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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Sanya17
I loved this story so much I am really sadistic but the way you wrote it so wonderfully👏 hats off to to u then in the end sanskar living upstairs of sargam 😒 sanskar staying so close to swara but yet so far never coming in front of her😭

Dear Sanya (I hope that is your name)

I was in quite a sadistic mood when I wrote this OS, I wanted Swara to suffer, I just could not forgive her - both the act of walking out on him and her subsequent lack of feelings for him. Sanskaar, nobody loves like him, even when he refuses to forgive her he cannot stay away from her. As you said, so close yet so far. He bridged the physical distance, if only Swara had fought and closed the distance between their hearts.

Best,

Nyna

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Nyna dear,

Painfully beautiful!

I am sorry, I wont be able to leave a reply which this piece deserves. Got burnt yesterday as boiled milk fell upon my entire self.

But, I loved this one.

Love
- Harshada

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: NitaReid
I wont use that three letter word..But i am here..Will read after i tortured you with my OS

Unres:

I like typing Unres😆... So let get to this amazing OS shall we..Nyna dear.. You literally made me so happy when i read this one..Yeah i know this one was a sad OS or something along the lines of painful one..I know all that but the fact person like me who cant stand a small mu between SwaSan loved this OS shows how much of an sadist i turned into..😉

Nita, it is proof of how pathetic the serial was if I turned into a sadist writing this OS and today almost six months afterwards, I still feel it was right penning this story.

And for an Sadist heart like mine ..This OS was too perfect.. And i loved it no doubt, i felt Swara pain no doubt .But i loved it too.. It was the perfect OS for my sadist mind.. Though this Os was full on Swara POV..How can i still hurt more for Sanskar and his undying love for her😭..He lived right above her..That him i know..He loves little too perfectly and while i dont doubt Swara love for him..I just believe she takes him for granted but you did answer that in Another one of your OS..When i first read it was Sanskar fault in it i was literally confused for awhile till i read it ..Sure i will unres about that OS there.. My train of thoughts sometime get bit zig zag 😆

This OS was my way of making Swara suffer for what she did, and as we all know, she was not redeemed, though the serial ended. And Sanskaar, no one can love like him.

I loved it Nyna dear..I who always wanted an happily ever after for my SwaSan as turned into an sadist..Makers better wake up and give me Swara redemption track😡..Or i am done with SwaSan..

I don't think we can ever get over SwaSan, the show is long over, the forum is quite dead and we are stilling writing FFs.😆😆

Love

Nita

Dear Nita,

Replied in blue above. Missing you loads,

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite
Nyna dear,

Painfully beautiful!

I am sorry, I wont be able to leave a reply which this piece deserves. Got burnt yesterday as boiled milk fell upon my entire self.

But, I loved this one.

Love
- Harshada

Dear Harshada,

Oh it must have hurt terribly, and you should not be worrying about things like leaving a comment. I just cannot even imagine the pain, Please take care of yourself. And get well soon.

Hoping and praying for a very quick recovery and as less of pain as possible.

loads of love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Seriously.

👏

Im satisfied... I cried man you made me cry.. it's still aching hear.. in my hear... You know I switched of the light to hide my tears from my husband...

I thought I have to watch faults in our Stars again to get a sad mood to write next part... Now I'm all sad..😭..

He was living above her... Always listening to her songs.. ohhh how much he is loving her... Nope im not going to waste my time on her... Today episode shit.. she was getting on my nerves... I loved the lrecap.its my life I'll drink liquor or poisons its non of your concern... Wow. Vk...

Mmmuah darling...

Love you a loads and loads..

Kam...

Dear Kam,

I now remember which update followed and am glad the I could help. I am also feeling quite happy, even today, that at least in my OS, Swara got the punishment she deserved, though Sanskaar did suffer along with her. But then no one can love like him right, so it is unavoidable to make him not suffer for her. She never realised, she knew she found her inspiration in the Sargam office but never thought that Sanskaar was literally her inspiration. She died without knowing, how close Sanskaar was to her, and how far she had pushed him away.

Missing you so much.

love,

Nyna

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Oh yes, it does Nyna...
I literally couldnt stop tears yesterday because the pain was quite unbearable.

But I am fine for now. The skin a bit below right side of stomach got damaged quite bad. Got few blisters.

Thank you ... I do need recovery wishes now.

Love
- Harshada

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Dear Harshada,

My wishes and prayers are always with you:

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Thank you very much Nyna:-)

I am a kind of person who believe, good wishes always work. So thank you 😳

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: elsanna
😭😭words mere words... can't define the agony of this OS... I am still crying😭

Tani

Dear Tani,

Agony is the right word, I was so burning in agony when I saw Swara's inane behaviour, that I poured it into this OS. But the writer in me is glad that I could make you cry.😳

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: raaz19
No words an describe how beautiful it was to read...Unbelievable they were so close yet so far...
Loved it. ..

Nyna your a absolute star when it comes to differentiate there shade of love ..hope the track in the future lighting the feeling you have today..beautiful written as always. .

Razia

Dear Razia,

Yes they were close physically, he lived out his life in the Sargam Academy where she spent most of her life too. But then the distance between them, Swara had to seek him out and actively work towards being forgiven, instead she simply waited her life out. In the end, she dies at the same time and even then, it is his spirit that comes to take her.

And yes, this is also a kind of love, one that they had but never found among the lost opportunities.

The serial did not have a single feeling of wanting to be forgiven for Swara, right? They made him ask forgiveness, on his knees😡😡

love,

Nyna