SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 71

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for part 11 Nita. 😳
I'm so sorry dear, I was out of town during Durga Puja vacation, so couldn't read it. 😭Hi Aheli dear..Look how quick i replied back😭😭😭.. So please no need to say sorry at all

Finally unresed. 😃
Awesome update darling!!! 👏 Thanks dearest..Really happy to know you liked the update😃
11 A :-
Awww! SwaSan's phone convos. Loved them. ❤️ Felt bad for Laksh here. 😔 Poor Laksh indeed but he finally got back his happiness😉.. I am glad you loved the SwaSan convos😃..

11 B :-
Ragini got jealous by seeing Laksh's pics with other girls. 😆 Now she's regretting her decision of leaving Laksh. 😛 ..Yeah Rags got jealous ..She is his wife after all..😉
11 C and D :-
Sanskar got hit by a car to save a drunk Laksh from getting hit by the car. 😭 Thank god that he is safe now. 😃 Laksh is feeling guilty for Sanskar's accident. 😔 And Swara is on her way from NY along with her dear siso to visit Sanskar after learing about his accident. 😳..Yep Sanskar saved Laksh and he is not injured severly but laksh did feels lot of guilt for being the reason.. I need an reason for Swara to come back what better than her love for Sanskar and her need to see him after hearing about his accident

11 E :-
SwaSan moments! 😳 And finally SwaSan confessed their love for each other face to face. They even kissed. ☺️ Was waiting for these moments. 😉I know everyone was waiting for this moments.. I am sorry i took so long to get there.. 😆..

11 F :-
And finally the list of suspects - Tanu, Aaliya, Payal and Mansi. Do all the girls needed to visit Sanskar on the same day?! 😆 ..Exactly why visit on the same day 😆

And Sanskar also suspected one among them to be the killer?? 😲 How?? 😕..Because he was also trying to find the killer and he narrowed the suspects list to four..😉

Things r really awkward between RagLak. Ragini was right. Laksh shouldn't have allowed all the girls to visit Sanskar on the same day, although when there is a lot of security posted for their safety and he knows the for many years, but still. 😔 And she was right, the killer is among them only. Loved the brotherly moments between SanLak. 😃 And loved the sweet SwaSan moments between the suspects' visit and at the ending. 😃 This part of the chapter was really a crucial one! Thanks Nita dear. 😃 🤗 Yeah Ragini was right but laksh knows those people so well,and hence didnt feel like doubting them..I am glad you loved SwaSan moments as well SanLAk.. It was crucial part indeed. Thanks Aheli dearest for the lovely comment and i am so sorry for taking so long to reply back

Update soon. Will be waiting eagerly. 😉 Thanks for the pm. 😃 Chapter 13..Idea is set already..Mind is just not working on it for now..Will try to update asap..

With love,
Aheli.

Lots of Love

Nita

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Unresed @ 85. 😃

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

No need to say sorry my dearest Nita!! I can totally understand u. 😳 And about ch-13, I can patiently wait for it, no need to hurry up. 😉

Originally posted by: Eranga

Hi dear Nita,

Thanks for PMs. 😊
And really sorry for late comment.. Actually I read it in a hurry as I got curious.. And totally forgot to comment. 😭 Hi Eranga dearest🤗..See how late i am replying back so please no need for sorry...

And haan, it's not at all boring. That's the perfect length.. And I really don't mind if you make it bit longer.. 😉 I really appreciate your hard work on this FF dear.. And that makes our long waiting worthwhile.. 👏 Longer than that..Let see about it 😆..I am glad you dont find it boring.. Actually it not much of an hard work just i need time and mood to work on it..And if i had one i dont have the other ..Hence the delay ..Sorry about that

Okay, about chapter it's full of SwaSan love, bit Raglak story and the most amazing, our brain eating Miss. X part.. Yep i took my sweet time to get to Miss X part.. 😆

I start to read this because of that mystery part.. But nowadays I'm enjoying SwaSan love story more than anything.. ❤️ It's very different from other FFs. More than cute, sweet moments.. you show their love in every single action, in every single word.. And the best part is, with your beautiful writing style I feel it more, like directly to the heart.. As they say, "love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation." So their separation worked!! Waiting to know how you build up their love story.. ..Aww...I am super touched by your comments..Reading comments and compliments like yours makes me go all 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃..Really dear..And i literally get super happy when i read such compliments ..It means a lot to me.. Thanks dear. For making me an happy person...

And as I said earlier, I'm also enjoying this unique Raglak story.. And this part was awesome.. Laksh's desperate situation without Ragini.. Ragini's jealousy, insecurities and finally she's understanding.. it is love.. 😃 ..I am glad you are liking RagLak as well.. I know most SwaSan fans dont like RagLak as such but in my FF i do give them a story on their own, not overshadowing SwaSan but at the same time not ignoring them as well.. 😊

So about Suspects list, 😕
The way you write that part so commendable dear.. Superb.. I remembered my favourite tv series, "The Mentalist".. Jane's Red John suspects list.. 😆 Thanks dear.. The suspects list was bit tough to work out but i am glad it maintains the suspence for now..I like mentalist too though i havent watch the last season yet.. Planning to watch soon though

I thought I can short the list to 3 suspects.. Not for any strong reasons, just mere ones.. But then you give that, Character Sketch and ruin my whole theories.. 😡 Well Character Sketch was meant to confuse more and i am glad it worked😆...

So now I'm completly blank.. But as per my instinct, my all doubts in two girls.. Let's see.. 😉 Let see then.. If you guess right or wrong

So eagerly waiting for next update dear..
Take your time.. (joke)
Make it soon.. 😡You know i got deviated and started working on OS right😭😭..So give me some more time, currently i got no OS idea, so i will work on Chapter 13 and post it asap ..

Lots of Love

Nita

Originally posted by: srividhya87

superb update..

Adarsh's girlfriend is on the list.. He will be heartbroken a lot if its true..

Swasan scenes and their understanding is superb

Waiting for the next one..

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nita🤗

you wicked lady ...Who is it yaar .. I guess its Alia or Mansie and I know I might be utterly wrong like last time ...Sujju accepted Swara .😛 good and ...you know what this suspense is killing me esp after reading C/s 😕

Atlesat tell me which part main we will get to know and you are doing briiliant in holding back suspense ..not a easy genre to handle👏👏⭐️

Love

Lucky