SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 30

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Posted: 8 years ago

lucky, that was super duper quick. Do let me know😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res sweetheart
Unres

Nyna baby...😊

First plzzz accept 100situps from my side...imsuper late inreply..still got soo many posts to comment...😭specially vijis...😭..i took to long to find my reserve post on this thread...you are doing great job with this story...😉

Coming to chapter 5 ...for me it was quite amazing as well as hopefull..that swasan will meet oneday..😊when i read 3 years n sanky did not get his memory back...my heart broke sooo badly..🥺.3 years..i m scared with this word..YEARS😕...you could write months why year?? ...1095 days of swasan seperation..😕.it is pure cruelty nyna...but you have to shows swara completed her phd n fulfilling sanky dreams..so im forgiving you for this.😉..plzz like serial6 month seperation...write something like that..3 years...But i didnot like 6 month seperation either..heck i dont like seperation😭..specially of swasan...😳

Soo further i enjoyed raglak alot inthis.😃.they did something for swasan ..😉as they were reason both of them are together n soo much in love..i liked mature n thoughtfull raglak...planning n stratigizing to reunite swasan..acting all manipulative in front of dadi...convincing fanily to give swara chance for sanky project indirectly...involving in deeper levels of corporate dealings...they literally cornered swara..closed all door of escape for her which eventually leads to her return...enjoyed loads👏

Well high lights of updates were...ragini showing sanky photo album of engagement n her slip of jeeju word...😳she was soo desperate that sanky notice swara n his pic...😳

Secondly lucky taking sanky to swara's conference😃...n he slept like baby hearing her voice..same like he did first time with swara...loved it...

Soo nyna as you have given us heartbreak with nearly 3 years of seperation😭.i want intense powerfull reunion.😳.nothing less..i know you already done this story but still...want super hot...reunion...much bigger n better than confession n proposal...plzzz..waiting😳

Love u...🤗
Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
I res'd once in anticipation of the chapter. 😆 So here is my Res after you posted it. 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nyna,
This is marvelous, dear. Chala bagundi 👏. Swara's agony for sanskar not remembering her was so emotional. Ragini and laksh's plan is amazing. Hope they both succeed in it. True, ragini can get anything with her innocent face ( i am not being sarcastic). Hope raglak succeed in their plan. Aur tumhari kripa se swasan jaldi se unite ho jaye. Missing their love and care for each other. Update soon. Eagerly waiting. 🤗For the pm.
Love u loads
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res Nyna dewr

Unres😃


Chalo i thought i delayaed it for so long and had to unres now.. How can i make you feel you replied back to all the comments when i am so behind in the aspect😈.. I am evil by the way😆



We talked about this chapter quite few times even before i didnt unres..So if i repeat everything i said before dont blame me 😆.. When i read 3 years in comments i was furious..I hate everything about seperation and i contemplated so hard for the one month seperation in BTM😳..So three years i probably got an mini heart attack when i read it but Nyna as i said reading your update i didnt feel that sadness😳.. It was so beautiful journey of SwaSan i really didnt feel they were seperated at all ..I think it just me but what i meant to say was the seperation aspect did shock me a lot but i loved the update a lot too



Maheshwari family members interest in Sanskar had made me go all happy😃..I dont get it in the show..So yay i am happy i get it in your SS😉...And we both have always contemplated on why we keep the siblings good..But somehow keeping them good gives you such nice moments like this update when they desperately tried to reunite SwaSan..I was more than happy for them😳



And Sanskar is not like the one they used to know.. I get it ..I am really happy you decided to deal with the after effects of ML ,and just not use it a separation troupe and forgot about it like me 😉...It was lovely to read how it has imapcated all their lifes..And they took 3 months to tell about kavitha..I am just glad he didnt feel bad about it ..




Swara i totally get her..If i were her i would stay away from Sanskar too..It really painful..And boy he didnt even recognize her and i totally get her hurt.. So this two are together now thanks to Ragini and laksh ..How are they gonna find themselves back to being together.. That i have to wait and read right..I know i know.. Do update chapter 6 soon..See even i unres ..And that a big accomplishment ..Well i keep saying that to myself..




As always in short i was trying to say i loved the update so so so much..And my dear friend you are an amazing writer..



Lots of love

Nita







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Posted: 8 years ago
Res for Chapter 5: Can't wait to read it!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


lucky, that was super duper quick. Do let me know😳


Nynu 🤗...I loved it .😳

U know how much I love your titles .and I am so glad you ventured into PS .. Sigs for chapter are just getting better 👏👏..and I love the words on every sig 😳...The lighter ones with less opacity...⭐️..

Now coming to chapter .You said not much of Swasan but I never missed them . There was this beautiful feel around whole chapter , their constant presence was felt even when they are not with each other .That's absolutely wonderful👏

Now Laksh and Ragini ..How much I love them here ..😳 they are such a sweet hearts and Parvati Gadodia 😆 u got her dialogues bang on⭐️ and loved the connections established to get Swasan back to each other ...phd ..review doctorate ..very well thought of and loved that bit of how Laksh and Ragini were prepared for Swara's nahi..and came up with PLAN B .😆

My favorite part

Just by hearing voice of swara .. Sanskaar's slipping into peaceful sleep .. I loved loved it😳 and that last bit😕 Swara's condition can totally get it😭 but rage??... OK so what is going to happen next..I am curios and that photo album did come into play..

I loved this chappie like always ..😳

love
lucky


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nivijo

Nyna,

This is marvelous, dear. Chala bagundi 👏. Swara's agony for sanskar not remembering her was so emotional. Ragini and laksh's plan is amazing. Hope they both succeed in it. True, ragini can get anything with her innocent face ( i am not being sarcastic). Hope raglak succeed in their plan. Aur tumhari kripa se swasan jaldi se unite ho jaye. Missing their love and care for each other. Update soon. Eagerly waiting. 🤗For the pm.
Love u loads
Nivi


Dear Nivi,

Swara's agony is certainly making her quite emotional - her whole life is Sanskaar, and knowing that he does not remember her is breaking her and though she knows that it is unreasonable to blame him, she cannot stop herself from doing so.😭😭

Ragini and Laksh - glad you liked their plan, well their role is now done, more or less, the SwaSan interaction should jog something in Sanskaar. Their plan will succeed, with a slight twist (nothing to worry about, though).

I totally get what you said about Ragini, which is why the serial degradation of her character leaves me so angry and frustrated, she is a smaller version of Sanskaar and a deadlier one, but then the serial one is absolutely brainless now😡

There are only two more parts to go, so not too long a wait😊 (this was also supposed to have only two parts, but I kept writing and had to split it into three parts😆).

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

I res'd once in anticipation of the chapter. 😆 So here is my Res after you posted it. 😉


Dear Viji,

Will I also get two comments:

Just kidding, I simply love your take so at times I get greedy too. Take your time, you would be busy with your chapters😊

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago

Take your time, I still have to unres for your chapter 11, (I shall try to do by tonight) and I still have Fitoor and GPP.

Hopefully Viji and Lucky and Shru will update in the next couple of days and the res list will grow again.😭 ( it grows in geometric progression, which is not at all harmonic😡😡😡).

love,
Nyna

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