Sanskaar's Monologues II--'The Edge of Chaos' OS Updated Page 1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Hey Viji..
Read it all in a go..but it was so so painful..you brought tears to my eyes..the anguish, the pain..it was is if I was feeling it just by reading it..I can't even imagine what Sanskar must have gone through..if sometimes doubt if Swara ever feels this kind of anguish being apart from Sanskar and I knw somewhere she does then why she hurts him every time..
Speechless..you make me every time..painf and heartbreaking..

Would soon be back after reading it once more and unres in detail..
P.S.you are superb..just always keep writing..
Love,
Piya

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StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: StarySKY
Viji 🤗
I love the fact .. that whenever I open the forum I always find something from your creation ..

Waiting

Viji 🤗

I am speechless .. I have no words to say ..

It is so beautifully written ..

I loved it ..

In fact .. At some parts I was in trears ..

Sanskar pain and anguish ..

All this blame for something he didn't do .. the way he got hurt from the persons he love and adore the most ..

I am very upset with Swara and so with Ap and Dp though I don't blame them - Ap and Dp - there is a different between been a son and Like a son ( I don't blame them for choosing Laksh over Sanskar without hesitation .. I can't blame parents for choosing their own ... but yeah it is hurts but Sanskar need to live with it )

I loved Rp , Sujata and Uttara stand with Sanskar .. the way his mother and sister tried to protect him from been pained again by Swara ..

I loved Sanskar frim stand .. Swara really need something like this to wake her up .. ( I am very upset with Swara and I don't know how the Cvs will solve this mess )

Viji .. thank you for this Story 👏👏

* a bow down *

Love

Khushi

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Res. Don't know when I will unres?! 😭
Unresed. 😃
I know this a very chotu comment from my side. 😔
But u must know that I absolutely loved this OS Viji dearest!! 🤗 ❤️ Thanks for the pm. 😃

With love,
Aheli.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

My Dearest Friends 🤗🤗

So immensely, immensely touched by all the warm and loving feedback. You have really made my evening so very special. At a time when I was feeling very emotional after writing this, it truly meant an enormous lot.

I shall respond individually tomorrow, planning on turning in early tonight, been a rather emotional roller coaster last couple of days. 😳😊

Loads and Loads of Love . ...and I can't tell you guys enough, how much your feedback means to me. Really makes me feel so thrilled, humbled and blessed.

Viji

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Nupur

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
My Dearest Saku, Nynu and Nupur,

Updated the OS on Page 1. 🤗

Loads of Love

----Viji

And you made me cry Viji. You are supremely talented dear, no doubt on that!

And right now what I want so damn much is Sanskaar leaving this mad house, his hypocrite family & Swara after Laksh truth comes out specially if this family & Swara blame Sanskaar for Laksh's imaginary death!

I just want Sanskaar to leave all of them & go away till they realize their mistakes, crime actually, and thoroughly apologize!

This is so painful and with every word, every sentence, I cried for Sanskaar! This is so agonizing!

I said before also that Sanskaar have real bad luck regarding family & relations!

Swara! I'm totally fed up! I don't recognize her anymore! Can't can't understand her!

Why she is so different, have different rules towards & for Sanskaar regarding love, care, belief, trust, faith, anger, forgiveness, every emotion!

I never thought that I will ever be this much angry, heartbroken, irritated & frustrated with half of my most favorite & loved OTP which I loved, love & will always love so ferociously!

This piece is so beautiful Viji, no wonder on this, after all it came from you! Will wait for you to come with another, then one more, then...

Well I know I'm greedy about SwaSan ;)

Loads of love & hugs <3

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Wonderful os
Absolutely flawless

Thanks so much Arathy 🤗

Very touched to know that you loved it.

Cheers

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res. Don't know when I will unres?! 😭

No rush at all, Aheli. Un res when time permits yaar, don't pressure yourself.

Lots of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

My Dearest Lucky, Nivi, Piya, Khushi and Nupur 🤗🤗

The start of the weekend is immeasurably sweet, with those wonderfully warm words. I am immensely touched, girls. I will start with my individual replies the soonest I can; have some commitments I need to tie up today.

For those who were asking---I don't plan to extend this to a 3rd monologue shot, not right away at least. I need to take a small break before resuming work on 'Games People Play'. And post that, I will be working on a SwaSan SS in an AU setting, which I have tentatively titled 'Memories of Midnight'. 😳 It is a crime/ action thriller, based on a plot idea which Sanya sent me. She sweetly asked me to develop this into a full fledged SS.

So as it stands now, a 3rd monologue is not immediately in the offing. But if the muse strikes unexpectedly in the interim. ...well then, maybe. 😳😉 I feel immensely humbled and blessed that it is being looked forward to, though. It is such a privilege, writing in the voice of a facinating, layered and compelling character. 😳

Loads of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

We need some more time, my idiotic fan (Ii use it in a very affectionate form😊) is blubbering incoherently and doing a red Indian dance. Once she calms down enough to type, I shall reply.

Nynu 🤗🤗

Feel touched that this made you blubber 😳☺️ Though you can never be incoherent. And Red Indian dance? 😆 Reminded me of that Tom and Jerry cartoon, where Jerry's nephews come to visit, and start playing Red Indians (Tom plays the frontiersman / sheriff) 😆

Lots of Love

Viji