SWASAN SS - LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL[LAST PART PG 39 ON 25/08 ] - Page 6

Awsome update
lovely song for tht time ...
loved it ...
cont soon

thnks for pm

Hey Harshu >

As I managed to catch Part 2, I wanted to comment straightaway or I will get hopelessly delayed:). Very nice moving along of the story I thought. It flowed from where you stopped last and it's so so clear that Sanskaar is in deep trouble :)! All his attitude and anger in reflex to that isn't protecting his responses to Swara and the wonderful thing is that she so sees beneath that exterior and to the well of pain and hurt hiding there. And what's more- she also feels the pull and want to heal him without knowing that consciously. So its clear that Sanskaar is guarding against past hurt as I guessed last and you kindly replied and so he wants to resist at all costs but the way each moment flashed before him and then his resultant anger when he got home to long suffering Kaka, said it all. Of course the lift was an admission in itself. And Swara's conversation with Khushi was heartfelt and revealed much of her confusion and deepening feelings too:)

Will wait to read 3 in due course and nicely done sis.

Love,Shru xoxo

Harshada dear...

Awesome story
Nice start
Interesting

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Harshada,

Simply amazing. I loved how you were able to convey the confusion both felt, Sanskaar feels the attraction despite his best attempts to maintain a distance - his past bitter experiences casting a dark shadow over his possible future dreams.

Swara on the other hand, feels the attraction despite the openly rude behaviour of Sanskaar, she is able to pierce through the curtain he has drawn to see the pain in his eyes.

Great update.

love,

Nyna

Awesome update dear
Love your thought

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Aheli dearest 😳
Thanks dear.
Do read when time permits. Will wait for your feedback.

Unresed Harshada dearest,😳
Loved the beautiful SwaSan moments.😃 But what happened to Sanskar??😲 I think that some one, specially some girl betrayed him in the past, that's why he doesn't want to to friendship with Swara!!😕😭 Loved Swara's concern for him.😳 Its becoming interesting.😉 Will eagerly wait for the next part to see how the story unfolds.😃 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: sur1911

Awesome update harshada

Loved it

It's like destiny want swasan to meet

Swasan has same liking old song

Swara antice made him smile but his past again stare him

Swara is thinking about him.his outer behavior n inner pain

Sanskar hurt himself

Update soon

Want to know more

Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot dear.
Glad you liked it.
Will update soon

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome update
lovely song for tht time ...
loved it ...
cont soon

thnks for pm

Thank you so much dear.
That's my fav song too.
Will continue soon

Originally posted by: tithi1812

Res..

Unres...😊 Nice update... Now I want to know about Sanskar's past..desperately.. Loved swara's antics..😆but Sanskar got angry..😕he starts to like swara.. But don't want to let his heart repeat that mistake again.. Swara is now more curious to know about him.. Now its gnna be interesting.. How dey fall in love.. How swara heal his wounds...

Pls update soon Harshu... Will be waiting eagerly..😊

Thank you dear.
Glad you liked the update .
Will update soon