FF: Whimsical Corporation [Completed] {New cover by Nyna}

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#331

Res dear...

Unres..

Hey Sharon...dear

Apologies darling..I'm very late...busy schedule. ..u are also missing from forum???do give appearance. ..

Chapter 19 was awesome...I have bookmarked it for so long..I was waiting for it to get completed ...

I enjoyed this chapter..totally...finally it revealled that raglak had past...I guess it was not an ugly break up...ragini was confused with everything happening around her...and could not share it with lucky.she thought he would not understand...hence they parted..but Destiny again crossed their paths...

Meeting of ragini with MSI went quite well..I'm wondering how she will give possible solution to the problems MSI are facing...after all it is a magical world...will wait for that now...

Thank u for updating...

love

Talia

Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 8 years ago

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#332

Sharon dear, 😊
Even I'm MIA for many days due to my college assignments. Read ch-19 now. Its awesome as usual. 👏 😃
And about Raglak part, I would like to read 1 separate chapter about them. Rest it up to u. 😳 Don't know when will I visit IF again, maybe tomorrow, or after a week, month, I myself don't know. 😕 But do pm me when u update ch-20. 😳
With love,
Aheli.

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Sharon dear, 😊
Even I'm MIA for many days due to my college assignments. Read ch-19 now. Its awesome as usual. 👏 😃
And about Raglak part, I would like to read 1 separate chapter about them. Rest it up to u. 😳 Don't know when will I visit IF again, maybe tomorrow, or after a week, month, I myself don't know. 😕 But do pm me when u update ch-20. 😳
With love,
Aheli.

Hi Aheli,

What are you studying? I am doing my post graduation so most of my assignments exist for the semester long. Now I have a month break before a new term starts. Hopefully, I can finish this by then.

I have thought about the part about RagLak. I will do my best to insert that conversation and the consequences of it in Chapter 20 and move on to the climax for Chapter 21 and 22. If anything feels left out, I will give you an epilogue.

Cheers

Sharon

Edited by Sparkler8 - 8 years ago

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: RAONE8
Plz update dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Updated Chapter 19.. 😊

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#335

Finally we hear from you🤗 great timing, I was sort of planning to give up on IF especially SR forum.

Reread the whole chapter, will get back, - so is that how you plan to play out RagLak, have her recount her past? Or do we get 19A from Ragini's POV.

Anyway, how are your studies going on? Welcome back.

Best,

Nyna

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
Awesome loved it

Thank you, dear! 😊

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#337

Dear Sharon,

Finally unresed on page 49 first post, as of now, once the safai abhyan is done, not sure where the post would end up😆

Anyway, I wrote my request for 19A before I read your reply to Aheli, so it is quite redundant now. But glad to note that we would have two more chapters

Best,

Nyna

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Regarding your note above, I am cool with whatever you decide, but then I sort of like RagLak, okay Ragini to be honest, so I really would not mind 19A. And it also means another chapter for us to read😊

Though I guess that since this is a first person POV, the challenge would be how you fit it in. Up to you, I would like to read it though😳

Best,
Nyna

PS- from mobile so please overlook typos, will correct them

ETA - corrected it, so it should read like English rather than the gibberish it was earlier. Hats off to you, for managing everything from mobile

Hi Nyna,

Your comment questioned my intentions of Ch19A. Hence the delay in replying. Until I completed writing Ch19, I had no idea how to connect this. I also have the sequel plot playing in my mind. So filling the gaps was challenging and I desired to take an easier route to move on and jump into the climax.

However, your comment made me think why in the first place did I choose to write in the first person. WC is the world where logic makes no sense (at least to the non-magical folk like Swara and us) yet exists and is more than just entertainment for the MSI characters. Also, Swara does not know everything about everyone. The only person she is sure of is herself. Everyone else is a mystery to her, even Ragini who is supposed to be an old acquaintance and a confidante. So I have decided to go with this approach. Luc may not be a vocal person, but since Ch18, Ragini has come to trust Swara and now is the time for Swara to turn her confidante.

Hope this answers your queries.

P.S. Regarding mobile, it's faster and helps to write in the dead spots of the day, offering better time management. Ever since I started reducing my mobile usage, my updates are getting nowhere and my replies are slow too. Hoping to get back in the routine soon 😊

Cheers

Sharon