SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17) - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago
updated final part..Pm's will be late .Do read when time permits and let me know😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
LUCKY I am here.. Me me me me me and me..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lucky darling!!
This was DREAMYYY ufff! I loved each and every para, each line of it goshhh!!
It was so so soo so beautiful!!
Lovely last chapter babe!!
Gonna go and read it all over again!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
WHY? Why every beautiful thing have to end?
Ohh I know the answer still it hurts!

Off to read...
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Posted: 8 years ago
I will be back😊
And yes I am:

Dear Lucky,

And finally, it comes to an end, a blazing, fiery end to a passionate tale. Sanskaar finally realised the irony, when Swara surrenders to her allowing him to claim her, in reality she enables him to break all bonds of fear and surrender to the love he has but is afraid to admit.

For at times the fear of losing something is far more painful than actually losing it and it would be a tragedy if one lives one's life in that fear. Swara correctly understood it and dealt with it in only way he would understand, showing it to him as to what love meant actually meant. And as you said more than just a physical union it a was actually an union of their souls. What more is needed?

Finally Sanskaar realised it, "bhudhu smart bangaya". And a little too smart for her good - after all as he said, he knew all her buttons and could exactly get her to do what he wanted. 😉

Poor Dadi, I loved her here, convinced her poti is all innocence, she is, sort of , guess their definitions are very different.😆

And their date at the Mandarmani beach - indeed a "Walk to Remember" (I do recall, you loved this book and had mentioned in the Amaranthine thread - I have not yet read the book, and watched the movie in bits and pieces, but I love the title)

I loved the whole story, but what caught my attention was Sanskaar's reaction - a beautiful mixture of love and relief, mixed with a tinge of awe when Swara says "I love you, Sanskaar" and he realises that she called him Sanskaar not Sunny, and that she had accepted him as Sanskaar and that he could be forgiven for his folly. It was very brief moment, and yet his whole universe hinged on that particular acceptance.

Looking forward for the epilogue - you would have it in two parts - you did reserve two posts.

love,
Nyna




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Posted: 8 years ago
Nita nynu ..sakshi Nupur🤗🤗
😳 Rushing out fora team outing .. will be back late ..😳 meanwhile let me know😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nita nynu ..sakshi Nupur🤗🤗

😳 Rushing out fora team outing .. will be back late ..😳 meanwhile let me know😊


I am a little incoherent, will take time to get back😳😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Smoking, Steaming, Searing, Scorching Hawt. 😳☺️

Ahem...😉 I am caught up in some commitments so will un res on Monday, for a detailed revert. In meantime...this chappie was so intensely combustible. Now where are those fire extinguishers? 😉

I tell you...you've made global warming go up a notch with Fitoor. 😉 Make Sunny pay for a lot of carbon credits...😆 Or make him do some ecological/ nature support work, where he and Swara have to travel together to jungles and savannahs in Kaziranga or Kanha or Serengeti/Masai Mara or Nagarahole/ Bandipur. 😉 Am sure that is just what they want...far from the madding crowd, just the 2 of them in some cottage deep in the woods. For more of those Fitoor moments...Ahem. 😳☺️
Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lucky!!!!!
You made me to smile and nearly cry. My heart literally melted reading this one. And the last proposal just constricted my heart with lot of loads on them! 😭 NOT fair dear! I was coping up with the sad news and tried to give a proper farewell our Swasan deserve. But the scene reminded what a special magical bond we're going to miss! 😭 😭

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow it was so good I loved it so much right from the beginning☺️ till the end so good

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