SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17) - Page 20

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written...

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Res

Originally posted by: Aahana133

Awsm part...

Originally posted by: srividhya87

awesome part dear..👏👏👏

Both r feeling the same thing but not expressing to each other..

Hope Sanky will realise his love soon..

I think Shooting star will make their wish tue😉

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for part 5 Lucky. 😳 But I need time to unres coz my exams r going. 😭

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Lucky,

Such a pleasure reading this update. To tell the truth, at the rate the serial is going on, I was sure I would not feel the magic of SwaSan here, but I guess I underestimated your magic.

Nynu🤗🤗 Same Pinch .Even I was scared with antics of Swara ..I might soon lose my interest ..hence I wanted to finish it off ..and things are looking hopeful regarding blame game so .. I am a bit relaxed but cant trust Cv's .. Lets see , But I glad you could feel the magic of Swasan here bangaram😳

It was a magical update, though full of of sorrow, there were strong undercurrents of hope - that Swara realises that him lying or rather not telling the truth about his identity was a very small abberation, and that even thought the expensive gifts that he got for her were "easy" for him, the value and thought behind each gift and each deed is priceless. His deeds show that he loves her, she knows it but wants him to say it, which he will do only when he admits to himself that he loves her.

Yeah ..Underlying sorrow and hope definitely.. ummeed par tho duniya khayam hain😆 Too filmy kada ..Swara is juts wauting for him say those words and as mentioned Swara is already over Sanskaar's lying of his identity.She's just waiting for him to say those words. Gifts .. Like sunny says in serial ..Only he knows what to gift best to his Swara😳😉

Sanskaar is unwilling to name his emotions and feelings for her, he knows what it is and wants to keep hearing her tell him that she loves him, but more importantly, for him, she has to act, to give him a chance.

Exactly .. One step from swara .. everything will fall into place😉

And that is where they both are, waiting for words, waiting or the other to act, each wishing for the other.

Wishes do come true ..😉 don't they when you have😳 stars shooting across skies

I love it and it was such a pleasure reading it.

😳😳🤗

Love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Res for a full reply, Lucky...😊🤗

Viji🤗🤗

But in meantime...As I have told you before, I LOVE the Swara in Fitoor. So sorted, so spirited, she has a sound head on her shoulders and a large, warm heart. Sunny...😳🤪 Well he is rather smoking hot in Fitoor. 😆 Where is the nearest fire extinguisher?😉 But still I must say that my favorite is Sunny in Fanaa...😉 Tough to override old faves after all. 😆

Whoa .. Swara scoring over Sunny ..That's a huge huge accomplishment I guess given how crazy we are about sunny boy. A change for us as well😆😉.I so wish to see Swara in with all those adjectives you bestowed in Serial ..but alas ..no chance I guess

Sunny .. is supposed to hot na ..since Fitoor is an asanskaari venture 😉😉.You might need a stock of fire extinguishers for epilogue darlin😆😳 since sunny will be show how crazy is he for Swara as he promised😉☺️

FANAA -- I am just waiting to get back to it or I am holding back ..because of heartbreak scenario to be penned down ..but Sunny is Fanaa is definitely first love 😳.. and absolutly ok with Sunny holding crown in Fanaa..😳

Couple of really electrifying scenes in this chappie, will come back to comment on them later, sweetheart. Am still feeling rather exhausted and a bit flat today, so I want to comment more when I can do justice. 😳

Ahem .. I will wait to know your take on them .I was not sure if they are electrifying enough😉

Take your time darlin😛.. I know how draining it would have been pen-down back to back heart searing monologues of Sunny ..😭😭

And I love the way you go wrong about estimating the length of your fics...as long as you keep underestimating and over delivering the number of chapters. 😳☺️ Now if the reverse happens...with you cutting a 6S or an SS into 3S, then I will have a bone to pick with you . 😃😆

🤗. Given my expertise😆 I don't think it will go other way around😉

Loads of Love

Viji