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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: ria2794
Amazing now story is moving faster lovely

Thank you, Ria.

Yes, I am trying to rush for completing this before my assignment deadlines catch up with me.

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Unres for 17 on page 43 and res for 18

Side note - I was going through the above posts and read you reply to Dyuti, I wonder how I missed out that in my comment for Chapter 16 Anyway, I shall guess now - Sanskaar is sneaky because he is a precog and almost knew where exactly Swara would end up with. But why should Laksh be proud - maybe because she has proved to be better than their expectations and his "brother's" "find" is indeed exceptional.

Okay, taking a break now.

Hi Nyna,

Looking forward to read your comment.

Sanskaar sneaks out because of his party phobic nature. He likes his secluded corner in the lab more than the noise of a party.

As for Laksh, I wanted to reveal in that post attack convo but missed there as well. Any way, there's no mystery behind it. You guessed it right. He hired her. She is his responsibility. As you have read, the designer also points out to Swara that the big guys have high opinion of her. Now that Swara is doing well, Luc is proud to have brought her on board. It's simple as that. 😊

Cheers

Sharon

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Lovely update

Thank you dear! 😊

Btw, whats your real name?

Edited by Sparkler8 - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#314

And I am back for Chapter 18.

Poor poor Ragini, I think the guys were mean - and the testosterone match was which course would break Ragini - but whatever it was, I guess the desert was Luc's creation and Sanskaar had to foot the tab for losing the match.

(I am still not sure how I would react in Ragini's place, since I am a die hard magic fan, I would most probably be delirious to find that it exists😆😆😆 ) But despite that she is still quite rational and brave, truly as good a fighter as Swara,which means the magical war would be "amazing"(not a right word for a war, but I could not think up of any other word😳)

Okay, and my comments are not in any specific order - why exactly was Luc worried about Ragini (apart from her being an immune would make her immune to his ''charms').? Sanskaar, I think, in this case, is not worried for the exact reasons he gave - it is easier to seek Ragini's help to counter Fican and her being an immune would be an added advantage.

Looking forward for the battle even though it would mean the end of this tale. But that would mean the start of the sequel

Best,

Nyna

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Rumadiv

@Rumadiv

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#315

Dear Sharon,

Finally Ragini is taking chance to enter Magical world. Luc and sanskar's idea to find whether Ragini is immune is funny and enjoyable. Swara feeling sorry and guilty for Ragini shows how much ragini and swara relationship is. Luc was really enthusiastic to see Ragini and felt concerned while doing immune test to her. Was luc attracted to Ragini at starting and din tell anyone..??? It shows luc as some feeling for swara might be friendship or more than tat. Since u had given spoiler alert walking hand in hand tells luc as some feeling for Ragini. Waiting how it will happen.

If anyone is in Ragin's shoes will think they would have gone crazy. Its like love struck teenagers seeing their loved one everywhere and think they have gone crazy and get embarrassed. Ragini feels the same. She doesn't want to embarrass herself and worriedly asks swara to not to judge her. Since swara was also plan of this understands and supports her and waits for response from Ragin. Imagining ragin's reaction when the dishes get exchanged within fraction of second. It would be really funny but can understand the situation she is in.

But I like the idea of bringing Ragini to magical world as she stopped taking drugs. Never in my wild imagination I din think such idea. But his do u get these ideas?Really u writers are great and appreciate tat.

Keep updating!!! And finally unreserved!!

With love,
Divya.

Edited by Rumadiv - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

I am glad you agree on this. This idea is from my philosophy debates. There was one topic where it says, probably what we know is correct is actually wrong. Because, different people have their own sets of dos and donts and with the cross cultural teams we work these days, it is possible for those ideals to clash.

Cheers
Sharon

My personal take is a little similar - facts are never the truth unless considered in the correct perspective and since perspective is more subjective than objective, the truth is usually relative. But people, especially lawmakers, treat the truth to be equal to facts (whereas it is rarely equivalent in most cases) and expect it to be absolute. So while we could agree of facts, the perspective in which such facts are seen makes it difficult for everybody to agree on.

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#317

Hey sharon...

Im late as usual...but enjoyed reading chapter 17 n 18..it was awesome...your reply made me think im being very suspicious of every character..it is a simple story...i was thinking deeply at every point ...hehehe

Swara was attacked n rescued by lakshya...gosh we all thought it would be sanky..hehe...swara n lakshya convo was nicely penned...ragini did not recognise lucs..i guess due to medication n all...swara n MSI meeting was good...nothing much gained but she gave good idea.. .i liked how u described the spell n how it can be used...it was cool...

Testing ragini whether she is immune or not was fab...they actually gave shock to her...very anxious to know her reaction n meeting with MSI...wohooo excited...

Talia

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: iamreader
Sharon dear,
At least this time I'm relatively quicker. 😊 You should give me credit because my right hand has wrist brace right now!

Anyways last time I was right about Ragini in a way. Told that she has a grey shade. Her profession is one where someone can mix facts and fictions to win. It's upto her till what extent would she go? As a reader I know the stakes are high. Or may be I'm over thinking. But Fican can play dirty in courts too...

Anyways Poor RaginI! MSI folks in the name of the test left her horrified.Now she's thinking Swara is also a nutcase and needs shrink ! 😆

Hilarious update!

Love,
Dyuti

Unres at last

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elsanna

@elsanna

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#319

Res...res...res😆

This one for chappy 12 on pg.35 kafi peeche ho gai hu...nahi... Will take some time dear...bear my late latifi😛

Coming soon🤣

Tani

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: iamreader
Sharon dear,
At least this time I'm relatively quicker. 😊 You should give me credit because my right hand has wrist brace right now!

Anyways last time I was right about Ragini in a way. Told that she has a grey shade. Her profession is one where someone can mix facts and fictions to win. It's upto her till what extent would she go? As a reader I know the stakes are high. Or may be I'm over thinking. But Fican can play dirty in courts too...

Anyways Poor RaginI! MSI folks in the name of the test left her horrified.Now she's thinking Swara is also a nutcase and needs shrink ! 😆

Hilarious update!

Love,
Dyuti

Hi Dyuti,

Ofcourse dear.. full credit to you..😆 Jokes apart, I really hope you are recovering well. Please don't stress too much.

True that! Well, whether Ragini succeeds in dragging him to court, we gotta wait and see.. (Confession: I have only started on the next chapter today)

I loved writing that episode. I am glad that you enjoyed it too.

Cheers

Sharon