Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71) - Page 25

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Dyuti...

A little busy for few weeksdue to personal reason..lacking time.so going to be quick...

Update was fabulous..loved it..little scared for future updates...

Talia

Talia,

No need to be formal dear! We all are having busy schedule now a days. And update was meant to be scary a little bit. I'll be late for my next update for personal and family commitments. So I'm sad myself and apologising in advance... leaving you in a cliffhanger.

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: iamreader

Dear, What's your name? Welcome!

I'm from Bangladesh, not even Indian so no chance of knowing Kannada. Using Karnataka as the camp location purely based on geography : the wide forest, segmented waterfalls, distance from Delhi and borders. I hope you didn't get offended,being from Karnataka.. (I gave a disclaimer beforehand ) I know local people especially in village use their first language. So for authentic feel I took help from Internet. For geography, language, surnames etc also I did the same.

About morals of Ragini, I described about Black wolves before. Their motto is : Don't let anyone to be happy and make happy ones suffer and get destroyed... Raglak are both complex... sometimes they show flickers of softness, then become outright inhumane in the next moment...

Swasan especially Sanskar are fun loving in nature, in spite of being in serious profession. Not intense, serious like any other spies... About the genre ,it's a huge risk for me to try writing spy thriller as a first attempt... Where I knew that the pace is going to be slow initially . But few sweethearts constantly supported to keep me writing.

Okay, enough rant for today. I'm a bit chatty you know? Btw,I love your IF name. 😊

Love,
Dyuti

I am Riya, but call me Ri.

Originally posted by: kriti_atharv

ohhh my Laksh is reaaly crazy...damn Swara is captured again and nothing will stop Sanskaar from getting to his Swara...loved d update hun...cant wait fr d nxt chappie n thnx fr d pm!!

Hello Kriti,
Yes Laksh is crazy and dangerous... but Sanskar is not alone anymore... I feel elated whenever you people give some positive response... You've to wait hun... don't have spare time for writing a complicated, action packed chapters for few days.

Dyuti

Originally posted by: .Avengers.

I am Riya, but call me Ri.

Ooh BD? I know some friends here in IF who are from there. One is from Dhaka. Tumi kothay thako?

Na na I m Bengali no chance of being offended.😆I like this forum's writers. So much effort into research so that the description is authentic no matter how small the point is. No wonder you guys have some dedicated readers.

It may seem trivial but I m so glad you didn't make raglak Khan or sheikh in order to make them terrorists,you know what I mean? Terrorists and terrorism have no specific surname. Sure, most of us do write them keeping in mind a particular type but reading something different is refreshing. So thank you for that. Black wolves sound like LTTE of Sri Lanka, I think you have heard? They assassinated our former PM Rajiv Gandhi.

About spies, IKR?? Mostly cops/intelligence officers are so broody, with a dark past (read dead wife) and rough mannerisms. Thank you for not making sanky that much dark and depressing. Kickass but fun. And swara is doctor, you won't know I squealed reading the first chapter cause she's also a trauma surgeon! I mostly write some drafts in MS word which I will never post😆in one of them I made the girl trauma surgeon and guy a police officer🤪😆

Me too chatty. As you can see I replied like an essay..Thanks. I like it too. Your name is pretty, Dyuti. It means light, right?

Update soon.

Dear Ri,

Hey Swara's fake name was Ria Yadav here! 😆 Wow Bengali? 2nd Bengali I met here after Moumita. I was born in Dhaka but have been living in Sylhet almost all my life. About writing, I'm repeating again this one is my first attempt apart from few Bengali poems in my MBBS 1st year... So the result is pretty much of amateur level... Hey why don't you post your drafts? I know our forum is very welcoming in this aspects, the girls encouraged everyone ( including me). Nynu keeps posting detailed analysis after every chapters in spite of her job and own FF ( forgotten memories- do read if you haven't yet. The detailing and research put there are mind blowing).

About not type casting, it's based on my personal belief that religion doesn't define terrorism... Then what would you tell about murderers and rapists? That's why Black wolves didn't get any surnames. As they're from India, hence the Hindi names. I really tried to avoid clichs. That's why my version of action hero don't have a dark past. He has a happy family and friends. He tries to woo the girl he likes by giving hints... But gets serious when his love is in danger. Also he's not perfect.He needs support in his weakness, currently Ayaz is doing that job.

Phew, analysed the character I myself penned down! 😆 I mean, who does that? See? I'm crazy too! About your draft of Swara being Trauma surgeon, I think we're soul sisters! I'm really curious to read it now. 😊

Love,
Dyuti

Dear dyuti,

Hi Dyuti🤗

This is amazing dear👏👏.I loved the cute swasan moments.Swasan scenes are always
Laksh, he is a total psycho and an immature lad but Ragini is surprising me.Her obsession is laksh and why she is helping laksh to kidnap swara.I just hope sanskar is able to protect his lady from these psychos.I must appreciate the effort u r taking dear,u dont know kannada(i also dont know😆)
and writing the dialogue in kannada, it is very difficult na.okk waiting to see the hero saving his lady love
lots of luv
gayu😊

Originally posted by: bhymi

Hi Dyuti🤗

This is amazing dear👏👏.I loved the cute swasan moments.Swasan scenes are always
Laksh, he is a total psycho and an immature lad but Ragini is surprising me.Her obsession is laksh and why she is helping laksh to kidnap swara.I just hope sanskar is able to protect his lady from these psychos.I must appreciate the effort u r taking dear,u dont know kannada(i also dont know😆)
and writing the dialogue in kannada, it is very difficult na.okk waiting to see the hero saving his lady love
lots of luv
gayu😊

Hi Gayu! 😃
What a pleasant surprise buddy! It's a pleasure to write Swasan scenes as well. 😳

Ragini is nothing compared to Laksh in psychotic behaviour... The kidnap was Laksh's plan... and Ragini can't really protest or let Swara free, not because of love... but she's bound to... She wouldn't go against him...

About Kannada, well I really had to Struggle for first few sentences, then found an app to lessen my misery. In my opinion describing fight scenes are tougher.

Sorry you've to wait for next chapter. penned down few lines only...

Love,
Dyuti

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