SWASAN SS - LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL[LAST PART PG 39 ON 25/08 ] - Page 7

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Harshu >

Dearest Shruti🤗
Thank you so much dear. It really means a lot to me that you are reading and even making time to let me know your thoughts.

As I managed to catch Part 2, I wanted to comment straightaway or I will get hopelessly delayed:). Very nice moving along of the story I thought. It flowed from where you stopped last and it's so so clear that Sanskaar is in deep trouble :)! All his attitude and anger in reflex to that isn't protecting his responses to Swara and the wonderful thing is that she so sees beneath that exterior and to the well of pain and hurt hiding there. And what's more- she also feels the pull and want to heal him without knowing that consciously. So its clear that Sanskaar is guarding against past hurt as I guessed last and you kindly replied and so he wants to resist at all costs but the way each moment flashed before him and then his resultant anger when he got home to long suffering Kaka, said it all. Of course the lift was an admission in itself. And Swara's conversation with Khushi was heartfelt and revealed much of her confusion and deepening feelings too:)

Its fine if you get late dear. No problem at all.

Glad you liked part two.

Nice to hear you think story is moving nicely.

Sanskar...he surely is in. Inspite of sanskar's rude behaviour, Swara knows there is something...something strong behind his rude bheaviour. she is able to see he has lot more inside him. Swara, she indeed is experiencing something different with sanskar. His pain is hurting her and she wants to heal him. Glad you liked swara and khushi's conversation dear.

Will wait to read 3 in due course and nicely done sis.

Will update soon dear. Thank you so much. Like I always say, your feedback always mean a lot to me. Thanks a lot😳

Love,Shru xoxo

Love

-Harshada

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Harshada dear...

Read both chapters now..it amazing...sansku inner turmoil..n pain given to him by someone has forced him to hide in shell..he comes out sometimes but quickly hide again...dont want to be weak n do same mistake again..he is good to ragini but not with swara.becoz he is attracted to her.but not want to face same pain again...what happened im curious..heart break..or family problem...???

Swara on other hand is bubbly n lively.full of life...how rude he is with her..but she is unable to be angry with him..she likes him...n want him smiling...now curious like us to know reason of his behaiviour...now im excited ..waiting for next..

Do pm me plzzz...

Talia

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

Awesome story
Nice start
Interesting

Originally posted by: sahakinju

Awesome update dear
Love your thought

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Unresed Harshada dearest,😳
Loved the beautiful SwaSan moments.😃 But what happened to Sanskar??😲 I think that some one, specially some girl betrayed him in the past, that's why he doesn't want to to friendship with Swara!!😕😭 Loved Swara's concern for him.😳 Its becoming interesting.😉 Will eagerly wait for the next part to see how the story unfolds.😃 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Loving it

Originally posted by: 92Sara

Nice Update.
Now iam getting Impatient to know abt Sanskar's Past.
Continue Soon Harshu.
Thanks for PM.