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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Nita🤗 it is a good one, right? All we have to do now, is to see how long I can stick to it

Nyna dear..I forgot the list of unres i have😆..I still remembered till yesterday but after the raining OS yesterday..I forgot..So i am cool how can i worry about he res i dont remember😉.. ..And i got to unres here too.. I remember that one..

But best of luck to you on your resolution

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Dear nyna,

You made so sad and cry with this story ... 😭

It was too sad ...

And sanskaar living at sargam foundation ... over looking her but not meeting her ...

No love story deserves such ending ...

But its beutifully written and expressed.

Pl write sanskasrs version too...

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Res. 😳 Will unres soon. 😃
Unresed Nyna. 😃
Aah! The title "Matanoia" is so beautiful. 😃 Loved reading the footnotes specially the psychological meaning of "Metanoia" coz being a Psychology Honors student, it caught my attention and I loved reading it. 😳
Now coming to the OS, I loved reading it so much! 😃 The future SwaSan, though I don't want them to end their relationship like this. 😕 I felt very sad for Swara here. How she was hoping that Sanskar forgives her and comes back to take her, but... 😭 And when RagLak's children referred to her as 'Masi', how she wished that they would call her 'Badi Maa' some day. And what? Sanskar lived in a small apartment provided by Sargam?? 😲 But still didn't meet Swara! 😔 But I really loved the last part where Sanskar, after so many years, after nearly 60 years, came back to Swara, for taking a stroll with her under the starlight sky, although don't know that Sanskar forgave her or not, but still she wished for his forgiveness and readily agreed to give him company for the stroll, hoping that he forgave her after these long years. 😳 And OMG!! What a coincident, or should I say love and bonding, that they died on the same day, at the night of 24th of September, 2075!! 😳 I think its after taking the stroll together after long years, for the last time. 😳 I was crying at the end! 😭 Its so beautifully written by u Nynu dearest!! 🤗 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 9 years ago

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phoenix27

@phoenix27

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Oh god can't say how much i am moved by your story dear. I was reading it on my office and had tear at the end of it. Loved it so much so so much

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Hi Nyna,

This doesn't look like a fan fiction to me. The words that come to my mind are Ode or Opus. Beautifully crafted and executed with acute precision.

Where do you get time from, Nyna, to write these fictions that swirl the hearts of your readers.

Your language is flawless to me and I reverence people who produce such extensive articulations for a simple reason that they exhaust me quickly. So I will not comment on those aspects today. I feel this line "Love without faith is a fire that torches you and scorches the other. " deserves a special mention for the intensity that complements SwaSan.

I want to comment on the Rollercoaster of emotions you took me on. Due to your disclaimer, I was able to keep detached with Swara's state. Also I made sure I read this in a public space. (I have a tendency to cry or laugh when reading the fics.) I was successful and was too soon in congratulating myself.

The news article broke me. The death inviting them to the same execution was just more than the words grief or melancholy can describe. I had to try very hard to control my tears. It was not due to the news of their passing. It was due to the extent of their love dragging the life day by day until their thread of life gave in yet making sure they had a death in togetherness to make up for their life's accounts of mistakes and sacrifices.

I was so engrossed in typing this comment that I missed my bus stop and had to walk back home. I just love the story line to tears.

Cheers

Sharon

Edited by Sparkler8 - 9 years ago

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Du Du Du Du

@Phir_Mohabbat

Trailblazer

+ 15

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Ripped my heart and left it bleeding on the floor.

I will come back later. Let me recover

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Dear Annie,

Will revert soon but Sanskaar's POV - difficult to write especially in this melancholy tone.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Dear Aheli,

I well get back with a detail revert, just wanted to clarify one thing -' the stroll under the stars' was after they died, not before.

If they had taken the stroll before, they would have died in each others' arms.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Dear Sharon,

Read your comment multiple times and will get back to you. I am currently stuck in writing a couple of other things (those ideas are creating a ruckus in my head, clamouring to be released).

To partly answer, this was a little easier to write, for I had already written a melancholy OS (Journey's End) However, I never thought that I could modify it for my OTP.

Best

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Aheli,
I well get back with a detail revert, just wanted to clarify one thing -' the stroll under the stars' was after they died, not before.

If they had taken the stroll before, they would have died in each others' arms.

love,
Nyna

Okay...Thanks for clarifying it dear. 😳

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