SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17)

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#211

Lucky ...

Im late..still unres @25..

Talia

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#212

Res for Chapter 6 in advance. 😉 Yes I am cheating a bit. 😉😈

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Res for Chapter 6 in advance. 😉 Yes I am cheating a bit. 😉😈

Guess Its time for me to cheat on thread of MM murders😛. I read he is arriving on Thursday - oyr very own SK😳😉

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: sneharay
Brilliant.. 👏

Thank you Sneha😛

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Posted: 8 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Lovely update

Thanks kriti😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Lucky dearest...
Chapter 4 was worth waiting for..it was outclass...swasan heartfelt talk after that soul searing kiss..OMG..im still dreamy...its evident swara loves him but why sanky was confused...their moments after that eventfull kiss day were amazing...even ragini met sanky an liked him instantly...just loved her interrogation..as a sister she is concerned about swara...her last question ..describe swara n he answered pagal..it was soo cute...i enjoyed it...swasan parting moments were quite intense..but they were in love ...sanky not realizing fully..but he is...his identity revelation in party was shocking for her...but it was nicely penned ..quite justified ...relatable to prologue..her reason to leave him...cause he lied about his true identity...but she become his fitoor in this seperation period...now excited for next...seriously waiting patiently...

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Talia

Talia🤗

Thanks dearie .. I am glad you liked the kiss and the post kiss talk😉. Swara and readers are absolutely sure ki she loves him but sunny has some issued though he is in love he had not yet realised. Ragini Here is just playing her role of being an protective sister... thats how siblings usually are ..caring loving and firecly protective and she liked him instantly as she realised he loves swara so much

Paagal😆It would be good na ragini and sunny teaming up against Swara and teasing her amd I am happy you found the reason of their break up justified.

Updated Chapter 5 Already .. Read and do let me know Thanks again Sweety

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#217

Lucky..i have already unresserved my chapter 5 spot..it was on pg 25 at end...chapter 4 you had replied to me twice...but its oky...it was awesome reply...muahhh

Talia

Ps chapter 4 n 5 comments are on same page u mixed them...

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#218

Hello dear how r u
just complete 2 chapters it beautiful dear.
look like swara also love him then why breakup by sanskar dialogue that swara break up.
chapter one belong to swasan & two swara s background.
sanskar didn't disclose his identity to swara is this the reason.
swara reaction when sunny boy come she can't resist her asanskari feeling whenever she saw sunny boy now & then after all our sunny boy hai hi irresistible.
Bye dear
Take care.