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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Great concept do continue soon

Thanks for pm 😳

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elsanna

@elsanna

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Awww... baccha it's really nice concept

Tani

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Divya

@.Divya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Nice Start. I liked Character Sketch. It seems to be Evil Gadodias(Excluding Shomi and Dida Of Course) vs Good Maheshwaris (according to me😆)

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

It is fantastic not idiotic..
So ragsan were about to marry but rags ran away or there is some other story to it..

Now swasan will be married..
Nice start..

Thanks

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

CS is good..
Poor swasan had lost their parents..
Maheshwari s are good but gadodiya s are evil..

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Dear Nivi,

Nice update, for once it was nice to see Swara admit her weakness, that she is tired of being strong. Sanskaar, his hurt is easy to understand, he feels that destiny has never wanted him to be happy. I presume both enter into this relationship with a lot of emotional baggage, would be nice to read further.

Are you planning make RagLak a couple, if that is the case, am I jumping the gun if I mention that initially Laksh would pretend to love her to avenge his brother and later actually falls for her. Not sure, will leave it to you.

love,

Nyna