SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Well my head I spinning with the no of Res I have now.. It always double proportionate to the no of unres I do a day.. I did your yesterday now I got two more Res..😆

I know right... Why are they keep increasing and increasing.. I have a slight headache now.. Had an busy day out till an hour ago.. Tired. Don t wanna read my treasured fifth chapter with an headache.. Will read once my mind is calm so I can enjoy it fully..

P. S you broke our deal and Res first in Viji 3s.. 😆

Yup, and broke it further by giving a short comment (well the reference to the ragaas was too tempting😳) but I have to unres for both the synopsis and the prologue - so I have sort of made up for that. As I wrote there, I just do not understand tennis - I completely switch off😕😕😕

Take your time while I still hunt down my res posts (I think they multiply in the night when I am not on the forum, how do they keep increasing😡😡😡)

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: suwas
Ragini in action. Raglak taking action to try get Swasan together. Great. Sanskar was affected by Swaras voice & had a soothing sound sleep. Does he have some memory of her subconsciously?
My heart goes out for Swara. Absence of any reaction from him is really going to break her already wounded heart. Hope Raglak's plan works.

Can't wait for next part

This is the first time we are interacting, right, great to see you here. Could you let me know your name, if you do not mind?

Ragini in action, if handled properly, would be a treat😉.

Yes, Sanskaar did suffer from nightmares with did not allow him a proper sleep so when he hears Swara's voice he is lulled into a deep comfortable sleep. It is a throwback reference to what he did earlier, so comfortable in Swara's presence that he falls asleep on her shoulder.

Well, I have taken a creative licence when I had Ragini say and the doctor agree - somewhere, Sanskaar misses the woman he no longer knows - call it subconscious or the call of the heart, how could a love such as theirs be truly forgotten?

Yes, it would break her heart but then unknowingly either, Sanskaar cannot hurt her. He will work around this too😉

Will try to be quicker with the next update - only two more to go😊

love,

Nyna

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StarySKY

@StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

#313

Dear Nynu ..🤗

Thank you for PM .. ❤️

I wouldn't Res .. this 3 letters will freaks me out .. I am not hoping to increase the number of my Res .. 😕

So I am commenting as now I have time ..

Reading this chapter give me a pain in my heart .. ( actually it a compliment .. as it so beautifully written I could feel the emotions of all of them )

Sanskar and Swara ..

I feel pity for them .. as they don't desarve that .. they were separated by fate .. with no fault of them ..

Though the thing that doesn't go well with me .. is Swara giving up on her love without trying .. I mean just waiting for him to remember her .. I know she was hurt and too there is the fear for his reaction to her .. but at least she must try .. then decide .. ( I think I said this somewhere in my coment on the chapter 4 )

Sanskar is the one I feel pain the most .. his inability to recall what he missed ..

I am happy that he still have that connection with swara and he can recognize her ..

Ragini and Laksh

I love the two of them .. I like that they are going to bring Swara and Sanskar together again ..

Ragini the mastermind and Laksh is following her every step ..

I am confused by Sanskar reaction to Swara when they met ..

I will wait and see ..

Nynu I love the way you are handling this story ..

I am already in love with it ..

Love

Khushi

Edited by StarySKY - 8 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#314

Almost 3 years nd he has not remembered...
Poor Swara..
But happy to know that he found solace in her voice..

Thanks

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Almost 3 years nd he has not remembered...
Poor Swara..
But happy to know that he found solace in her voice..

Thanks

Dear Bhardwaj (I hope I am right?)

Great to see you here, I adore my regular readers but it is always thrilling to meet new ones who read and take time to drop in a comment.😊

Well, the doctors have all given up hope of him remembering, which is why Ragini came up with that slightly desperate idea, hoping that having Swara in his constant company would help him remember. You would have to read the next chapter to see what exactly happens😊

Poor Swara,indeed, she is the one who has paid the biggest price and she has already reconciled herself to living her life without him, despite the pain it causes her.

Yes, somewhere he does feel her familiar and that warmth brings a lot of comfort, which is why he slept in peace when he heard her voice.

Best,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#316

Dear Khushi,

Yup the word "RES" freak me out too - I have read your comment more than twice and I shall reply a little later, (mostly during the lunch break).

love,

Nyna

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 8 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Khushi,
Yup the word "RES" freak me out too - I have read your comment more than twice and I shall reply a little later, (mostly during the lunch break).

love,
Nyna

I am not gonna type res anymore.Let come up with new words Nyna dear

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 8 years ago

#318

And what did i read in the comment..3 years of seperation 😡

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: NitaReid
And what did i read in the comment..3 years of seperation 😡

Yes - I am the Empress of Sadists - for all the trantrums that I throw regarding their separation, I have the crown for the longest period. But before you start throwing things at me, it was necessary (I would have murdered any author who used this line😈) She had to complete her doctorate - that was a dream both shared😊