The Maheshwari House Murders-Chap 6 PG 50, 26/12/16

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res Viji. 😳
Unresed darling siso. 😃
Wooohooo!! So CBI officer Swara Bose unwilling falls in love with one of the prime the murder suspect of the Maheshwari house, Sanskar Singh Kachwaha aka SK. 😉 The synopsis and character sketch were superb! 👏 But who is the victim?? I mean who is the one murdered?? 😕 Update soon. 😳 And don't worry about Games People Play, will eagerly wait for it. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

My Dearest Aheli 🤗🤗

I am just so thrilled to know that you loved the background to the characters and the synopsis. And really touched by your warm words about the characterization of SwaSan. Yup, Major SK it is, here. Sanskaar Singh Kachwaha . ...😉

And Swara is a highly skilled and reputed CBI officer her, expert at investigations and outwitting hardened criminals. I SO wanted to give her a solid background for all the investigations she undertakes in such a hare brained manner in the serial. 😉

Lots of Love

Viji

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luana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Viji dear😊

really wasn't in a mood to read anything but then saw ur pm...a new story from u...yayay..The maheshwari house murders..loved the title..well The maheshwari house kidnapper's also have siuted them ;)..swara a qualified CBI officer..i really wanted her to be that and u made it..

the compendium and character sketch was awesome..i never read any story like this b4..ur every fics made me delighted..looking forward to know more :)

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elsanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

😆 😉 I am trying to not reveal too much. There will be some hints/ clues in Chapter 1 and onwards. But some of them might be misleading clues/ red herrings as well. 😳 😆

Di...😭 mera chotu sa to dimag hai...jo kabhi bhi kaam nai karta hai uspe aap misleading clues doge to mera kya hoga... aaannn😭😭

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: elsanna

Di...😭 mera chotu sa to dimag hai...jo kabhi bhi kaam nai karta hai uspe aap misleading clues doge to mera kya hoga... aaannn😭😭

Acha Baba I will give mostly genuine clues only. 😉 Just a few red herrings here and there...just to maintain the suspense. I am aiming to throw suspicion on 2 people at least if not 3

...else what's the fun no? 😉 😛 😈

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: luana
Viji dear😊
really wasn't in a mood to read anything but then saw ur pm...a new story from u...yayay..The maheshwari house murders..loved the title..well The maheshwari house kidnapper's also have siuted them ;)..swara a qualified CBI officer..i really wanted her to be that and u made it..
the compendium and character sketch was awesome..i never read any story like this b4..ur every fics made me delighted..looking forward to know more :)

Hey Ramisa 🤗

So happy to know that you loved the theme, synopsis and character background. Yup, I wanted to make Swara a qualified and expert CBI officer here. 😊 She does have the background and expertise for her investigation and enquiry mode here. 😉

Thanks for your warm and motivating words. I will be back with Chapter 1 within this work week.

Cheers

Viji

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

My current new job stare at my screen till i go blank...I read all of the recent lovely works that was posted this weekend and deciding whom to torture with my comment is taking an toll on me..😆..But then i thought let Viji bear the brunt of it this time..So here you go

How does your brain comes up with amazing ideas as such..Each tale of yours always manage to make me fall in love with SwaSan even before i get to know them..I need not say how much i look forward to read this one..And Sanskar the businessman does get to have all kinds of career, in our writing world, Tennis player, Major ,Assassin and Writer as well... That interesting😆..But more importantly Swara finally get to act on her calling..I keep saying it on the show.She deserves to be an detective..

As always cant wait to read the first chapter ..

Love

Nita

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: NitaReid

My current new job stare at my screen till i go blank...I read all of the recent lovely works that was posted this weekend and deciding whom to torture with my comment is taking an toll on me..😆..But then i thought let Viji bear the brunt of it this time..So here you go

How does your brain comes up with amazing ideas as such..Each tale of yours always manage to make me fall in love with SwaSan even before i get to know them..I need not say how much i look forward to read this one..And Sanskar the businessman does get to have all kinds of career, in our writing world, Tennis player, Major ,Assassin and Writer as well... That interesting😆..But more importantly Swara finally get to act on her calling..I keep saying it on the show.She deserves to be an detective..

As always cant wait to read the first chapter ..

Love

Nita

Nita dear 🤗🤗

I always look forward to and cherish your comments. So if this is what you call torture, bring it on please. 😉😳

I am so thrilled to know that you loved this theme and the synopsis. And your warm words about the character background and profile really made me feel very touched.

Sunny in our fics on the forum...so much textured depth and layers na? He really is such a compelling and fascinating character, so many facets and edges to his nature. 😊 You're right, he's a successful entrepreneur, writer, nature/landscapes photographer, Assassin, tennis player and Army Major in various of our fics here. 😉😳

And I SO wanted to give Swara a background and skill in this fic, for the investigations and enquiries which she always undertakes in the serial. 😆😉 So she is an expert CBI officer here. 😊

Loads of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Hi Guys 🤗🤗

Trust I have replied to all of your lovely comments. Am hard at work now on Chapter 1. There is quite some ground to cover, I hope to have it up by day after (Thursday).

Really touched by all your words of warmth and motivation. 🤗❤️

Lots of Love

Viji