Sanskaar's Monologues II--'The Edge of Chaos' OS Updated Page 1 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve


That word is still not to be spoken about or written or referred to. It is the bane of my existence😭😭😭. I have so many posts with that word and quite a number with "not that word" I think I would have to use the old fashioned method of noting in a dairy🤢🤢🤢



Agreed 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum




Hey Helee🤗


Sorry yaar...got caught up in some unexpected work commitments in the afternoon and evening. Doing my utmost to have it up tonight, else tomorrow morning.

Lots of Love

Viji

hey viji... 🤗 take your time buddy... Will be waiting 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Eagerly waiting for it my dearest. As I said before on our Abhimanyu and chakravyha discussion this is the way Swara operates recently. You know in reality when we give up all the delusions we have on our otp I'm rather uncomfortably surprised at the stance an Indian TV show, one of those who boasts on the social values and stuff is taking such a lenient and slippery view when it comes to the bond of marriage.
As I see it, cvs don't find Swara at fault as we do hence the lack of justification. They are just excited about setting the new length of their heroine's self sacrificing...For the greater good deeds and are on the way of a track where Sanskar would be ignorant of how virtuous his wife is and will be shown light by the angels of his life.
AND as usual this is one cocktail I'm going to flatly refuse. what first signed me on this ship was the real human traits of our otp now those are hardly visible onscreen. I'm glad at least in the form of your words we're getting what we wanted. An insight, the still human side of Sanskar's story.
Can't tell you how much I'm looking forward to this. No pressure darling, take your time and treat us to a masterpiece.
Loads of love,
Saku
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Friends , 🤗

I am very sorry about the delay in updating this OS. Typing this out has been very emotional, the entire serial plotline right now seems tailored to cause maximum anguish to Sanskaar.


Writing it in the first person was probably not the best idea for an emotional Cancerian. 😳😆 I've finished the final proof, now just have to do the formatting.


I just want to say though, that while I have strived to make the ending hopeful; I have also done my best to drill a few home truths which I really feel, need to be said. There is quite a bit of melancholy in the shot; I guess I would say the mood is one of courage and reflective forbearance, against heavy emotional odds.

Anyway. ...I plan on posting it within the next couple of hours. I frankly can't say it has been an undiluted pleasure to write this piece...it has been painful, emotional and a little upsetting. But hope springs eternal all the same...😳☺️

Will be back soon, guys.

Lots of Love

Viji

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's ok Viji :)
I'm very much patient when I know that I'm going to get the best fruit of my patience!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My Dearest Saku, Nynu and Nupur,



Updated the OS on Page 1. 🤗


Loads of Love

----Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Saku darling 🤗

Let me know if it passed muster. I need a good night's sleep tonight, am completely drained, emotionally.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😭😭😭..Viji .. My Sanskaar ..My heart is bleeding .. I need some chocolate and no doubts lady you are possessed by Sanskaar ..No other way you can pen down such a piece of utter perfection one after another on Sanskaar. I was almost close to breaking down ..Man this is painful.

*Sigh* .. Swara never changes .I so expected her reaction to be like that 🤢

A low bow for you darlin..I totally get how draining it would have been for you feel that anguish pain and every fiber of Sanskaar's heart ..Jahapana tussi Grt ho ..👏⭐️👏.I need more time to compose my thoughts.Will be back

Love
Lucky


Edited by lucky.m - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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We need some more time, my idiotic fan (Ii use it in a very affectionate form😊) is blubbering incoherently and doing a red Indian dance. Once she calms down enough to type, I shall reply.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Viji,
Now I'm sure that u r possessed by the sanskar aatma. Wonderful piece of work, dearie. I loved it. It was high time that sanskar take a stand for himself in the show. He needs to get what he deserves. Right from the childhood, there was an empty space in him craving for love and affection. Of course, he was given the affection but I think that was a very tiny part of the whole which he was supposed to receive. Are u going to give another part where swara realizes what sanskar said and takes a decision. Waiting for that if u r free. 🤗 for the pm.
Love u loads
Nivi

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