Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71) - Page 27

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik

Hey dyuti dii...
Kemni aacho????
The update was fantastic puro fatafati bepar .. ...
Sanskar is crying ...noo plzz save swara...I cannot see sanskar so vulnerable...
Laksh is an a** felt like kicking him straight out of this world...
Crazy ba****d...idiot...
AK is quite supportive to his friend sunny...
Aww loved their friendship and supporting nature...
Overall beautiful...
Love,
Moumita...

Hi Mou baccha! 😊
Valo achhi. Ar tumi?

Replying in an unusual time. Just had a night bus journey. I updated less than 2 hours before the trip. Still did it as you all were waiting for it and I can't expect to write anything for next 7 days.

About the update , well I myself wanted to murder Laksh while writing. We all fell for vulnerable Sanskar right? Sunny -AK
(Sayaz) will make you happy, I can assure.

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting.

Hello dear! 😊

Originally posted by: .Avengers.

LMAO. OK the draft was not about SwaSan but FL was Riya Mukherjee😆😆I did post once a story- zero research and very elaborate. Bas namka SwaSan it was it had all characters except them😆stopped updating cause off screen+ lost interest in show. Perks of being too stalkerish in Twitter/Insta.

Nynna belongs to the Amazing writer group I have named, members are nynna saku and viji cause only these three I read😆I read 1st chapter of FM, still the updates PM are unread *sorry N, will read pakka*. You don't seem amateur. I guess poetry gives one that depth and maturity. I was never into poems, it's not for me.

Na na I do that too. If we writers don't think like characters we can't write how they will react/talk in a specific situation.

Ooh coming to update *crude cursing alert*

LAKSHYA YOU MOTHERf**kER🤬🤢😡

Oh god I myself want to strangle his f**king throat argh! Kiss my foot! And Ragini go please jump off a cliff. Not only you are one horrible person who don't see anything except Lakshya but you are too coward to stay in same room when your love of life trying to bed another unwilling girl. Will ruin the precious image in your imaginary world, will it?🥱Seriously f**k canon, Swara shouldn't forgive her. Even if she's sobbing pleading. I hated that forgiving mother Teresa side of her in show who turned blind to every horrible thing she ever did. Did Lucky shot Swara or someone from.Wolf gang during commotion? And how come Sanky arrived so fast? How far lucky set the camp from SwaSan village house? I am in love with Ayaz❤️that danda in Rags head you go boy🥳👏😆hopefully she will get her sanity back? Do I want her to? Maybe she should die/go to jail with lucky so that he realizes how devoted she is to him.

Next SwaSan hurt comfort scene. I am a sucker for protective Sanskaarupdate soon. And a Happy New Year🤗

Dearest Ri,

At least you're that awesome to imagine yourself as a lead 😉 ! Haha I can't ever imagine myself like that... 😃 About offscreen yes I'm a stalker too but don't let any rubbish to effect myself... Yes Nynu , Saku, Viji they are amazing. Did you read Angel by Nimmi(Banjaaran)? If not then don't miss it. Also Lucky, Nita they're really good writer. And how can I forget Shruti? Her Dark Knight is going to be published!

Coming to the story, well you are allowed to curse freely. It would mean I'm successful to make you hate them enough. I just fear that Raglak fans (if anyone actually dare to read it as I specified it as Swasan FF) will sharpen their knife for me! 😛 Swara is not mahan, she has her doctor's oath in built so she treated Rags earlier for sake of humanity. And Laksh. .. it's only for Sanskar...

About Sanskar reaching there well, Lucky had tracking device inside him which Sanskar's team tracked and sent the location. They were not in the main camp. Just a cave in the forest. Not too far from village.

Do you feel one danda( oops revolver butt) will set any of them right!Naaah! You're going to love Ayaz more! I've some scenes in my imagination already. And yes I love our Protective Sunny boy 😳 ! Remember when Swara fell in the river with Rajat!

I don't love poetry usually. It was just teenage emotions you know? And I'm still very much amatear, just trying to improve myself that's it

Originally posted by: kriti_atharv

omg that was amazing...Ragini is and will always be weak...just because of her jealousy, she left Swara in d hands of d devil...but wow Sanskaar came to save her...he should have killed Laksh...he just could not see his Swara in that condition...ahhh Swara was not willing to part with the mangalsutra...hehehehhehe...oh my...Swara is shot and Sanskaar is crying...I cannot bear to see Sanskaar cry...well if anybody had any doubts bout SwaSan feelings...its all cleared up now...they are both very much in love with each other and would do anything for each other...loved this update very much hun...thnx fr d pm!!

Sanskar would have killed, but Swara stopped him with her emotional talks .Yes they're very much in love, just need to confess openly. Sorry my reply is short. But would give you longer reply.next time! PAKKA!

Dear dyuti,

Dyuti 😛

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Dear dyuti,

Amazing update dear.. I loved it.. Sanskaar being all protective is so good to read and AK Sanskaar friend is nice addition.. I liked him.. Laksh I am not going to talk about the idiot here.. How dare he try to hurt Swara.. And ragini well her revolves around him so she won't see anything beyond him.. I loved how Swara adamantly picked up the broken wedding chain.. Such small moments make my so happy and wow she is shot.. If Sanskaar was shot Swara would save him but Swara is shot well that tough.. But hope Sanskaar associates can help her.. Can't wait to read the next update.. And I loved this one..

Lovs

Nita

Nita dear,

At last you read all the chapters! I love Sanskar's protective shades. I'm all in for strong FL... but don't mind knights in shining armours. 😳 Laksh physically inflicted her some pain actually so you all can attack him! And Ragini is actually weaker and captured in front of Laksh. She can't oppose him ( as she didn't want to be in his bad books) neither can tolerate to see another girl in his arms... Though Swara was being forced upon.

Every small moments in their story have their own part to reach to their destination. AK is going to be a key instrument to play in the upcoming days.

This FF was never meant to be smooth, but will try to portray few tender, sweet, happy moments.I hope you'll like the next chapters too and ignore the not so good chapters in the process.

Loved your review. 😃

-Dyuti

Originally posted by: sandhiya_1195

Dyuti😛

Happy New year !!!

Blockbuster update -intriguing, emotional & lovely😳

Dear Sandy,
Happly new year to you too, Girl!

Thanks a lot for those amazing praises! Feeling kinda embarrassed and blushing you know?! 😳

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Loved it

Hi Swetha! 😊

Originally posted by: iamreader

Dearest Ri,

At least you're that awesome to imagine yourself as a lead 😉 ! Haha I can't ever imagine myself like that... 😃 About offscreen yes I'm a stalker too but don't let any rubbish to effect myself... Yes Nynu , Saku, Viji they are amazing. Did you read Angel by Nimmi(Banjaaran)? If not then don't miss it. Also Lucky, Nita they're really good writer. And how can I forget Shruti? Her Dark Knight is going to be published!

Coming to the story, well you are allowed to curse freely. It would mean I'm successful to make you hate them enough. I just fear that Raglak fans (if anyone actually dare to read it as I specified it as Swasan FF) will sharpen their knife for me! 😛 Swara is not mahan, she has her doctor's oath in built so she treated Rags earlier for sake of humanity. And Laksh. .. it's only for Sanskar...

About Sanskar reaching there well, Lucky had tracking device inside him which Sanskar's team tracked and sent the location. They were not in the main camp. Just a cave in the forest. Not too far from village.

Do you feel one danda( oops revolver butt) will set any of them right!Naaah! You're going to love Ayaz more! I've some scenes in my imagination already. And yes I love our Protective Sunny boy 😳 ! Remember when Swara fell in the river with Rajat!

I don't love poetry usually. It was just teenage emotions you know? And I'm still very much amatear, just trying to improve myself that's it