SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 31

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Viji,

Will I also get two comments:

Just kidding, I simply love your take so at times I get greedy too. Take your time, you would be busy with your chapters😊

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Res for Chapter 5: Can't wait to read it!

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

I shall split my comment into two 😆😉 So 2 un res's will be done. 😊

Love

Viji

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Take your time, I still have to unres for your chapter 11, (I shall try to do by tonight) and I still have Fitoor and GPP.

Hopefully Viji and Lucky and Shru will update in the next couple of days and the res list will grow again.😭 ( it grows in geometric progression, which is not at all harmonic😡😡😡).

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

You really are a sweetheart 🤗

Update today or tomorrow morning?😳

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

You really are a sweetheart 🤗

Update today or tomorrow morning?😳

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nynu 🤗...I loved it .😳

U know how much I love your titles .and I am so glad you ventured into PS .. Sigs for chapter are just getting better 👏👏..and I love the words on every sig 😳...The lighter ones with less opacity...⭐️..

And this is the best, coming from you, I was so worried about how they would be turning out to be and if you say that they are getting better, then I am in heaven. But PS is addictive, I spent quite some time on the banners (earlier did them in Luna Pic before I downloaded PS😉)

Now coming to chapter .You said not much of Swasan but I never missed them . There was this beautiful feel around whole chapter , their constant presence was felt even when they are not with each other .That's absolutely wonderful👏

I did not want to get anybody's hopes up, because though the chapter does revolve around them and it presents their feelings and how they fared in those three years, it technically was not a SwaSan chapter. But now that you say you could feel their presence, I am quite relieved.

Now Laksh and Ragini ..How much I love them here ..😳 they are such a sweet hearts and Parvati Gadodia 😆 u got her dialogues bang on⭐️ and loved the connections established to get Swasan back to each other ...phd ..review doctorate ..very well thought of and loved that bit of how Laksh and Ragini were prepared for Swara's nahi..and came up with PLAN B .😆

I always felt that Ragini could put her manipulative skills to good use (it would then be labelled as an ability to convince people😉) and impulsiveness need not always be a bad trait. So though they appear to be selfish, they are actually the ones who are attempting to set the situation right, after all as Ragini correctly observed, waiting for time or destiny to set matters right was not the correct thing to do.

Parvati - our blustery grandmother, she truly does not mince words right. I was a trifle worried if I could get the essence of who she is using those hindi dialogues, but I seem to have passed muster😳

Well, when I have Swara with a PhD in operations research, I had to have her put her doctorate to good use (and if you recall chapter 3, that is why Sanskaar wanted her to pursue that particular field so that she could put it to use with the Maheswari Enterprises).

Ragini knows her sister very well, which is why she used the review of Sanskaar' achievements as a bait, knowing that Swara would refuse citing familiarity which would then make it impossible for her to refuse the actual assignment (so plan B was actually the main plan😉). As Swara noted, she was expertly manipulated into both going back home and working with Sanskaar for three months.😆

My favorite part

Just by hearing voice of swara .. Sanskaar's slipping into peaceful sleep .. I loved loved it😳 and that last bit😕 Swara's condition can totally get it😭 but rage??... OK so what is going to happen next..I am curios and that photo album did come into play..

He had to, he had a regular nightmare, the one he would never speak about. Laksh did notice that Sanskaar did not sleep well. Swara's voice was such a comfort, a voice his heart recognised that he fell asleep, no nightmares to prevent him to sleep. (Remember, her presence is so comfortable, he did fall asleep once earlier too😉)

Swara's rage - is an expression of love, as St. Augustine put it:

"love can be angry...with a kind of anger in which there is no gall, like the dove's and not the raven's."

It is also an expression of deep hurt, but how long will all of that last, it would only serve to burn down any barriers that she would erect to safeguard her heart.

Yes, the photo album played a slight role, but not much. It's role was to convince Ragini and Laksh that Sanskaar would not remember Swara by seeing their photographs.😕

I loved this chappie like always ..😳

And I love that you loved it😳😳

love

lucky

Originally posted by: Nivijo

I am eagerly waiting for swasan confrontation. Well ya the character of ragini currently in the serial pisses me off. She was like a brainy one during the fake marriage fiasco. But to show that she is redeemed they are now showing her like an abla nari 🤢.

Love u loads

Nivi