SWASAN SS - LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL[LAST PART PG 39 ON 25/08 ]

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

INDEX

PART ONE - PG 1

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

Of course you should continue, Harshu dear 😊

The start is interesting. A Kavita in Sanskaar's past, I presume, who broke his heart; and shattered his belief in love? I like this feisty, no nonsense Swara. And a brilliant, somewhat akdu Sanskaar. 😊

Love

Viji

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tithi1812

@tithi1812

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Unres... Hey Harshada.. It's lovely.. I love stories based on college life of swasan...😉 it gives a freshness.. New found love..pehla pehla pyar types...😆 but Sanskar faced prblms in his love life..it seems.. OK..swara hai na... Sara dard dur kar degi...😉 Sanskar was rude to her which she didn't like at all..wow!! But they stole glances..Sanskar wanted to talk to her but controlled himself..😕 Library hai ya draupadi ki saree...cracked me up..🤣 They r attracted to each odr OK... It's really nice story and don't u dare to stop it midway... Do update soon...😊

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Dear Harshada,

Nice start, young college going quartet - and the dynamics already established. So Sanskaar has a past which makes the curious Swara determined.

The Library encounter, though different in some ways, reminded me of a wattpad story I read - The Difference between Infinity and Forever ( a lovely story about different opinions of love and the twist in the tale on account of a ML - I would have loved to rewrite it on SwaSan if I could obtain the author's permission and convince myself that a love story without a happy ending would be nice too).

love,

Nyna

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Hansika.....

@Hansika.....

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Dear Harshada,
Awesome Start to a Beautiful Story.
Hmm so Sanskar is having a Painful Past which made him to Hate the Human's Most Beautiful Feeling Love.
Swara's Fiesty attitude was bang on.
Lets see how u Swara is going to Change Mr.Akdu's Behaviour and make him believe in Love Once Again.
Continue Soonish Harshu(Hope u won't mind me Calling this name).
Thanks for PM.

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Sakshi jain

@SakshiJain1234

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Hiii Harshada

Nice start dear
Loved the bonding of swasan inspite of his rude behaviour towards her.I think there will be sanskar past that made him hate love.
Lets see how swara take out him from darkness and fulfill his life with happiness.
Continue soon dear
Please dear do pm me.
Bye and take care

LOVE
SAKSHI