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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iamreader



Hi dear,
Thanks and welcome here! 😊
May I know your name? (I loved Asya too... ahh those Kabhi days! )

Love,
Dyuti


Hi I am Neha. Thanks 4 da welcome...miss asya too😆. Right now I read Asya ff called Mohabbatein https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4712086/asya-ff-mohabbatein-part-18-updated-pg-140-20-12-16 ⭐️

Try If you have time its awesome.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Asyalover


Hi I am Neha. Thanks 4 da welcome...miss asya too😆. Right now I read Asya ff called Mohabbatein https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4712086/asya-ff-mohabbatein-part-18-updated-pg-140-20-12-16 ⭐️

Try If you have time its awesome.



Dear Neha,
It's been years since Asya na? I always found QH1 the best among 3 until Tanu(If I can recall properly) overdose started.

Right now I've so many things in my hands (like above 20 new books for reading, family tour,job, my FF, SwaSan FFs by others I'm currently following.Don't know when I can reach for the next things added to my bucket list... If I ever can I'll surely try the FF you recommended.

Anyways this is SR forum and I should show my undying love for Swasan here!

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iamreader



Haha, I guess we all go through that phase ( high/ sleep deprived )! I like GC and feel his talent is being wasted. He could do some really good shows instead of doing those crap movies. Pardes I watched for some days but didn't continue foe long as I don't like melodrama that much. BTW the guy playing Veer is hot! 😳 Haha, We Bengalis are amazing but sometimes get pretty annoying too! 😊 Oh I'm talking about cricketers from my teen days... You know Shane Bond from NZ? He topped my never ending crush list. Even my mom knew and taunt d me when my marks were a bit less... and singers from English Band.

And Jizz? Who cares? Though we're pretty cool about each other's celeb crushes... It's like dekho no joto chao. ..sei to amar kachhei asa lagbe! 😉

What do you find most attractive thing in a guy or actor? In my case it's smile and expressions though eyes. These days my top crushes are VK and Shaheer Sheikh!

I think you would be younger than me. I'll be 28 this June. And you (if you feel comfortable to let know!)

Love,
Dyuti

ikr! Ramayana was critically acclaimed and Geet was super hit. Technically he should go upward but he went to movies and🤢 Barun did same mistakes. Sushant was very smart in this regard, waited for right movie instead jumping I whatever came to them. Whatever you say, Gul knew how to cast correct people who has solid chemistry together. Asya were sizzling, just like maaneet and ArShi.
Yep veer is cute. Didn't watch it, follow it through IF like many other shows😆 when pardesh came I was like yayy drashti has a new haircut, then phusss. Serious this girl looks same in all show. Shane bond was very handsome. Lol true that😆😆 jekhanei Dekho sese to Amar kachei Aste hobe. English which band? Recently I am obsessed with Coldplay. They maybe over and past their prime time but their songs ugh, the feels.

Mostly I see if the guy is handsome, then if he can act well. I have stopped going overboard now, but there was a time I was crazy about Ian/Damon from vampire diaries. He made this whole bad boy with sarcastic tongue thing so catchy. I tend to lean toward broody bad boy but not jerk. Chivalry maybe dead but not to me, the guy needs to respect girls. And curse a lot😆 I like VK from humse hai life, it used to come on Channel V. It's mostly couple for me, they should click. Have a story which makes me swoon and curse like damn, we ain't getting a guy/love story like that!

I am 21. But I am not calling you Didi.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dyuti...
Awesome update yrr...loved it...curious for next...

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Dyuti,
Finally managed to sneak time to re read the whole update, I could not resist keeping it, I had to read the moment you updated though I could not reply till now.

First - the lines on inferno - very very apt and suitable - it was an inferno - an eternal fire and burn for all the four of them - though for very different reasons.

Ragini - I did have some measure of sympathy for her but now it is abject pity - destiny gave her a chance to turn her life around but then she simply choose to squander it - no amount of reasoning or rationale will justify her act. As Dante Aligheri said -" the hottest places in Hell are reserved for those who maintain their neutrality in times of great moral crises" There is no redemption for Ragini, is there?

Laksh - Okay, even as a villain belonging to the group known as Black Wolves, whose motto is to simply ensure no joy exists, I hoped he would not descend to being a base male homosapien. Alas, rejection and insecurity do bring out the beast in most of us, and Laksh is no exception. He does not even deserve disgust, his intent and actions were deplorable, to say the least. I am sure even the fires of hell do not deserves lost souls such as him.

Swara - This girl has spunk and presence of mind too - that observation about the quirks of fate - destiny does have its own idea as to how to make us rethink our priorities. Swara at one point hated Sanskaar for putting the mission first, today she asks him to do that and also willing takes a bullet meant for him so that he is successful. Though I think her heart was also quite a willing partner.

Sanskaar - His is the wrath of a right man who has been wronged - a favourite phrase of mine- he is blinded by righteous rage. It again proves what a formidable man he must be, who could summon the steeliest resolve and cease from killing Laksh, because Swara asked him to desist. At the very next instant he is a charmer, could not resist teasing Swara.

I simply love the action and emotional balance you maintain - even the romance does not seem out of place. And as usual another cliff hanger- Swara has to survive but still, I cannot wait to know what happens next. Do update quickly.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Dyuti :)
Finally got some time & read all the updates in 1 go! It's amazing & I'm all hooked!
I love SwaSan & I love thriller/spy stuffs! And your writing skills is too good! Loved the balance of practical essence!
Loved SwaSan journey till now - their friendship, fights, little nok-jhoks, gradual feelings!
Loved their characters as well...
Liked all the little got to know about Sargam, Shomi, Ram, Sujata & Vivek! Hope to get them in future!
Liked Dr. Abhinash Bt felt bad for his death!
Ohh how much I loathe Laksh! Want to kill him with my bare hands! I like dangerous villains & Laksh was 1 which is different from the show where Laksh was such an impulsive fool. This was a refreshing change but I so hate when someone try to force people! Disgusting!
Liked Ragini as well till her unnecessary jealousy with Swara even when she realized how pure hearted Swara is! And I hate her for leaving Swara on Laksh's filthy hands, being a girl she didn't do anything!
Bt Sanskaar saved his Swara from that moron! I'm sure Swara will be fine! This bullet was necessary for their love realization & confession, I guess!
Lets see how our Sunny & Shona going to confess!
Dyuti, really enjoyed reading your story! And waiting for next update! Update soon...
Btw you are from Bangladesh right? Me too from Bangladesh :)
Loads of love & hugs <3
Nupur
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Dyuti...

Awesome update yrr...loved it...curious for next...

Talia



Dear Talia,

Glad that you found it awesome. Well you've to stay curious for at least a week or so... Don't kill me! 😉

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Dear Dyuti,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Finally managed to sneak time to re read the whole update, I could not resist keeping it, I had to read the moment you updated though I could not reply till now.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">First - the lines on inferno - very very apt and suitable - it was an inferno - an eternal fire and burn for all the four of them - though for very different reasons.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Ragini - I did have some measure of sympathy for her but now it is abject pity - destiny gave her a chance to turn her life around but then she simply choose to squander it - no amount of reasoning or rationale will justify her act. As Dante Aligheri said -" the hottest places in Hell are reserved for those who maintain their neutrality in times of great moral crises" There is no redemption for Ragini, is there?</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Laksh - Okay, even as a villain belonging to the group known as Black Wolves, whose motto is to simply ensure no joy exists, I hoped he would not descend to being a base male homosapien. Alas, rejection and insecurity do bring out the beast in most of us, and Laksh is no exception. He does not even deserve disgust, his intent and actions were deplorable, to say the least. I am sure even the fires of hell do not deserves lost souls such as him.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Swara - This girl has spunk and presence of mind too - that observation about the quirks of fate - destiny does have its own idea as to how to make us rethink our priorities. Swara at one point hated Sanskaar for putting the mission first, today she asks him to do that and also willing takes a bullet meant for him so that he is successful. Though I think her heart was also quite a willing partner.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sanskaar - His is the wrath of a right man who has been wronged - a favourite phrase of mine- he is blinded by righteous rage. It again proves what a formidable man he must be, who could summon the steeliest resolve and cease from killing Laksh, because Swara asked him to desist. At the very next instant he is a charmer, could not resist teasing Swara.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I simply love the action and emotional balance you maintain - even the romance does not seem out of place. And as usual another cliff hanger- Swara has to survive but still, I cannot wait to know what happens next. Do update quickly.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">love,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nyna</font>



Nyna dearest,
At first sorry for late reply and keep you all waiting for a long time. Last 5 days went in a lightening speed for me... Too much journeys... Today we did trekking all day in hill stations. My legs are burning you know!

Ragini and Laksh are reaching new low as negative characters... No I don't intend any redemption for them... well at least for Laksh... No mercy for molester... I'll not compromise here, even for a story... Ragini too...Most probably not going to be a turncoat...

Swara... in my opinion... she changed for good in being in love... that bullet... I think her heart was working more than her logic... well one line can be interpreted in many ways...
Sanskar Aah!!! He's an out and out passionate lover boy... and expressive too... and yes he can be prompted to take wrong decisions for righteous cause.. (I really loved this line!)

Balance between action and emotion... Glad you felt that... Improvement then?

Missed your prompt comment!

Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Hey Dyuti :)

Finally got some time & read all the updates in 1 go! It's amazing & I'm all hooked!
I love SwaSan & I love thriller/spy stuffs! And your writing skills is too good! Loved the balance of practical essence!
Loved SwaSan journey till now - their friendship, fights, little nok-jhoks, gradual feelings!
Loved their characters as well...
Liked all the little got to know about Sargam, Shomi, Ram, Sujata & Vivek! Hope to get them in future!
Liked Dr. Abhinash Bt felt bad for his death!
Ohh how much I loathe Laksh! Want to kill him with my bare hands! I like dangerous villains & Laksh was 1 which is different from the show where Laksh was such an impulsive fool. This was a refreshing change but I so hate when someone try to force people! Disgusting!
Liked Ragini as well till her unnecessary jealousy with Swara even when she realized how pure hearted Swara is! And I hate her for leaving Swara on Laksh's filthy hands, being a girl she didn't do anything!
Bt Sanskaar saved his Swara from that moron! I'm sure Swara will be fine! This bullet was necessary for their love realization & confession, I guess!
Lets see how our Sunny & Shona going to confess!
Dyuti, really enjoyed reading your story! And waiting for next update! Update soon...
Btw you are from Bangladesh right? Me too from Bangladesh :)
Loads of love & hugs <3
Nupur



Dear Nupur,
Loads of welcoming hugs for your first comment here. Don't tell me about writing skills... As a Bangladeshi you know how hard it is for most of us write something in English... Here it's a romantic spy thriller... My language skills are of basic level... Have to struggle a lot... 😲

Laksh... I wanted a strong character growth for him... you see he gradually evolved as a despicable villain... Earlier he had some soft side, but now he is whole dark... Ragini here is less dramatic... She understand people( read Laksh, Swasan both) too well, hence burns inside but doesn't plot that much like the serial and coward.

I'll surely show Shona n Sunny's family... but can promise you much as it's a thriller.

That bullet is a turning point for many things...

Where do you live? I live in Sylhet, but Dhaka origin.

Love and hugs,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .Avengers.

ikr! Ramayana was critically acclaimed and Geet was super hit. Technically he should go upward but he went to movies and🤢Barun did same mistakes. Sushant was very smart in this regard, waited for right movie instead jumping I whatever came to them. Whatever you say, Gul knew how to cast correct people who has solid chemistry together. Asya were sizzling, just like maaneet and ArShi.

Yep veer is cute. Didn't watch it, follow it through IF like many other shows😆when pardesh came I was like yayy drashti has a new haircut, then phusss. Serious this girl looks same in all show. Shane bond was very handsome. Lol true that😆😆jekhanei Dekho sese to Amar kachei Aste hobe. English which band? Recently I am obsessed with Coldplay. They maybe over and past their prime time but their songs ugh, the feels.

Mostly I see if the guy is handsome, then if he can act well. I have stopped going overboard now, but there was a time I was crazy about Ian/Damon from vampire diaries. He made this whole bad boy with sarcastic tongue thing so catchy. I tend to lean toward broody bad boy but not jerk. Chivalry maybe dead but not to me, the guy needs to respect girls. And curse a lot😆I like VK from humse hai life, it used to come on Channel V. It's mostly couple for me, they should click. Have a story which makes me swoon and curse like damn, we ain't getting a guy/love story like that!

I am 21. But I am not calling you Didi.



Hi soul sis,
Hehe... don't call me di... It makes me feel... too senior I guess! Moreover my heart is always sweet 16!

Dyuti

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