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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Sharon,

Take your time, we will wait, though I am saddened to read that we are nearing the end of this FF, maybe you would write a sequel, please.

And yes, res for 16😊

Best
Nyna

Unres page 41

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Loved it

Thank you, dear! 😊

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#293

Hi Divya,

Originally posted by: Rumadiv
Finally updated . Its really interesting how the story is proceeding and the most beautifull thing is the introduction of the Magicall fairy folks. And even more interesting fact is that the folks also experiencing the same feeling of cheating and trust problems as human have. Its something different and unexpected which is adding extra spicy to story.

Thank you so much for reading this story.. I have tried to keep the extraordinary world of magic close to the ordinary. I am glad to hear that you felt so.

Where luc n sanskar talking about swara?? because while reading i din feel it was about swara but i guess it will be about swara. And moreover curiosity likes the cat if its mentioned here about wat they were talking. Waiting for the secret to enclose soon.

I will reveal for you. They were talking about Swara. You will see in Chapter 17 as well that they are trying to protect her.

Really sanskar being with luc n not knowing hindi. There must be some reason hiding behind it and now am eager to know the reason.

By now, you would have understood that Sanskaar is a man of mystery. When we see an Indian name, we quickly assume they would know an Indian language. Anything contrasting would lead to curiosity to know Sanskaar's past. If you as a reader feel so, just imagine how it must be for Swara to see that guy everyday, coming across facts like this which she had taken for granted.

Is Ragini really able to see those folks and as per swara thinking no one else know about the magic world? Or is this the way were Ragini will come to know about the magical world n guess luc will be the person bringing Ragini to the Magicall world? Its guessing not sure.

Chapter 17 hints at this. How Ragini and Luc come together, you need to wait to read. 😊 Spoiler: It will be Ragini and Lakshya walking into the sunset hand in hand after the climax.

I hope there will be sequence to this story and hope it will not end soon. And wish u keep write something different and never stop writing.

Sure, dear! I will keep writing. I have a vague idea for the sequel. I will disclose it to you guys soon with one of my future updates.

Cheers

Sharon

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Sharon...
Unrez @ 41...muahhh

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Well Written..

Thank you, dear!

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#296

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Edited by Sparkler8 - 7 years ago

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#297

Unres Chapter 16 and 17 at page 41 and 43 respectively.

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
REs for 17, will unres for both 16 and 17, before the end of this week - promise😳
Part unres - Okay that was Laksh, (my question for chapter 16 was - was that Sanskaar.)

And now that Ragini is off the drugs, she is reverting to her immune status and which is why she is suspicious of Laksh.
And since magic is also sort of IP, guess Swara will rope in Ragini.

God, Sharon, I was not even this excited for Harry Potter (well, I bunked the day Deathly Hallows was released, collected my pre -order at 6 in the morning and finished reading by evening, because my brother was breathing down my neck😆)

I demand a sequel, and keep Sanskaar's mysterious past for that. We need something to be eager about.

Best,
Nyna