Ha, I am late. But that is no unusual thing I believe.😃
Sakura🤗
How I missed reading this story. And Yup , you are right. I have no power whatsoever now. My poor old account😭
But let me first hold the torch for chapter 17.
Rishi Agrawal, I hate this man. Sending out goons or whoever they were to catch a girl for example experiments !😡 Never mind the fact that the next chapter reveals he is merely a puppet , he deserves hell. First he goes on and spoils my ArHan dreams ( I have a soft spot for princess and her protector or anyone kind of stories😆) and now Sanskaar is poisoned because of him and that lady...
BTW who actually is that lady ??? I am guessing...Annapurna..maybe..
And who is the woman she got rid of ? Arya ?
And how can I forget Shekhar ? I mean dude , that girl cared for you like a real father, pretends to be your daughter , when she can be better off herself and you go out to reveal her powers to a scumbag of your friend... Wow
Kudos to you Sakura, you have characters here whom I as of now , I hate. A general feeling that isn't generally there in me.
Suvanna( I hope I spelled it right ) is really something. So let me sum it all up. She wanted approval from her father, is a powerful sorceress, pities people enough to not kill them for dark powers, is using Ragini, loves Lakshya and still ends up making a puppet out of him or is he just acting ? There can be a greater agenda after all. Maybe the first time she introduced herself , she went on ahead to tell him who Swara is. As far as I think , Laksh thinks he loves Swara but he wants revenge on the eye. And he is someone who gets manipulated easily, so I think it maybe possible. I just want him to have sum guts and be cunning. He can act well afterall . He faked the memory loss pretty well.
This tournament... What is the prize ?? And what benefit Suvanna reaps by making Lakshya fight in it ? And is Suvanna currently in Ragini's body ? Means there is no Ragini ? What about Suvanna's original body ?
Saving the best for the last...
I just loved the fact in chapter 16 that Sanskaar never backed down even after coming to know of his brother's feelings. Well the brother 'thinks' that he has some feelings..
That dance scene , how beautifully it was done. You manage to bring out some new romantic , mysterious , enchanting and what not traits in every scene you have written about them.
Swara finally comes to know who he his. And I am so relieved that she realizes the dreams she had with the green eyed stranger , were with the Vajra prince. And he was not the one torturing her.
I think she is no more under Sanskaar's charm. He got injured while saving her, she has to believe that the prince is no monster.
But the major ques remains is about their journey from here. Yes, they both are attracted towards each other and some misunderstandings about each other are starting to vanish. But there are many left. And they are no way deep in love with each other. There are still on the road, there is some care, some force pulling them towards each other , but I see a long road. I love this story Sakura, I absolutely do.
The city has closed its gate on Sanskaar... What does that mean? Are the people no more in favor of him ?
And the fact that he wanted to send Swara back to Nagas made me fall more in love with him . Maybe Swara also sees this concern.
Oh, I missed Dida , when are you bringing her back ?
Waiting for the update..
- Ahana
P.S. Never mind the words I used up there, I just believe, I vented out my frustrations. By the way , do you watch South Korean Dramas ?