Vajra An Elven Tale Updated chapter 23 B pg 4 (18/12/17)

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hi,

Chapter 17 is now updated on page 3, it is split into two parts. I will be posting the second part later, when I have time to finish typing it. Working from a rather untrustworthy computer I wanted to post what I had before I lost it to some technical mimbo - jimbo.

Hope you all will enjoy. Will try to PM, forgive me if you don't get one. Again, the computer is the culprit. Let me know your thoughts😊

Love,

Sakura

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Res 😊 😈😈😈😈

Yesss 😉 Me Firssst. 😈

Un res might take, though. 😕 😭

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

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@Viji,

Haha I just scrapped you, but you're already here! 🤗 Welcome dearest sis!

Take your time, meanwhile since you were daydreaming earlier I turned our prince's eyes viridian ;-)

Edited by Sakura24 - 8 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sakura24
@Viji,
Haha I just scrapped you, but you're already here! 🤗 Welcome dearest sis!
Take your time, meanwhile since you were daydreaming earlier I turned our prince's eyes viridian ;-)

Sigh...green eyes are the rarest among humans. No wonder the Suave Yuvraj Sanskaar is an Elf. 😉😆

Viridian...with flashes of aquamarine and mountain lake green. A fleck or two of emerald. 😳

Okies, enough daydreaming, I need to get back to work! 😆

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Saku🤗

Where is my part two ?? I demand it.I hate these cliff hangers ..😕

Waise sanskaar is most of FF's/ SS/ OS by girls gang fascinate me so much but if someone haunts me with those eyes of his gotta be only Yuvraaj Sanskaar😳

Twists Saku .. Laksh I am sure was with Ragini / Suvanna - why did he go to Pratula😲 Swara realised it was yuvraaj sanskaar What are u planning to do next ? Sanskaar getting shot ,swara had this vision in one of previous chapters I remember .

Lady Like always you leave me with so many questions and few answers How do you manage to do that? ..genius wicked lady 😆. Where is 2nd part ?

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Lucky

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Sanya17

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Posted: 8 years ago

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so swara got to know sanskar's reality what will happen now i am waiting it is so full of suspense suspense that it is hard to wait update part 2 soon

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Res for 17 baby

Unres..

Sakura dear...

Im sorry for reverting late..but what to say busy life..n i cansay mostly everyone from forum appears busy intheir lives...😆

I will give quick comment...update was super exciting...sensational..👏

Starting with awww swasan dance.😳.he surely knows how to charm a women.n he literally tell truth to her..evertime...if she was smart enough she would guessed he is vajra king...my yuvraaj...her to be yuvraaj too...😳 but these moments were short lived as rishi agarwal men attacked...😡 i hate them for destroying swasan moments...but i was indeed nessesary...for story

Suvanna/ragini part was nice... i still cant predict what she is planning since long...but she got lucky...n that bad news...😕i think now they all will conspire n make lucky against yuvraaj sanky..soon fightbetween brothers begin...😭

Climax was thrilling..😉..wohooo...swasan escaping those hired goons...sanky let his mask slips nswara finally know his identity😊...im soo excited for next now...waiting for their confrontation...n sanky got hit..may be weget lucky n have swasan intense scene😳..super excited babes..love u...waiting...😃

Again sorry im late...😭 n also want to tell u you are brilliant writer darling...😳

Love

Talia

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Sigh...green eyes are the rarest among humans. No wonder the Suave Yuvraj Sanskaar is an Elf. 😉😆

Viridian...with flashes of aquamarine and mountain lake green. A fleck or two of emerald. 😳

Okies, enough daydreaming, I need to get back to work! 😆

My Dearest Saku 🤗🤗🤗

I'm not able to make this Un Res as detailed as I'd like, owing to a literal mountain of paperwork still to be done prior to final returns filing (last date---17/10) 😕 😲.

But I wanted to quickly drop in to say: outstanding imagination, creativity and imagery, as always from you. The scene of chaos on the cruise---contrasting so vividly with the tender, almost intimate moments between the Eye and the Oneiro, during their dance in the previous chapter. 👏 👏 😳

I remember that this moment, of Yuvraj Sanskaar getting shot----Swara had this vision when Sanskaar touched her, in an earlier chapter. Was it when he was tucking a lock of hair behind her ears, and tenderly touched her earlobe? I seem to recall it that way. ☺️

So he is hurt...hopefully, not very seriously. Doesn't seem to be at least, so that's a tremendous relief. But now Swara knows that Mr Maheshwari is The Yuvraj Sanskaar. 😕 Wonder how she is going to react---she has a lot of misconceptions about him as well, just as he used to have about her. But the fact of their inextricable connection, his own tremendous pull to her, and his all enveloping tenderness and love for her, have convinced him of the responsibility he owes her, of the strength of his own feelings. There is no way he is going to willingly hand her over for punishment by the machiavellian duo of Annapurna and Aryaman.

Lakshya, for now, appeared to be loyal to Sanskaar...not wanting to succumb to temptation of a coup, which was so obviously being hinted at by his uncle (and of course, implicitly carrying his mother's blessing). But tied as he in now, in thr web spun by Suvanna and Ragini, what is he going to do, I wonder?

So Suvanna/ Ragini have taken Lakshya as a weapon to Pratula. A weapon which she boasts, is powerful as none other---a Vajra prince. How would Pratula go about turning Lakshya against Sanskaar...Am very curious, and so very eager to read more!

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sakura24
@Nyna
Take your time dear waiting to hear from you!

Dear Saku,

Unres page 10. Will be back for Chapter 17.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Dear Saku,

I am back for Chapter 17😊

Though you titled it viridean and gold, it was like the mask in the previous chapter shattering to reveal the chrysochlorous eyes of the Yuvraj of the Vajras, the very man she had to avoid. But she could not or rather would not, she had to be drawn to him. Rishi Agarwal's plan failed??(though the vision which Swara had, causes a niggling doubt).

Sanskaar is hurt but I am sure it is not a serious wound. And now that he has actually stolen her, as he did promise, I wonder how she will be once she sees and understands the true prince (could this be the start of the end, which Swara saw in her vision, a very bitter Sanskaar and herself, presumabley before the battle foretold - I will go back and read😊)

On the other hand, Suvana / Ragini/witch/changeling, I loved her encounter with her father, she managed to stun him once again, as she presented Laksh (captured /enchanted by her?) to take part in the warrior emulations.

Annapurna never expect this and would be totally upset - her son in the grip of a witch/changeling and the Yuvraj determined to bring the eye to Vajratheerta but never to hand her over. The battle promises to get even more interesting.

love,

Nyna

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