Sanskaar's Monologues---The Dark Storm--Updt PG 1

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

My Dearest Aheli🤗🤗

So touched by your warm words, I shall reply in detail tomorrow. I am just thrilled that you could feel Sanskaar's emotions, his pain in this one.😳That is a lovely compliment.☺️

Loads of Love

Viji

Love u Viji dearest. 🤗 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Viji dear, u take rest. 😃 Replies can wait. 😳 Take care dearest. 🤗

Thanks 😊 I am relaxing with a nice, steaming mug of adrak and elaichi chai now. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
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Hi Sonu sweetheart 🤗🤗

So touched by your comment yaar. 😳 ☺️ I was very moved when you said that you cried, reading about Sanskaar's pain. I cried a bit when I wrote it, too. 😭😭

Will reply in detail tomorrow 🤗🤗

Lots of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Love u Viji dearest. 🤗 🤗

Love you Loads too 🤗 🤗

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fangirl-swasan

@fangirl-swasan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

How do you do it every single time? The way you conveyed Sanskar's pain was spell bounding. I will again say what I wrote for your story the,color green that you weave magic with your words. They way you craft your stories always leaves me awestruck. I kind of support Sanskar more in this track like I get his pain and his anguish. I could never fathom that Swara the one who ran from jail to be with him will leave him willingly for her sister. The injustice of her decision irks me. The fact that CV's are yet to show her pov or her sense of guilt also pisses me off. I just want her to realize where she went wrong. That in midst of making her dream castles of her family she is,ignoring her reality. I loved it please write more:)

LOVE

Sara

P.S: Sorry for the mistakes was typing from my phone the first time

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Hey Sara 🤗🤗

So very touched by your comment. Your warm words really made my evening. Shall reply to your comment in detail, as well as your post on my "The Color Green" thread.

I feel really happy to know that you've read and enjoyed some of my fics. In case you're interested, all my completed SwaSan works are on my index. link to my index is on my siggy, at the bottom of all my forum posts.

Lots of Love

Viji

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

nowadays it seems sooo easy to cry after reading your works...you penned down Sanskar's feeling beautifully...Swara was supposed to be his salvation and ahe left him...but d mere thought of hurting her hurts him first...loved every word of it...it us just very beautifully written...thnx fr d pm

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: kriti_sologar
nowadays it seems sooo easy to cry after reading your works...you penned down Sanskar's feeling beautifully...Swara was supposed to be his salvation and ahe left him...but d mere thought of hurting her hurts him first...loved every word of it...it us just very beautifully written...thnx fr d pm

My Dearest Kriti 🤗🤗

I am so very happy to hear that you loved this. I cried a bit while writing it too. 😭😭

I am immensely touched that you felt I had portrayed Sanskaar's emotions very well. That is a lovely compliment, for he is a very compelling character, with a lot of depth to his nature, many fascinating layers, edges and shades.

True, he is completely heartbroken and shattered that Swara left him. He is so anguished and bitter, he wants to take revenge on her. But...the thought of hurting her, hurts him like a thousand cuts. He hates that he still loves her...but he loves her, nevertheless.

Hope Swara realizes the error of her ways, and goes out of her way, to succor and heal Sanskaar. She has to do a lot, to win his trust and woo him back again.

Lots of Love

Viji

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Dear viji...

Thanks so much for the pm as always...The seem to be building up in my library of unread works...but when I saw the tittle I just couldn't resist to read..

So here I am at work pretending to be doing something important but really shutting inside this is just amazing...made my day this update has after the day has been such a drag...

I cannot express how much I enjoyed the way you have shown sanskaar inner most feelings...just like your memoir above one can see the intense hate he has and feel his inner mind battle with the love he still carriers...The hurt has been some very symbolically through the description of the magalsutra and the sindoor...although he doesn't value it like the essence of his emotion which is trust...It took me back to the time when he wishes he could shower these blessing upon her during the time of diwali...It was just magical that he feels that these are just for show...

The choice of beverage made me smirk and think yep that's our dark knight whom never does things have measured...so along with the loss of love he is trying to create a illusion to all that he is okay and his companion...or shall I say wisky will always be with him...

At the end the line made me cry inner tears for although he can temporary hate he can never squash to feelings of love after all the light of love has touched him deeply..In your world he may be the demon but she will still be his angle...

If only the angle remembered that her knight is also a fragile soul and needs to be loved like all the people around her..

Loved it all..especially the message of this piece that some wounds can never be forgiven easily even if time may make them fade they still are locked inside us somewhere deep..

Just as you have shown us with sanskaar..

Just like vk you deserve a standing ovation for this piece...🤗

Sorry for the reply...

Razia 😛

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

My Dearest Raz 🤗🤗

So happy to have you on this thread, and very touched by your warm words yaar. Am going all 😳☺️, really feel blessed with your lovely words of motivation.

I am about to hit bed now. 😊 Will reply in detail to your most insightful and analytical comment tomorrow. I'm sure going to have sweet dreams tonight, with all the warmth and love being showered on this piece. 😳🤗

Loads of Love

Viji

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