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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Dear lovely readers,

I went to bed with the firm resolution and the good intention of getting back to all the comments given by you for this OS and Guardian Angel III. But then I a little caught up and have to choose, I would prefer to update Amaranthine and then focus on replying.

I hope you guys do not mind.

Love,

Nyna

Wishing all of a you a very happy Diwali

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srividhya87

@srividhya87

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

heart wrenching OS..

The way you expressed Swara's feeling still in hope to be forgiven is simply superb..

Short of words to explain..

Though the end is sad but atleast after their death their souls got united..

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@__nidhi__

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

I like to say something before I comment on this piece of yours.

Honestly, I have lessened my reading on IF there are rarely some stories I follow and read whenever I get time and the Os are always comes last in my list and moreover I have stopped watching SR due to the track they had shown NarBi have no hopes of returning back to the show. But you know what? What made me attract to the Os was the titile of its.

Coming to the Os,

I will be honest about it! I skipped a paragraph but I again scrolled upwards to read the para because I absolutely loved your Os. I loved the way you wrote the whole Os, it has become one of my favorites! You very well showed the transitions in Swara's emotions very well. I liked the Sujata part too! what I loved about your Os is that they died together so that they can love each other till eternity.

I would like to know your age???

Love,

Nidhi

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Oh my God
This is amazing dear..
Their pain was visible throughout...
Poor swasan and Sujata too.

Too emotional

Thanks

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: BookWormV
After reading:

HOLY EFFING CRAP!!! I LOVED IT!!!! I have tears in my eyes and a smile on my face. I don't know what else to say. That end was freaking awesome! I need to gather more words and give a nice comment. But Nyna - I love you, my sadist heart loves you! I love SwaSan but this OS at the moment is sooo soothing! So RES!

Dear Veena,

In spite of the serial being long over and almost half a year later, I am finally getting back to replying.😳

I so loved your comment for this story, even today, I do not have any regrets for writing it out especially for the ending (actually seeing how the serial ended, I am quite happy for the one i envisioned.

Missing you at the forum. Take care.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Nynu. 🤗
This is ...jeez. I loved it. ..something beyond expectations delivered with absolute perfection ..not for a second I felt sad for swara ... Confirm ..I.am sadist now. .but . this takes me back to lines ..where they get stranded in jungle and sanskaar says . hamare dil ek saath dhadkte hain ..ek saath rukenge but they didn't. One day behind .. Swara is ..I still take as in hope to be forgiven ...am I even making sense with this rambling. All o want to say. Is this is 👏👏 and it made me happy to see sanskaar take a stand ...till the end ..they say till death do part us. . but you don't need death when u have ..someone who would kill you alive every minute here swara for sanskaar ...I am harsh. But can't help.

But you are brilliant like always 👏⭐️

Love
Lucky

PS ..nynu u win contest viji was talking about hands down 👏

Lucky,

I am finally taking your words to heart (you know which ones) so when I got around to re reading my stories, I found that I had never gotten around to replying for some of mine.😭

Even today, almost half a year down the line, I think this story did more justice to Sanskaar than the serial did (actually the serial turned him into a doornail😡)

Swara never ever expressed an "active" regret, she simply waited for him while he lived out his entire life for her, near him and she never in knew. But he could not leave her alone, as he had been with her during his life, he came to claim her in death. They died together, almost at the same time.

And yes, I did win the contest, hands down.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Nivijo

Unressed in blue.

Dear Nivi,

I am glad you liked it, I know you commented long time ago but somehow I never got around to replying.

Now even after the serial is long over, and the forum is quite a dead place, I feel that this story, especially the ending was what Swara deserved. She did feel sorry, she did realise her mistakes but she kept committing mistake over mistake, she walked out of him and when he issued the punishment she never fought for him. She made a mistake thinking that waiting for him would lead him to forgive her, whereas she should have simply dug in her feet and fought for him.

And I made her take the name Gadodia, because she gave up everything for that family, Laksh for her maa baba, Sanskaar for Ragini, her relationship for her parents, her love for her family... somewhere Swara wanted a firm reminder as to how much the Gadodia name cost her - she wanted a family and so she remained a Gadodia till the day she died.

The ending, I wrote another OS which was similar (though in the end the woman realises that her lover is Death) and never thought, even in my wildest dreams, that I could modify it for SwaSan.

Thanks for reading and commenting, and my apologies for such a late reply.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
A beautiful story

Thank you, Moumita.

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: fangirl-swasan
I read this on my way home from University. Honestly I kind of really adore tragic stories. They have their own beauty because they remind us that life is,not always full of sunshine and rainbows. Now onto the story so he doesn't absolve her of her guilt and both of them spend their life in isolation. Can I confess that even though it's written from Swara's perspective I still feel more for Sanskar. Maybe it's the girl in me but the way this guy loves Swara always astounds me. To know that he was always,in close proximity to her and would see her everyday or at least hear her soulful songs invokes so many emotions in me. One needs to posses immense strength to live like this and he endured cancer too over the years. I just can't get over his pain. Even in death he comes for her. He is and will forever be her guardian angel. I don't know if I made sense or not but I loved this.
Regards
Sara😊

Dear Sara,

I usually do not like tragic stories, my stand being, reality is quite a tragedy and nobody gets out alive.

That said, I can understand when you say that certain tragic stories have their own beauty, there are a few stories which I will always go back to read, even though I know how they end and despite them always leaving me in tears.

And now for the story, No Sanskaar does not absolve Swara, but that is because she never tried to , she kept waiting for him never realising that he was always with her, all she needed to do was to act and fight for themselves. She gave up but he never did. And yes, even though the story is supposedly from Swara's POV, it speaks volumes about Sanskaar.

I agree with you, I can never get over the way Sanskaar loves her, irrevocably and unconditionally. If only Swara realised it, she would have had that love during her lifetime. Finally, when death claimed them, he came for her knowing that she would never make a mover for him and somewhere he knew that she would never live once the news of his death reached him. Even in death, he only thought of her.

I am not sure if I made any sense in replying either.😊

love,

Nyna