The Maheshwari House Murders-Chap 6 PG 50, 26/12/16

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Dear Viji .. 🤗

I just finished all the 6 chapters of your story " The Maheshwari House Murders " ..

I am so sorry for the very delay feedback ..

I loved it and I really enjoyed it very much I felt like I am reading some of Agatha Christie's novels ..

The whole atmosphere is similar to her novel " A Murder Is Announced " .. my favourite one .. well that how I felt ..

To my bad luck .. I missed all the fun in guess and analysing the story and the murderer .. thanks to my WiFi .. 🤢

I was sure it was Ragini since what Uttara words .. " she wasn't there that morning " .. I knew it was Ragini ..

At first I thought SK and Lucky are Twins .. then Later I thought about the babies been exchanged ..

Well I think I got it right .. but I am very much late .. 🤢

I loved SwaSan senses in the story ..

The one in the restaurant .. the way he hold her hand ..

I agree with Sanskar .. " Angels And Demons " is my favorite for Dan Brown , then " Inferno " then " The Da Vinci Code " .. " The Lost Symbol " is my least favourite ..

The scene when Swara told him the truth .. is my favorite ..

The way she comforted him and all the things ..

And their plan to make Ragini expose herself .. the way they support each other all along ..

And The end I felt pity .. for Lucky and Ragini too ..

Love is not the same for everyone , Love can be very strange ..

And The matter about SK and Lucky families .. I think your Family is the one whom you belong all along , realtionships can't be measured by blood .. but by heart and love ..

SK will always be a Kachwaha and Lucky will always be a Maheshwari ..

That what I think ..

Waiting for the last chapter ..

I loved loved your story .. another masterpiece of yours .. 👏

Love

Khushi

Edited by StarySKY - 8 years ago