The Maheshwari House Murders-Chap 6 PG 50, 26/12/16

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: lucky.m
God viji ...
So it's all set .. I am so excited for this genre..very intriguing and it got me all hooked..I love suspense thrillers ..and SK..uff..you make him tennis star then army general...I am sure screens will ablaze when SK meets swara ..and rest of character sketch👏👏

I always love solid background u give for characters ...so already 3 murders ...tick tick tick...can't wait but waiting ..

Awesome start ..😉⭐️ already in love

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Lucky

Lucky 🤗

So very touched by your lovely words. Am really happy to know you loved the character backgrounds and the synopsis. SK as an Army Major...dreamy no? 😉😳 He certainly has a strong role in this fic as I envision it, hope I can do it the requisite justice. Sparks are due to fly between SK and CBI officer Bose...after all he would be one of her prime suspects in the case initially. 😉 You will see why...😉

Am really over the moon to know that you are excited about this fic. Yup...there will be 3 murders...and perhaps an attempt or 2 more which might not succeed.😉

Lots of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Sanya17
Wow I am loving this new story of yours I always love stories with crime genre and suspense thriller type story
Sanskar being murder suspect that's something new and he was on army

Swara works with CBI her job is finding criminals at least here her plans would be perfect

Though from what is mentioned by now dp and laksh looks positive but still I can't throw out the negative feeling they gave me and dp being politician is making the feeling more strong actually ever since swaragini began dp gave me negative feeling and it went strong with some of the amazing stories I read in the forum where dp was villain

By the way for some reason durgaprasad suits as powerful politician

I am loving this story so much and don't worry take your time on games people play

Bad news is swaragini indeed seems to be going off air it seems like the show won't be able to make it till the new year I never thought it would be so soon what will happen to the forum after the show gets off air people will be leaving the forum and the plans of story memories of midnight what's gonna happen to all that I am feeling more sad and worried about the forum and what will happen to all the ongoing stories if people leave the forum after the end of the show 😭

Hey Sanya 🤗

Really very happy to know that you liked the characters background and the synopsis. Feel very glad that you are coming along for this journey. I will do my best to make it as interesting and suspenseful as possible. 😊😳

Regarding the show ending...yeah, I'm feeling bad too. But I do plan to wrap up all the fics I have started and have planned. There are a few forums which are very active, though the serials have long ended. I hope we can also keep SwaRagini forum very active and robust, even after December. Hoping for the best. 😊

Lots of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting..

Thanks a lot. 😊 😳

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StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Dear Viji .. 🤗

Actually I am same as you .. I want Djokovic to win the ATP world tour finals today ..

Murray is like Sahil Sengupta .. 🤣

I like this .. 😆

Comming to the story .. The Maheshwari House Murders ..

Swara is a CBI .. it really fits her

You know my friends call her [ The Female Version of the Detective Conan ] i.e the character of the famous Japanese Anime ..😆

Sanskar aka SK .. just wow ..

I am wondering who is going to die in the Maheshwari house ?!!

I love this type of concept .. I am really excited for it ..

Love

Khushi

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Viji...darling...

You just amaze me everytime..i was still under the feel of your stories..and u presented this ..i was shocked...im trying to decipher how your mind works n manages such an incredible work...here also you did extensive job in research..never i imagine we could get a murder mystery on swasan...but we got...you know how to shock us n keep us at the edge of seat...synopsis is splendid..quite deep...im fully curious...characters are fascinating...wondering who died??? Quite excited...

Still got two majir stories of yours to unreserve..pardon me for that...will get to that soon...love u...looking forward gor this thrilling n suspenseful journey...muahhh..waiting..

Love

Talia

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Nivedita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

The synopsis is really amazing, viji. And quite scary too. I have never expected that there would be crime thrill on swasan. But after seeing and reading it, I just felt glad that I was wrong in not expecting a crime based story for swasan. Swara is CBI officer, good. Now her all missions will be perfect 😆.I really want to know how love is going to blossom between a CBI officer and retired army officer 😉😳.

Who was dead it the maheshwari mansion. Kaash wo ap ho jaye. I just hate that biased lady to the core 😡. But I leave the decision to u. Why do I get vibes that ragini is behind all the death drama.

And I'm really very apologetic. I know u will not accept it but the guilt of not unressing is just eating me alive. But once my unit exams get over, I would surely try my best to Unres. So I do hope that u would not be displeased with me for the late Unres.

Update soon. 🤗 for the pm.

Love u loads

Nivi

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Swathy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

omg such a fantastic setting for a story dear
waiting to read
and u like my rafa 🤗 wow

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1005068

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

my swara baby is detective🥳first time odd nahi lagega swara ki detectivegiri dekhne me, thanks to you😃 story seems very interesting, update soon😊

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

oh nice dear new story best of luck dear loved to read a army men & investigation officer love story.
loved ur introduction space something like that also my feeling about the show.
ooo movie date ha nice enjoy or hope u enjoyed very much.
update soon dearest.
Bye