Swara says. No way!! Swara - Sanskar keep
staring at each other and moving round and round n after several attempts fail
to bite and Swara ends up on Sanskar shoulder n mostly her lips touch Sanskar cheek...
All stare! The apple comes to a stop between Swara - Sanskar lips..!! Both lost
in staring and Swara takes the bite n Sanskar grins..!! Uttara says so Swara
will rule!!Sanskar grins. Dadi tells Swara from today you are not my daughter only...you
are the daughter in law. And hands over the keys to the house and asks her to
handle it...And relive her! Swara says. What if I'm not able to do it all
properly will u show me the way as my Dadi n Dadi says... Of course..!! Dadi
tells...dun say all sweet words...if u dun do things properly I will be strict
Mother in law and both smile!


In Swara - Sanskar Room


When they opened door. They were shocked... It was
decorated beautifully with flowers and roses for their wedding night.


And on wall there was a decorated card which had Swara Sanskar
written on it.


Sanskar gives Water to Drink As:


Swara turns towards him and takes water. As she sips water.


Sanskar noticed her teary eyes.


Sanskar - Tum ro rahi thi?


Swara - nahi VO Bas


Sanskar - kya Yaar Swara Mujhe Pani Laane mein 2 mins k
late kya Hua tum toh rone hi lagi. Aab tumhare Dad KO pata chalega Ki Maine
tumhe rulaya toh VO toh Mujhe hi maarenge He pouts like child LOL


Suddenly
Swara laughs.


Sanskar adored her laugh.


Sanskar - chalo tum hassi toh... He smiles.


Swara - You are crazy Sanskar. Woh toh Mujhe Bas maa Aur
Dad Ki yaad AA rahi thi isilye ankh bhar ayi.


Sanskar - main samajhta hoon.


Waise bahut raat hogyi hai. Tumhe rest karna chahiye as you
had long Journey


Sanskar: Swara tum
bed pe so jao main couch pe so jaunga. Swara - nahi Sanskar Tum bed pe so jao
main couch pe so jaunge


Sanskar - Swara you are weak tum bed pe hi sleep and that's
final


Swara - but Sanskar...


Sanskar - no but's please


Swara - OK... She smiles.


As she was about to go.


Sanskar called her from behind


Sanskar - Swara


Swara turned


Swara - Haan


Sanskar - maa Aur dad Ki yaad AA rahi hai toh phone par
unse baat karlo. You will feel better. And he says Good Night Swara Sanskar Maheshwari.


Swara: Good Night


Precap: Swara First Rasoi Rasam and Swara - Sanskar Romantic
Eye Lock


Do comment When time Permits





Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Sanskar and swara are friends...
Precap is interesting
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Make it a habit to tell people thank you. To express your appreciation, sincerely and without the expectation of anything in return. Truly appreciate those around you, and you'll soon find many others around you. Truly appreciate life, and you'll find that you have more of it.

Really too good
😳
Waiting for it

Edited by Maaneet457 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
<p align="center">Chapter: 11</p>

New Sun New
Bright Day and New Journey begins For the married Couple Swara wakes up As
someone Knocking the Door She hurried to Open the Door But She Forget to wake
up Sanskar First Before She could do that She Notice Sanskar is already
Sleeping beside her She Felt Relieved and Went to open the Door She Open and
Uttara is There:


Uttara: Good
Morning Sister in Law How is Your Night? I hope Sanskar Bhai did not disturb
you much (She tease her and Says Dadi is waiting for you as Today is Your First
Rasoi Rasam in Our House Do come soon)


Swara: You Go I
will be there in Some Time


Uttara: Come
Soon Sister in Law


Swara and Dadi
are in Kitchen Swara is now Dressed in Beautiful Red Saree with Magalsutra on her neck and Sindoor and
lots of bangles She Started Rolling Some Puris and Says Dadi Please Don't Scold
Me if my Puris do not come Good Dadi Says No I will Not Swara was about to put
Puris in the frying pan but Dad put her arm on her hand stopping her Says Swara
My Child it is Said that If your First Puris Puff Fully than its Auspicious
thing It also Means that You will Be Good Daughter In Law then She looks At
Swara and Says Now Drop Your Puris In Frying Pan Swara Smiles At Dadi and
Slowly Slides the Puris in Hot Oil After
that Her Eyes were Glued to the Pan To See If the Puris Puff Fully Slowly her
Puris is Puff Up Fully bringing Delightful Smile on Swara Face and little
Squeal from Saying Dadi looked Puris Fully Puff Up .. Dadi is Very Happy with
Her She Hold her Face and Dadi Says Oh Be Happy My Child Always... and Don't
Forget to Cook Continental for Sanskar... Swara Says Don't Worry I will take
Care of It


Swara was
serving food by her... Side


Dadi - everyone
eat Kheer Puris first. Then starts Your Day as...Our new Daughter in law had
made it first time for us...


Everyone praise
her food and gives her blessings and Nek


But Swara heart
only wants to listen her husband. She was eagerly waiting for him


Uttara- Sanskar
bhaiya where is your Nek.


Sanskar - wat Nek??
She is my wife...WATS mine is all her also..?? WATS d need of gift then?? If
she wants anything. She can ask...


And he leaves
the table..


Swara feels sad...


Precap: Sanskar-
Says come let me make u wear this...


he makes Swara
sit in bed. He himself sits on his knees. Make her wear anklet. She was looking
her husband lovingly. Her heart filled with joy. and Swara comes to know about Maya and Sanskar Past! What it could be?

please Comment When time permits





Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
First of all Happy New Year😊
then coming to the part..Beautiful update Yasmin..
Loved dadi and swara's bond..swara wants to listen what sanskaar say about her kheer & puris..aww
I probably thought sanskaar will give something to her as nek later and yea he gave her ankle..too good..hope after knowing about sanskaar & Maya's past everything will be shorted out..do update soon..
P.s Never ever talk about leaving forever..u unknowingly gave me a heart attack😭😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Nice update
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
When I received ur pm about leaving I was like whaat! Then after reading ur another pm I felt relieved. But don't scare me again. If u do that surely I will haunt u in ur dreams 😈 😆. I just loved swara and dadi's bonding here. It was really cute. And the breakfast part where sanskar replied casually that there is no gift for swara and swara's face fell, oh my gosh. It was really awesome of him to having given his wife her gift in private. I am extremely sorry for having posted my comment really very late. But I'm really helpless in this case. Coz I have exams from this Thursday. So do not discontinue the story even if my comments are not there. As and when time permits me for coming to forum I will surely reply to ur stories. Update soon.
Love u loads nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Wow...di 👏 it's so brilliant piece 😳 will wait for anklets scene 😛 update sooner


Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
<p align="center">Chapter: 12</p>

Swara Enters... Sanskar Already sitting on bed in night Suit... Popping
his head in his phone she looks at him but he did not give her attention...She
feels more disappointed... she walks towards her Cupboard... She opens Cupboard
to her much amusement she find a gift with a tag... Sorry for delay the
breakfast and food is really tasty... She smiled seeing it... She understood
that Sanskar has placed it here... She opens it finds two beautiful Anklets in
it... Just then Sanskar hugged her from behind...


Sanskar: (whispers in her ear) - here your Nek did you like it??


Swara: yeah very much


Sanskar: Come let me make you wear this...


He makes Swara Sit In Bed... He himself Sit on his knees. Make her wear
anklet... She was looking at her husband lovingly... Her heart filled with Joy...
he sits beside her.


Sanskar: Food is really tasty Especially Okra (Bhindi)


Swara: Are you making Fun of Me? You took only One Bowl of it...I know you
did not like it


Sanskar: Hey...What are you saying? I really I Like it You know I hate
Okra ( Bhindis) Still I ate One Bowl of it I am Sure Dadi and Uttara must be in
Shock till now because of it.


Swara: Really...!! Then why you ate it you could Say no there were other
things also...


Sanskar: (hold her hand) my wife had made it first time for us with so
much love how could I not have it?


Sanskar: Today I want to tell You Something Related to My Past I know you
must be thinking All of Sudden What had happen to me? Why I want to Tell About
my Past and All but Swara the Fact is that Since Many days I have Some Special
Feeling For You I don't know Whether its Love or Just Attractive I don't know
What Are you feeling for me I don't Know But I Know That I am Fallen in Love
with You But before you Could Decide Anything I want to tell You Something
about My Past.


Swara: I want to hear Your Past Go on...




Sanskar_ before we meet in Ludhiana and this marriage There Was One girl
who came to my life before you.


</p>

Sanskar starts his past ...


Sanskar - main pehlae aisae nahin
tha Swara ... main bhi sab ki tarah hi rehta tha ... hanstha tha gaatha tha
muskuraatha tha ... Phir meri zindagi main Maya aayi ...


Swara - Maya...


Sanskar - haan Maya ... yeh tab ki
baat hain jab main Kolkata main rehtha
tha ... hum dono Kolkata main ek business party main milae thae ...
pehlae dosti hui ... phir mujhe laga tha ki mujhae uss sae pyar hogaya tha
... phir dheere dheere wo apni chaal chal
nae lagi aur Uss nae mujhe apnae jaal main iss kadhar ulja liya tha ki main uss
par aankh band kar kae vishwaas karnae laga tha ... wo mera sab kaam dekhthi thi ussnae mujhe
aise bharaosa dilaya ki wo mere bina jee
hi nahin sakhthi mujhe bhi aisa hi laga tha ... Phir achanak ek din Maya nae mujhe dhoka dekhae baag gayi ... ussane
mujhae aisi dhoka diya ki mujhe pata hi nahin chala ki koi Sanskar Maheshwari ko bhi dhokaa dae sakhtha hain ... Mere saath bhi
wohi hua Swara jo tumhare saath hua tha
... uss nae mujhsae pyar ka natak kiya sirf mere paise or property kae liyae ...
Jitna Meri property wo hathiya sakae uthna wo hathiya kae On Day of Engagement
She Ran Away and After Few Days I get to know that She died after being in Coma


Aur uss din kae baad sae main
badal gaya tha ... mujhae auraton sae nafrat si ho gayi thi ... pyar sae ... yaa
pyar sae related sab cheeson sae nafrat ho gayi thi ... phir main apne aap ko
sabsae dur kartha gaya ... Beed main rehkar bhi apnae aap ko akela rakhtha tha
... Hansi, mazak, pyar sabsae dur kar liya tha maine apnae aap ko ... mujhe sabsae
... yeh duniya sae nafrat ho gayi thi ... mujhe bharosae par sae hi bharosa utt
gaya tha ... main jee tho rahan tha par ek pathar ki tharah jee raha tha ... phir
tum aayi meri zindagi main ... Bass yehi meri
kahani hain ... Swara ...(Swara & Sanskar are still holding their hands ...)


Sanskar - Swara ... tum mujhsae naazraz to nahin ho naa ... ki maine tumsae
yeh baat chupaayi hain ... Tumhe mujh par bharosa tho hain naa Swara ...


Swara Eyes Filled with Moist Tears
pressing Sanskar hands with her
hands - Mujhe Tum par poora bharosa hain ... khud sae bhi zyadaa ... Yeh Tum bhi
Jaante Ho ... Aur main yeh bhi janthi hun ki Tum mere saath kabhi galat hone hi
nahin doge


Aur agar main kisi
kae upar aankh band kar kae bhi viswaas kar sakhthi hun naa tho wo Tum ho ... meri zindagi main ... maine Tume jitney ehmiat di hain shayad maine aaj tak kisi aur ko nahin diyan
hain ... aur mere liyae Tum sae badh kar
iss duniya main koi sachayi nahin hain ... meri duniya tho Tum sae shuru hoti hain aur Tum par hi khatam hoti hain ...


Sanskar_ tumhae ek baath batao Swara ... tumsae yeh sab baathen keh kar mera jee
halka hogaya hain ... sach bolu tho ... jo mujhae uss waqt usse hua tha wo pyar tha
hi nahin ... wo bass ek infatuation tha ek attraction tha ... Mohobbat tho mujhe
tumsae hui hain ... Yeh baath main yeh ithna yakeen kae saath kaise bol sakhttha
hun tum yeh soch rahin hongi naa ...


kyun ki jo
ehsaas mujhae tumhae dekh kar hua tha wo ehsaas mere uss waqt kae ehsaas sae
bahut alag thae ... Agar main tumhae ek
pal kae liyae bhi nahin dekhu tho mujhe chain miltha hi nahin hain Swara ... mujhe lagtha tha ki main tumhae apni ankhon
sae kabhi ujall hone hi na du ... hum kithnae bhi jagdae karlae thae thae par
tumhare chehrae par ek bhi aansun dikha tho main sehan nahin kar patha tha ...
Aur agar wo aansun kae kaaran main tha tho main apnae aap ko bhi kabhie maaf
nahin kar patha tha ... muhe har waqt tumhari baathein ... Tumhara bolah pan ...
tumhari saadgi ... Tumhari sachayi ... Tumhari harkatein ... tumhari hansi sab yaad
aathe thae jab tum mere saath nahin
hothi thi ... yeh sab mehsoos karnae kae baad bhi ... main apnae aap ko jithna rok
saktha tha uthna rok liyaa tha ... par phir main apnae yeh andhar ki ladai saae
haar gaya aur phir main apnae aap sae ladna band karkae yehi samajh liya hain ki
mujhe tumsae mohobbat ho gayi hain ... aur yeh sachayi maine sweekar kar liya hain
...


... Aur yehin nahin main tumhare pyar main keecha chala gaya ... iss kadar
chala gaya ki ... Meri aisi halat ho gayi hain ki ab main tumhare bina jee hi
nahin sakhtha ... I Can't Live without You Swara .. I Love You So much


Swara Hugged Sanskar Tight and Says Main Tumhare bina jee nahin sakhti ... main bhi Tum sae uthna hi pyar Sanskar using his sensuous voice & coming closer 2 Swara.Sanskar uthna hi kya Swara ... bolo naa ...
bolo ... Mujhe aur kithna tadpa ogee ... ab tho batha do


Precap: Sanskar hugs Swara... Swara has her arms crises crossed on Sanskar
shoulders & her eyes closed ... Their hug is turning in to a passionate
& tight hug


Sanskar lips are now brushing over Swara shoulder slowly &
passionately moving next to her neck ...






<p>
some one stalking swara from behind who is he?
Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update... ..
Love confession of swasan was beautiful..
The precap is interesting
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Please pm me

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