SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 69

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: StarySKY


Nita .. 🤗

Oh dear you indeed didn't make it easy for me .. 😆
But let me give you my thoughts ..

Ok before I am presenting my suspect list , let me give you some theories from my crazy mind 😃 , I know it is impossible though let us have some fun 😉😆 ( actually now a days I am reading " The Fight Club " .. so it kind of messing with my head at the present time .. 😆 )

1- it is all a dream
Yep .. someone is dreaming about all this , I am saying Sanskar ,
Or kind of a dream machine ..

2- It is all a story
Nothing of all this happend .. it is all the story Sanskar writing to present it to Swara at her birthday ..

3- it is Sanskar
Well he has a multiple personalities disorder .. he hired a hitwoman ( is there is a word like this ?!! ) .. yep Sanskar is a crazy person ..

4- all the 4 girls are Ms.X
All of them are behind all of this .. they work like one person ..

🤣 🤣
Ok .. enough of my craziness .. 😆
Let get in the real thing .. 😉

Ms.X , who are you ?! 🤓

1. Tanu
Interesting Things
Her father , seems she hate him well his business ..
Was Sanskar PA , and now Laksh PA .. means she is trust in the Maheshwari Family ..

2. Aalyia
Interesting Things
Seems like an independent girl in her business , not quit a plesent girl ..
Not been chosen as Sanskar bride didn't go well with her ..

3. Payal
Interesting Things
She was in London ..
Seems not go well with her family ..
She is Uttara friend means has a free access to Maheshwari house ..

4. Mansi
Interesting Things
Sanskar and Adarsh friend , Know that Sanskar is Arjun ..
She is in love with Sanskar ..

Facts about Ms.X ..

- she doesn't go well with her family ..
can be seen in Payal , Mansi and Tanu
- she was in London ..
seen in
Payal .. Mansi and Aalyia can travel easy but not Tanu as she is Laksh PA
- came to know about Sanskar marriage after 2 months .. means she is not that close ..
Can't be Tanu or Aalyia as they close to the family .. so Payal and Mansi
- she knows Sanskar is Arjun ..
Mansi knows , Payal can know as she is Uttara friend , Tanu as she close to the Family .. not sure about Aalyia
- she has an easy access to the Maheshwari house I think anytime ..
Payal can as she is Uttara friend , Tanu can as she is Laksh PA but I don't think in anytime .. maybe Aalyia but Not Mansi
- she got to know about Sanskar house ..
Mansi can know from Adrash as he know , not sure about the others ..
- I don't think Ms.X will come to visit Sanskar in hospital saying she came to visit him .. it should be more as a coincidence .. happend with
Payal and Mansi

So Now listing them from more suspicious to less ..
Payal
Mansi
Aalyia
Tanu

Oh I did enjoy doing this .. I hope I got it right .. 😃
Waiting for next ..

Love
Khushi



Hi Khushi dear..



You first four theories were amazing👏.. But if that was the case all the readers will probably throw rotten tomatoes at me for torturing them in the name of mystery..



And as i already told you.. I really do feel so happy to know you are this invested in finding out Miss X.. Words wont be able to express how touched i am by reading your comment..I did read it a few times,trying to see what you were thinking and how you were analyzing the suspects..Khushi dear you are amazing .. And i love you for that comment and effort you put into this FF..



But i am going to keep this mystery for two more chapter i think..So until then i wont comment on the suspects list and inadvertently spoil the suspence ..So keep guessng and i posted chapter 12..Let see if it changes your suspect list or not


With Lots of love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Nita,
I know I did not res. Am trying to put my new resolution in place, so rather than wait till I unres for 11 (I am so very dead🤢🤢) I will directly comment on 12.

I loved the pace, the slow steady progress towards the inevitable end where the suspense would finally be revealed. Nicely maintained too,👏👏 the tricky balance between romance, reality and the murder investigation. Their personal lives conflicting with the ever present fear of "who did it"

Ragini and Laksh are quite mature here, really talked it out and started out with a clear understanding of where exactly they stand. As are Swara and Sanskaar, no jealousy, no angry - 'how did you not tell me about your past girlfriend?'

The surprise being Sujata, though I liked it. She did get her fact across that she loved having Swara and Sankaar being married, quite sweetly.

And now to my main grouse - you plan to keep the suspense for two more chapters😡😡 Very very bad. But still, given the enthralling story, I do not mind, keep the chapters and suspects coming.

loved the whole update.

lots of love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for CS. 😆
Unresed dearest! 😃
Nita darling, thanks for the cs! 😉 Superb one and very essential too. 😳
Its really tough to guess that who's Miss X after reading the cs. 😆
1. Tanu :-
So Tanu don't share a good relation with her father and at first was Sanskar's PA, now Laksh's PA!
2. Aliya :-
So Aliya is DP's business partner's friend and the fact that DP didn't choose her as Sanskar's bride didn't go well with her!
3. Payal :-
Well, Payal stayed at London, and I think she don't share good relation with her parents as well, for their biasness towards her. She's also Uttara's friend.
4. Mansi :-
Mansi is Sanskar and Adarsh's friend, she is in love with Sanskar and also knows about Sanskar being Arjun.
Also all the four suspects have common factor between them! They r fond of reading books, they r rich and they attended RagLak's wedding! OMG! Such a tough one to guess the suspects! 😆
So now, what I think about the suspects according to the facts about our Miss X is that :-
One thing which I can remember that Miss X lost her mother, and in the cs, u didn't mention about anyone's mom, u only mentioned about their dads, that too only Tanu, Aliya and Payal's, and Mansi's dad was mentioned in ch-11.
So Miss X doesn't go well with her family :- Tanu and Payal.
Miss X was in London :- Payal.
Miss X came to know about Sanskar's marriage after 2 month :- Means she's not that close, so can't be Tanu and Aliya, maybe Payal and Mansi.
Miss X knows that Sanskar is Arjun :- Mansi knows, Tanu can know bcoz of the closeness with the Maheshwaris and Payal can know coz she's Uttara's friend, don't know about Aliya.
Easy access to MM :- Tanu coz she's Sanskar's ex PA and Laksh's PA, Aliya is DP's business partner's daughter and Payal is Uttara's friend and don't know about Mansi.
Miss X knows about Sanskar's house :- Mansi is Adarsh's friend too, so can know from him, don't know about other 3.
Miss X's dad did a drunken mistake, which means she is out of wedlock :- Aliya.
OMG! I really don't know whom to suspect more among the 4! But still what I feel according to my statistics about the four, my more suspicious to less suspicious list is :-
1. Payal (There r many facts which I got for her, which can turn her into Miss. X)
2. Tanu and Mansi (I mean to say I suspect both equally, so one among them can be Miss. X)
3. Aliya (I didn't get many facts about her, but one interesting fact about her that she is an illegal child, which is going hand in hand for Miss. X too.)
So, this was just my assumption about Miss. X. 😳 Will eagerly wait for ch-12 to know more about Miss X. 😉
With love,
Aheli.



Hi Aheli dearest 🤗



As i already mentioned i am so very deeply touched by your lovely comment..The extent you went to analyze this made me all super happy.. Since you know only one of them is Miss X..I had to try hard not to make too much of an slip when it comes to CS..It should match all of them ,yet not be too much..But reading your comment does make me feel happy for the hours that i put into the CS..



Because when i got lovely readers like you, who try to find miss x this seriously..All the hours i spend on it seems amazing indeed..Thanks dearest for loving this FF as much as you do..And i wont say anything about the Suspects..Since i wont spoil it for anyone.. I am currently planning to end this in less than five more chapters but will i be able to is the question..So yes the last few chapters are gonna be crucial and i hope when you find out who is miss x it doesnt end up being an disappointment ..



Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago

Unresed @91. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Aheli dear- Just read your lovely comment.. And found out you are not feeling well.. Take Care Aheli dear..Take plenty of rest.. I wish you a speedy recovery and Get well soon dear.. And please dont worry about the length of the comment. .All comments from you are cherished and length is never the factor that goes in to it. You liked it that is more than enough to make me happy and i am touched you tried to unres inspite of being sick.. Just take care dear..

Lots of love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid

@Aheli dear- Just read your lovely comment.. And found out you are not feeling well.. Take Care Aheli dear..Take plenty of rest.. I wish you a speedy recovery and Get well soon dear.. And please dont worry about the length of the comment. .All comments from you are cherished and length is never the factor that goes in to it. You liked it that is more than enough to make me happy and i am touched you tried to unres inspite of being sick.. Just take care dear..

Lots of love

Nita


Thank u so much Nita dearest for understanding and wishing me. And I'm glad that u liked my comment. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Res ..

Un-Res ..
Nita .. 🤗

Sorry for been late ..
You know , a lot of thing is happening in my life right now .. Well look at my time of replying back..So i totally understand..Lots of things i happening in my life too..one being my new found obsession with OS😆

Please stop saying this " boring " word 😡.. it can never be boring .. and I really don't mind long chapters or even a short one .. though I rather prefer a long one .. ( please if you ever got to know how to shorten the stories. . Please tell , I am having this problem too ) I still dont know how to shroten the stories..Sorry cant be of any help and well sometime i type and type but at the end of the day i do wonder if it long and boring.. So thanks for your vote of confidence saying it wont be boring..😃//

Chapter 11 ..
I really love this chapter .. it have a lot of things .. SwaSan 😳and most importantly we got a hint about Ms.X ..😉Yep lot of SwaSan and finally miss X..About time she makes an appearance😆

Part A
Sanskar and Swara
It obvious how much they miss each other .. and the phone calls , their conversation ..
And that all just to protect her from Ms.X .. *sigh*..Well they love each other so much ,so will miss each other..Yep and it all to protect from Miss X😡

Part B
I am happy that you give us something about the realtion between Laksh and Ragini ..
Ragini is indeed very jealous ( maybe she is in love with Laksh ) .. the thing about her been away and Laksh is able to move on really disturbed her ..
Her break down in front of Swara .. Yeah Ragini was jealous and she did realize she likes her husband 😳... She tried to didnt think about it or break down but one cant hold in pain for long 😆..So eventually she broke down infront of her sister

Part C
Swara got to know about Sanskar accident .. and decided to go to him no matter what .. Yeah ..She wont stay back after that news😉

Part D
Poor Laksh ..
He was heart broken .. so he tried to fill the void inside him with liquor ( wrong step from you actually ) ..
Due to this step Sanskar met with accident ..
And Laksh felt really guilty about it .. ( I know how you feel Laksh )Yeah it was a wrong step of laksh but we all know laksh ,he usually takes one right step and few wrong steps to compensate that even in the show..Yep Sanskar got into accident because of that😭

Part E
Swara and Ragini reached the hospital .. and thank God Sanskar was out of danger ..
And SwaSan conversation ..
Then the confession ( yay .. finally )Finally indeed..I think i have delayed the confession part long enough😆.. I am just happy it happened in this chapter ,one important moment of SwaSan over..

Part F
Sanskar and Laksh conversation ..
Sanskar did ease his brother guilt and thing about that he don't want another person to get hurt because of him .. that did move my heart .. I like SanLak bond😳...So yep Sanskar has an big brother is something i really like to explore more in my FF's 😊

Now the suspects .. Ms.X 😃

1. Tanu
Laksh PA ..
Was Sanskar PA once ..
Met Sanskar weeks ago ..
She knew Swara from before ..
She was present at the wedding ..

2. Aalyia
Seems like a family friend ..
Not quit a plesent girl ..

3. Payal
Seems like a family friend , or Uttara's friend ..

4. Mansi
Sanskar friend from college ..
Met Sanskar weeks ago ..
Know Swara ..
Was at the wedding ..
Know about Sanskar dream being a writer ..


I already told you when it comes to suspects i am not saying anything but i love how you were able to point out everything i said and still remember what i said about them in previous updates👏


My thoughts ..
I am listing them from more suspicious to less .. ( I am not sure what in your mind , but you can be tricking us , you know what I mean😆😉 )
Mansi , Tanu , Aalyia , Payal .. Got it this is Khushi Chapter 11 list.. Let see what happens for Chapter 12😆

Let see what will happen ..

Waiting for the next ..Next is posted 😳..And Thanks Khushi dearest for this lovely comment.. Really happy to know you liked this chapter and already waiting for the next

Love
Khushi


Lots of love

Nita



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Nita .. 🤗

Sorry for the delay ..
Un-Res @82 ..

Love
Khushi



Sorry for the delay too..Finally gotten around to reply back Khushi dear🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update..
Adarsh's girlfriend is on the list.. He will be heartbroken a lot if its true..
Swasan scenes and their understanding is superb
Waiting for the next one..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello Nita dear🤗🤗
How r u?
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