Sanskaar's Monologues---The Dark Storm--Updt PG 1

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res.. I am first and as always the wait begins..

Unres

Hi Viji dearest🤗

You know this track is only made awesome by my friends..Because it sheer torture when half of your OTP is being stupid😆...And you my dear Viji ..How much i love you for writing this lovely OS that makes me dance everytime i read it

You were worried about writing monologues but dear this was awesome...So Awesome i say ,Sanskar pain..We really do connect with him the most right.. His pain at being apart from his love..His whole realization about his life before her and after her..I loved it dearest..

And the thing is i dont want him to forgive her easily atleast not till she does some realization..Because that the only way i can still love my OTP from now on as just one sorry is defiantely not gonna cut it out..Given how Swara is reacting to his words so far..

Why am i talking about the show..It always gonna disappoint me..But your OS will always be the one that makes me so happy.. I really loved it viji dear..And i hate the track but i am happy for the awesome OS i get to read.. I still got several unres to be made on your works ..Give me some more time i try to get there asap..

With Love

Nita

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Res.. I am first and as always the wait begins..

Nita my dear 🤗🤗

I am so immensely touched that you've res'd, before I've even posted the drabble. 😳 Love you loads, buddy. This piece is dedicated to my dear pals like you. 🤗

Love,

----Viji

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 9 years ago

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Nita my dear 🤗🤗

I am so immensely touched that you've res'd, before I've even posted the drabble. 😳 Love you loads, buddy. This piece is dedicated to my dear pals like you. 🤗

Love,

----Viji

Well your OS is like an treat to read . so of course I will Res.. Even though I hate that word.. And to read my name in dedication I am touched as always.. 😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Well your OS is like an treat to read . so of course I will Res.. Even though I hate that word.. And to read my name in dedication I am touched as always.. 😳

Res is a 3 letter word, huh? 😆 🤣 This is like parents warning kids, not to use 'that' 3 letter word. 😉 😆

I have no problems with Res's dear---whenever time permits to Un res is fine, there is no pressure or rush whatsoever.

I am off now to type out the monologue. 😊 Will be back soonest I can. 🤗

Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Res viji dearest 😳

Hey Nivi 🤗🤗

Will be back soonest I can. Hard at work typing it out now. 😳 😊

Love,

----Viji

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

And I to ***

Not using that word though😭

Part un*** (still not using that word😊)

Sanskaar's monologue - I am not sure as to why you were worried, I did not read you at all, it was Sanskaar all the way. The way he thinks, his every feeling, that raw emotion, every breath is actually a knife to his heart, which was healed from its cracks only to be shattered to pieces, bits which can never be put together.

The description on the whiskey bottle, reminding him of her kisses and how enamoured he was by her. All his thoughts revolve around her, do they not? Even his hatred for her is actually a rage against his helplessness at being unable to truly hate her.

But I think the greatest change that has come, is over us, me at least. Till a few months ago, I also subscribed to the view of him being dark, who was won over by the pure dazzling light that Swara emitted. But now I think their equation is more like this quote (there is ample confusion as to whom this is credited to😕)

"In every angel a demon hides,

In every demon an angel strides"

Today Swara is a fallen angel and Sanskaar is a demon of light. It is now the story of an angel who fell in love with a demon or vice versa (you decide who is who) and the result is chaos, always.

I just loved it, especially the rationale behind the whiskey. I shall come back for a detailed comment. (this is better than that banned word, I feel less guilty😳😳😳)

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res
unres
let me wipe my tears 1st...
Like i said in lucky's stry kuch chize aap mehsus kar sakte ho bt byan nh kar sakte..
Same it is in ur stry also .i cn feel it in ur stry bt cnt xpress it..
Amaizingly written..
Sanskar's pain touch my heart...its painfull..
Sanskar lv hs only 1wrd ie swara...wo chahke vi usse chot nh pohocha sakta..
I dnt knw hw cn swara hurt him 2a extend tht...ssshhh!*shaking head*;-(
love u & love ur writing

Edited by LoveSonu2408 - 9 years ago