The Maheshwari House Murders-Chap 6 PG 50, 26/12/16

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: SwathyS
omg such a fantastic setting for a story dear
waiting to read
and u like my rafa 🤗 wow

Hey Swathy 🤗

So happy to see you on this thread, and very glad that you liked the setting.

Oh yes, I am a huge fan of both Nadal and Djokovic. 😊 But sadly...Murray won the ATP World Tour Finals yesterday 😭😭

Hope to update chapter 1 within this work week, by Wednesday or Thursday .

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Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: soumya04
my swara baby is detective🥳first time odd nahi lagega swara ki detectivegiri dekhne me, thanks to you😃 story seems very interesting, update soon😊

Hey Soumya 🤗🤗

Yeah, that was my idea for starting this SS...that Swara should have a proper background and qualification for her numerous enquiries. 😆😉 I will make her a sharp CBI officer here, as best as I can. 😊 Planning to update chapter 1 by Wednesday or Thursday this week...all going well.

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Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: showrav24
oh nice dear new story best of luck dear loved to read a army men & investigation officer love story.
loved ur introduction space something like that also my feeling about the show.
ooo movie date ha nice enjoy or hope u enjoyed very much.
update soon dearest.
Bye

Hello Showrav...🤗

Movie was fun...had gone to see 'Fantastic Beasts and where to find them '. 😊

So happy to know you loved the theme and the background for the characters. And glad that you found the synopsis of interest.

Will update within this work week.

Cheers

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

My Dearest Khushi, Talia and Nivi 🤗🤗🤗

I am so thrilled that you loved this theme, character background and synopsis, my dears. 😳 ☺️ You really made the Sunday night and Monday morning so very special for me. 😳

I shall reply in detail, the soonest I can. Catching up with some work commitments today and a few pending Un Res's I have as well. Please bear with me---but in the meantime, your warm words have made me feel so very touched and motivated. 🤗

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: StarySKY
Dear Viji .. 🤗

Actually I am same as you .. I want Djokovic to win the ATP world tour finals today ..
Murray is like Sahil Sengupta .. 🤣
I like this .. 😆

Comming to the story .. The Maheshwari House Murders ..

Swara is a CBI .. it really fits her
You know my friends call her [ The Female Version of the Detective Conan ] i.e the character of the famous Japanese Anime ..😆

Sanskar aka SK .. just wow ..

I am wondering who is going to die in the Maheshwari house ?!!

I love this type of concept .. I am really excited for it ..

Love
Khushi

Hey Khushi 🤗

Unfortunately, Murray beat Djokovic yesterday, as you would have heard. 😭 🤢 I am pretty much heartbroken. 😕 Chalo, will hope Djoko (and Rafa) bounce back in 2017. 😊

I am so immensely touched to know that you loved this theme and the synposis of the SS. I shall do my best to make it as suspenseful as I can. 😉 Though there will be some clues pointing towards the culprit from Chapter 1 onwards, I certainly would be putting in as many red herrings and fake clues as I can. 😆

Am very thrilled that you would be coming along for this journey. I can't tell you who will be bumped off yet. Just that there will be 3 murders in the plot...and possibly one or a couple more attempts to murder as well. Let's see.

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Viji...darling...
You just amaze me everytime..i was still under the feel of your stories..and u presented this ..i was shocked...im trying to decipher how your mind works n manages such an incredible work...here also you did extensive job in research..never i imagine we could get a murder mystery on swasan...but we got...you know how to shock us n keep us at the edge of seat...synopsis is splendid..quite deep...im fully curious...characters are fascinating...wondering who died??? Quite excited...

Still got two majir stories of yours to unreserve..pardon me for that...will get to that soon...love u...looking forward gor this thrilling n suspenseful journey...muahhh..waiting..

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Talia

Hey Talia 🤗🤗

So very touched by the vote of confidence, my dear. 😊 😳 I am literally feeling on top of the world, and immensely humbled and blessed too, by your very warm words of appreciation and motivation.

I wanted to try something out of the box here, an interaction between SwaSan which is completely AU from the serial canon. Will do my utmost to do justice to it, hope I can make it as suspenseful and thrilling as I can. 😳

Really glad you loved the synopsis and the character background sketch. And though this is my first attempt at a murder mystery set around SwaSan, I have written a thriller/ mystery 3S before. It was titled 'Old Sins cast Long Shadows'. I don't know if you have read it, if not, do catch up with it from my Index, whenever you have time.

And Talia dear----please, please don't worry about Un resing and detailed comments or whatever. I just want my pals to read whenever convenient to them, that's it. Let me know what you thought if and when time permits, there is no rush or pressure whatsoever. And whether it is 20 words or 200 or 1000---feedback from pals always means a lot to me. So please don't stress yourself.

Love ya Loads, 🤗

-----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Nivijo
The synopsis is really amazing, viji. And quite scary too. I have never expected that there would be crime thrill on swasan. But after seeing and reading it, I just felt glad that I was wrong in not expecting a crime based story for swasan. Swara is CBI officer, good. Now her all missions will be perfect 😆.I really want to know how love is going to blossom between a CBI officer and retired army officer 😉😳.
Who was dead it the maheshwari mansion. Kaash wo ap ho jaye. I just hate that biased lady to the core 😡. But I leave the decision to u. Why do I get vibes that ragini is behind all the death drama.

And I'm really very apologetic. I know u will not accept it but the guilt of not unressing is just eating me alive. But once my unit exams get over, I would surely try my best to Unres. So I do hope that u would not be displeased with me for the late Unres.
Update soon. 🤗 for the pm.
Love u loads
Nivi

Nivi my dear 🤗🤗

First off yaar, please don't be apologetic or guilty or whatever regarding pending Un res's and comments. Its all cool. Real life pressures, study, family and work commitments come first, please attend to those. As I always say, I'm just very glad my pals read when convenient to them. Comment if and when time permits, yaar; there is no pressure or rush. You've let me know that you enjoyed reading my fics, and that itself means a lot.

I am excited and a bit nervous about this murder/crime thriller I'm attempting as well. Hope I manage to do it justice, will do utmost to. 😊 I am so thrilled to know that you loved the setting and the synopsis. If this genre is of interest to you, I had written a SwaSan 3S a year back, called 'Old Sins cast Long shadows'. It was a thriller, not a crime/murder one, but a suspense/ mystery thriller. You could read it when time permits, if you haven't yet. Its on my Index, Link to my index is on my siggy as you know.

Regarding Swara being a CBI officer here---yes, I really wanted to write her actually having the background, skills and the qualifications for her enquiries/ investigations in one of my fics. In the serial, she just takes up one investigative mission after another, at least here I wanted to give a logical background for that. 😆 😉 I am also really feeling excited about writing the romance between retired Major SK of the Rajputana Rifles and CBI officer Swara Bose. 😉 😳 A lot of sparks are going to fly. 😉

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Res Viji. 😳
Unresed darling siso. 😃
Wooohooo!! So CBI officer Swara Bose unwilling falls in love with one of the prime the murder suspect of the Maheshwari house, Sanskar Singh Kachwaha aka SK. 😉 The synopsis and character sketch were superb! 👏 But who is the victim?? I mean who is the one murdered?? 😕 Update soon. 😳 And don't worry about Games People Play, will eagerly wait for it. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Hey Khushi 🤗

Unfortunately, Murray beat Djokovic yesterday, as you would have heard. 😭 🤢 I am pretty much heartbroken. 😕 Chalo, will hope Djoko (and Rafa) bounce back in 2017. 😊

I am so immensely touched to know that you loved this theme and the synposis of the SS. I shall do my best to make it as suspenseful as I can. 😉 Though there will be some clues pointing towards the culprit from Chapter 1 onwards, I certainly would be putting in as many red herrings and fake clues as I can. 😆

Am very thrilled that you would be coming along for this journey. I can't tell you who will be bumped off yet. Just that there will be 3 murders in the plot...and possibly one or a couple more attempts to murder as well. Let's see.

Loads of Love,

----Viji

Hey Viji .. 🤗

Yeah I watched yesterday Match and Murray did beat Djokovic ..😭

congratulations for Murray if he win it means he desarve it .. though I want Djokovic to win ..

Hopefully he will come back in 2017 and so Nadal .. these too are my favourite .. 😊

Oh .. you don't know how much I love mystery ..

I LOVE MYSTERY .. 😃😉

I read all Agatha Christie's novels , Sherlock Holmes , Dan Brown's ..etc ( I really can't remember how many 😆 )

Not to forget The movies and the serials I watched ..

You know I can go crazy cause of my excitement .. ( did you see my comments on Nita FF BTM .. ?!! 😆😆 )

Count Me in .. I am very much excited for this story ..

Maybe I would go crazy in finding who is the crulpit 😆

Love

Khushi

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Hey Viji .. 🤗

Yeah I watched yesterday Match and Murray did beat Djokovic ..😭
congratulations for Murray if he win it means he desarve it .. though I want Djokovic to win ..
Hopefully he will come back in 2017 and so Nadal .. these too are my favourite .. 😊

Oh .. you don't know how much I love mystery ..
I LOVE MYSTERY .. 😃😉
I read all Agatha Christie's novels , Sherlock Holmes , Dan Brown's ..etc ( I really can't remember how many 😆 )
Not to forget The movies and the serials I watched ..
You know I can go crazy cause of my excitement .. ( did you see my comments on Nita FF BTM .. ?!! 😆😆 )

Count Me in .. I am very much excited for this story ..
Maybe I would go crazy in finding who is the crulpit 😆

Love
Khushi

My Dearest Khushi 🤗

I am a huge fan of Agatha Christie, Sidney Sheldon, Georgette Heyer, Erle Stanley Gardener and Arthur Conan Doyle as well. 😊 Am going to enjoy myself writing this plot, keeping my fingers crossed that I can do justice to it.

Working hard on chapter 1 now. 😊

Lots of Love

Viji

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