Sanskaar's Monologues---The Dark Storm--Updt PG 1

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kamila.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Hey viji. You might not remember me.. But I often read your os.. I really wanted to read your destined by choice but I'm stuck with the life.. in future I'll get with it..

Coming to this.. it was fabulously written... I loved it.. it didnt seems as Your first attempt. The agony ,pain frustration semma.. let me use my mother tongue here as for now I'm flooded with emotion... yenna solradhu.. you made me cry..

Swara no words for her..

Hope I get to read more from you...

Lucky and Nafisa.. just awesome work.. I forgot one minute that I'm married... Shit me.. wonderful work dearies..

Love you a loads..

Kam...

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Bravo! That monologue...what a monologue it is....kind of made me shiver...geez, would take Sanskar the dark knight over Sanskar the fairy god mother anytime. Dear dear Swara, you shouldn't have broken him. See, broken glass...cuts!

Will be back hopefully. Till then my humble summary of the thriller ride this piece was.

"It's not you I can't let go, but the fact that you let me go. Curse you my broken heart, will you stop feeling for a minute?"

Loads of love, and pats on your back,

Saku

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Bravo! That monologue...what a monologue it is....kind of made me shiver...geez, would take Sanskar the dark knight over Sanskar the fairy god mother anytime. Dear dear Swara, you shouldn't have broken him. See, broken glass...cuts!
Will be back hopefully. Till then my humble summary of the thriller ride this piece was.
"It's not you I can't let go, but the fact that you let me go. Curse you my broken heart, will you stop feeling for a minute?"
Loads of love, and pats on your back,
Saku

My Dearest Saku 🤗🤗

I am just so immensely touched by your beautiful words. It made me feel absolutely on top of the world, to know that you loved the portrayal of Sanskaar's emotions so much. This made you shiver? 😳☺️ I felt so blessed by that, glad I could make you feel that way.

I loved your very astute summary. ...and felt absolutely thrilled again, that you felt this was a thriller ride. 🤗

Will await your detailed take, as and when time permits. Wish you the Very Best of Luck for your papers. 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji

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EkNoKiNashedi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Oh. My. Shit😳

I keep getting shock after shock whenever I stumble upon a writing piece in this place, or rather when I get a PM. I should be used to by now, especially since you wrote it. Didn't you write a drabble another day where SwaSan had a scene post she comes back to mansion and vows to woo him back? I didn't reply in the thread but gushed about it in Twitter 😆😛

I loved loved loved it! Dark! Heroes are my bae and I am totally digging I -don't- give -a -shit Sanskaar these days. He's angry and rightly so, how long he can bottle things down inside? He's lashing out and though I love Swara, we all know she deserves all of it. It's time for her redemption. A nice role reversal. Can you write a drabble on Swara's redemption? Maybe a non linear one where Sanskaar thinks back how she won him back this time-maybe after they had hot make-up sex😉😆☺️

Thank you for PM. You rock! 🤗👏

ETA-that first line... When I am bad I am better😈😎

Edited by .Avengers. - 8 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Hey viji. You might not remember me.. But I often read your os.. I really wanted to read your destined by choice but I'm stuck with the life.. in future I'll get with it..
Coming to this.. it was fabulously written... I loved it.. it didnt seems as Your first attempt. The agony ,pain frustration semma.. let me use my mother tongue here as for now I'm flooded with emotion... yenna solradhu.. you made me cry..

Swara no words for her..

Hope I get to read more from you...

Lucky and Nafisa.. just awesome work.. I forgot one minute that I'm married... Shit me.. wonderful work dearies..

Love you a loads..

Kam...

Hey Kamila 🤗 🤗

Of course I remember you; Ongala Epiidi Marraka Mudiyum? 😉 😳 Yup, your mother tongue is my mother tongue as well. 😆

So very happy to hear that you loved this OS. Yeah, this is my first attempt at writing a fic in the first person, and wholly as a monologue. Previously I have included monologues and dialogues embedded in my fics, but not as standalone---and certainly not in the first person. 😳 Really, really touched to know that you loved it so much.

Sanskaar feels so much anguish, heartbreak and frustration---it is only because of his iron will and steely strength of character that he is able to keep himself together. 😭 😭 I cried a bit when I wrote this as well----so happy to hear that you could feel Sanskaar's pain.

No rush on my other fics yaar; read when convenient. All my completed SwaSan works are on my index. Link to my index is on my siggy, at the bottom of all my forum posts.

And the banners by Lucky and Nafisa were fab! 😊

Loads of Love, & Maribadiyum Sandhikarom, soon, I hope. 😉 🤗

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: .Avengers.
Oh. My. Shit😳

I keep getting shock after shock whenever I stumble upon a writing piece in this place, or rather when I get a PM. I should be used to by now, especially since you wrote it. Didn't you write a drabble another day where SwaSan had a scene post she comes back to mansion and vows to woo him back? I didn't reply in the thread but gushed about it in Twitter 😆😛

I loved loved loved it! Dark! Heroes are my bae and I am totally digging I -don't- give -a -shit Sanskaar these days. He's angry and rightly so, how long he can bottle things down inside? He's lashing out and though I love Swara, we all know she deserves all of it. It's time for her redemption. A nice role reversal. Can you write a drabble on Swara's redemption? Maybe a non linear one where Sanskaar thinks back how she won him back this time-maybe after they had hot make-up sex😉😆☺️

Thank you for PM. You rock! 🤗👏

ETA-that first line... When I am bad I am better😈😎

Hey Riya 🤗 🤗

So very glad to know you loved this yaar. 🤗 😳 And I am going all 😳 ☺️ at your words about my writing.

That drabble OS-- Yes, I think you are referring to "The Color Black". 😊 I've written a sort of/ kind of sequel to that one too, an OS titled "The Color Green". Do catch up with it, if you can. It might interest you----no, there isn't a make up sex scene...😳 😆 but there certainly is a rather passion-blended-with possessive-jealousy scene. 😉

I agree completely, how long can Sanskaar bear all that pain silently? He's going to explode, sooner rather than later. And that's very true, what you said about the role reversal of sorts. It is indeed, Swara who has to now redeem herself.

I have always been a fan of the layers, shades, facets and edges in Sanskaar's character. Makes him very compelling to write about. 😊

Cheers

----Viji

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago

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EkNoKiNashedi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

The third part can be The color Red☺️🤪

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: .Avengers.
The third part can be The color Red☺️🤪

I know...😆 I am already planning it. I have another SwaSan 4S I need to complete---'Games People Play'. And then, I have promised to write 'The Color Red'. 😳 😉

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

My Dearest Nivi, Lucky, Sanya & Aheli 🤗 🤗

Will reply to your most lovely comments tomorrow, dears. Wanted to do so today evening, but am feeling a bit tired now. And rather emotional from writing the monologue too. 😳 Need some time to do justice in my replies, to your very analytical and insightful comments.

Love you Loads, for making my afternoon & evening so very special. 😳 🤗

-----Viji

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
My Dearest Nivi, Lucky, Sanya & Aheli🤗🤗

Will reply to your most lovely comments tomorrow, dears. Wanted to do so today evening, but am feeling a bit tired now. And rather emotional from writing the monologue too.😳Need some time to do justice in my replies, to your very analytical and insightful comments.

Love you Loads, for making my afternoon & evening so very special.😳🤗

-----Viji

Viji dear, u take rest. 😃 Replies can wait. 😳 Take care dearest. 🤗

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