Sanskaar's Monologues---The Dark Storm--Updt PG 1

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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+ 19

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Sush , Nynu, Sonu 🤗🤗

So very touched by the Res's 😊🤗 😳

Nynu...😆 in your case, by the 3 letter word that shall not be named 🤣

Almost through. Shall be back (*touch wood*) within the hour

Love

Viji

It will not be named😡 ... Moving on one hour

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Sush , Nynu, Sonu 🤗🤗

So very touched by the Res's 😊🤗 😳

Nynu...😆 in your case, by the 3 letter word that shall not be named 🤣

Almost through. Shall be back (*touch wood*) within the hour

Love

Viji

I is waiting and writing - will post if it reaches an acceptable shape yet to break for lunch too.

And that three letter word is henceforth banned from all the lexicons of the Universe😡😡😡

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Nynu, Nita My Dears...Feel bad I made you wait. 🤗🤗🤗

I have updated it now. Second post, in Page 1. I am very nervous about it, please do read and let me know what you felt.

Being rather a new style for me, I am on tenterhooks. 😳 Give me your frank feedback though; I am a big girl, I can take it. 😆 😉

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Viji

I am late but I am here ..😛

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Viji
I am late but I am here ..😛

Lucky sweetheart 🤗🤗🤗

Let me know what you felt after you read. Am quite nervous, since I have tried a new style here---All monologue, and in the first person, too.

Lots of Love,

-----Viji

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Res viji dearest 😳
Unres
Viji,
My words would not be enough to tell u how excellent it is. I am absolutely speechless with story. No words coming in my brain to express the beauty of this story. Sanskar my gosh! Too broken yet trying to control his emotions. What should I call him. Maybe a knight. Knight who is ever ready to protect his lady in light who has broken his heart into innumerable pieces. All he needed was a peaceful hug and soothing words from her. And he will be all set for a new battle. Is is too much to expect from that person who is his wife and his love. For whom he has given himself totally. And ever ready to take the blows meant for her. I don't think this is too much to expect.
Yet he knows a scratch on swara would give a deep wound on him. He wants to give her punishment yet doesn't want her get any hurt. Ironic, isn't.
Love u loads
Nivi

Unressed in blue.

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Sanya17

@Sanya17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

It was just too good you have portrayed sanskar emotions so wonderfully so perfectly

Sanskar situation reminded me of the dialogue "nafrat pas ane na de mohabbat dur Jane na de "

He tries hating swara but even just by imagining her pain he feels 100* more pain than her he gets panic attack

You are wonderful at first person narration too I loved first person narration you should write more stories on first person narration you portrays the emotion so so beautifully so wonderfully

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Lucky sweetheart 🤗🤗🤗

Let me know what you felt after you read. Am quite nervous, since I have tried a new style here---All monologue, and in the first person, too.

Lots of Love,

-----Viji

Ok now seriously tell me .. are u possessed by Sanskaar ?..This is brilliance darlin ...👏⭐️ You read him in and out .❤️.👏 and I totally agree on How VK pours life into Sanskaar its hard to differentiate one from other .. and this man do does inspire us a lot

I always wondered the multitude of emotions most of forum members feel or should I say are evoked by Sanskaar ..I mean his every action has an reaction on us ..Sorry Fidaa had too much side effect as related to physics😆 on me ..

But jokes Apart ... Where Do I start and Where Do I end ?..I am at loss of words . Those lines Viji dialogues ..I keep telling you ..always you are just bang on darlin...how well you put them to use..⭐️

It just tore my heart reading him... in this pain ..in your words The level of impact it had ...👏.👏 Sanskaar could have never imagined ,that one trait of hers which made him fall for her .. keeping others happiness herself ..that's would be the one to doom his life ..I really wish CV's will not let Sanskaar forgive Swara easily ..

But one moment which had me .. Sanskaar torn between his love and hate when he reads the lines on whisky bottle ( Sounded as Fascinating as Sanskaar , We need only the best for our sweetheart na 😉) .. How it reminds him of Swara .. That was outstanding👏

We are getting more with episodes right ??...

Love would not be appropriate for what I felt for this piece .. but all I can say is ❤️ it .. and Dark Storm ..I can totally imagine sunny

Love

Lucky

PS ; Feeling Nostalgic - Sanskaar's monologues reminded me of Nimmi's Chronicles 😭😭 I miss her

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

My Dearest Nivi, Sanya & Lucky 🤗🤗🤗

So immensely touched by your warm words. You have really made my day very special, with your lovely feedback. I am literally feeling as if I am soaring somewhere between the Stratosphere and the Ionosphere, now. 😉 😳

Please bear with me for some delays in my individual reverts; I have been postponing some urgent work in order to post this Drabble/ Monologue, and now need to get that done. I also need to still send out PMs. 😊

But in the meantime----I feel so humbled and blessed, by the love and motivation in your comments. As I mentioned, this is a little bit of an experimental style for me----and I am thrilled that you felt it worked well.

Loads and Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Res Viji. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Hey Viji! 🤗
U know what? I seriously feel that the CV's just provided our VK and the name Sanskar to u and u moulded the character 'Sanskar'. 😳 I mean I really feel like u were the one who created Sanskar, not the CV's. 😉 Otherwise how can u write so perfectly about each and every feeling of what Sanskar feels like. This monologue was beyond words! Simply mindblowing!! 👏 Each and every emotions of Sanskar was perfect. 😉 So perfect that I could empathize with his situation. 😳 I loved and enjoyed reading this monologue so much!! ❤️ Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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