Characters' info updated - Page 4

Originally posted by: raaz19

Dear nivi...

Thanks for the beautiful update...no need to be nervous after such a long time so happy to see you updated the story...

Loved the continuing plot of the story...The most emotional or should I say part of this chapter or journey for me has yo be the line said by sanskaar of "I want to touch your soul not just your body"...what an amazing way of showing that all he longs for is to be loved just like she does...hope through this journey swara learns why he said these words abs what they truly mean for them...

As for the update the wedding was a beautiful shown and the slow response to there new life is a nice touch...hope you share more about how sanskaar felt when he saw swara preform her duties as his wife on the first day...as for the future I hope they share there pain...I hope the raglak twist I kept for later...

As for know I hope u update this story soon and also the others...will be waiting to read more...

This update was as always a superb and heartfelt update were each word wanted me to carry on reading further...

Take care...waiting ;)

Raz

Originally posted by: Sushma98999

After long time

Beautiful

Originally posted by: Nivijo

I'm really humbled by your comment, raz. And I'm happy too reading your comment. It was a motivating one. I opted for a slow pace story given that the storyline itself is like that. It requires a lot of emotional turmoil. I need to experience all the emotions myself before letting anyone else feel it. It was very difficult for me. Raglak...as of now I haven't decided any story for them.

I will update all of my stories. All of them are very dear to me.

You too take care!!

Love

Nivi

Originally posted by: raaz19

Wow thanks for the quick comment...so I see that there is a lot more turmoil ahead and inner confusions to be dealt with 😉 ...

So happy to hear that the others will be updated too...and trust me the phase was not slow at all actually it added to the feel of the story and the pain and lose that we readers needed to feel...

Stay happy 😛 and till then I shall be cheeky and say I shall be waiting 😊

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Hey Nivi :)

I guess bcoz of busy life, I missed this FF of yours! Bt found it today & read all 3 chapters in 1 go! And liked it very much!

Gadodias are like always spineless, horrible & hypocrite creatures! Even though Swara is Dadi's own granddaughter, still she don't like her!

Dada, Shekhar, Ragini, Sahil are morons as well & Shomi though good but not helpful enough to be good for Swara!

Maheshwaris seems very good except for AP's biased nature towards her own!

DP loves Sanskaar & Uttara like his own & Adarsh & Pari are good! Laksh also love Sanskaar alot!

Bt felt bad for both Swara & Sanskaar! Both lost their parents & suffered alot of pain!

They think they will never have a happy life! Bt there's something called destiny! So now both with their own miseries are married & they are gonna sooth each others pain!

You portrayed SwaSan & their pains beautifully! For a change Swara was accepting her vulnerability & both SwaSan being tired of their fate!

Loved loved loved Sanskaar Maheshwari <3

He is so understanding & like always every women's dream man!

Loved that dialogue that he wants to touch & conquer her soul rather than just her body!

Btw Ragini is a spoilt brat & eloped from marriage (Probably the only good thing she did)! Are you gonna make RagLak a couple? Laksh trying to take revenge then falling for her?

Laksh seems good guy though immature! Just wish Ragini won't create any problems in SwaSan's life!

Plz update soon, want to know more! And plz update the epilogue of Limits & complete True Love as well.

With love & hugs <3

~ Nupur

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Awesome work

Can u pm when u next update

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nivi darling..

Read all part in one go...how did i miss this ff??feeling angry...it is amazing...loved it alot...plzzz continue this story..want to know more about swasan life???n why ragini eloped???

Talia