SwaSan TS: Learning to trust him again (Final part on pg1 /28 -07- 16) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: isaritha

Woah it's sooo sooo sooo...sooo beautiful... Man how would the episode would have been if it was like this

I just loved it Nita 👏...Thanks dearest🤗..Really happy to know you liked it .. Yeah even i wish such scenes happened in the episode..It would have been nice to witness it right😊

I was thoroughly enjoying reading every bit of it and yeah the most beautiful mention was the recordings of Swara... how intelligently u utilised it here & well if they showed something in actual episode obviously we Swasanians would have gone crazy hearing Swara recordings 😉 Even the password was apt..Yeah we would have gone crazy indeed😆.. Thanks the whole TS was based on my idea about the recording, i am happy you found it an nice addition to the story😊..


Fantabulous Nita 🤗 This way we would have got Swasan love story again as what we thought but CVs gave us BJKT🤔..Agree ..This track had so many potential but Cvs ..But i am really happy that you liked the update dear..


Love

Nita


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Posted: 9 years ago
#72


Thanks..Really happy to know you found it interesting 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Nita dear

Are you kidding? Dont you know our answers yet? Its a BIG YES, Nita please do extend the OS to 5S.
Veena.


Thanks Veena dearest for the encouragement, it feels so good to know your interest on this TS .. I was planning adding one more part.. And it all depends upon how long the part gets which will decide if it will end in one update or two updates..

Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Teddy94

Hi Nita...

Amazing ts... I just loved it a lottt...
I want u to continue it .. Pls try to continue it dear... Like Swara falling for Sanskar once again...
Getting some flashes of her memory...
The way u wrote n clarified things b/w Swasan is just awesome... The recording idea is superb...
Waiting for the nxt update.. Try to cont it😊


Thanks .. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃... I decide to continue it with one more part 😃.. But you know my schedule.. So the update might take some time.. But will post one more part ASAP.. Once again thank you for such a lovely comment and I am really happy to know liked the recording idea..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Part2 awsm nita.
Hw swasan cm out 4m ths hurdle &sort it out,hw swara trust sanskar & gv thr marriage time,its amaizing.
U wrote it so well.
Hw i wish cvs shw smthng lk ths bt cvs sigh!
&yes,i wnt 3rd part whr swara get bk memory &aftr effect of it.prety plj.write it if possible


Thanks dearest for such a lovely comment.. Really happy to know you liked part two 😃.. Thanks for the compliment 😳. I am glad you liked the way swasan worked it out in the end.. We all wish cvs to write something sensible.. But they never do though .. Also yeah decided to write one more part but for that I need some time due to my busy personal life.. Will try to update it ASAP though..


With lots of love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Thanks for all the lovely comments for part two guys.. I think I replied to everyone.. If I missed anyone do let me know so I can rectify that.. Not yet started on part three.. So it might take some time just letting you know.. Will try to post it ASAP..

Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nita darling...
I didnot reserve as i know i will forget my spot...n its hard to find page while using forum on mobile...

Part 2 of this ts..was remarkable...magnificent...as you said u love clearing misunderstanding by talking..i just simply love ur style..each n every dialogue was intelligently crafted n put...

Part 1 was based on sansku putting some sense in swara by showing her facts about him not being hus murderer.clearing her fears..n letting her trust him.n he succeeded...

Part 2 was its aftermath..swara started believing his words..wanting to talk to him butdidnot get time..n then sahil happens...he used the opportunity as swarawas not at home...he felt insecure ..what usswara believed sansku n return to him..n by foul pkay took her sign on divorce papers...that papers were enogh to create havoc in mm n gadodia house..no body believed her ..felt bad ..sansku hoped it was some nightmare n it indeed was..she told the truth nsansku understood sahil gameplan...i loved how he proved to swara..that sahil is after all this chaos...n as planned sahil himself agreed to every false thing he did..it wasindeed amazing twist...loved it..

After swara rescue..swasan moments were adorable...the trust she regained..she needed time..as she dont remember him..but felt on top of the world that they started their relationship with friendship again...hoping swara remember something...

Convert it to ss baby...

Waiting more from your side..

Love
Talia

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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nita darling...

I didnot reserve as i know i will forget my spot...n its hard to find page while using forum on mobile...Yeah it hard from mobile and too know you typed it from mobile means so much Talia dear 🤗

Part 2 of this ts..was remarkable...magnificent...as you said u love clearing misunderstanding by talking..i just simply love ur style..each n every dialogue was intelligently crafted n put...Thanks dearest..I just love Talking, it wont add drama to the show but that how i like it.. 😆... And i am happy to know you liked it

Part 1 was based on sansku putting some sense in swara by showing her facts about him not being hus murderer.clearing her fears..n letting her trust him.n he succeeded...Yeah he did succeed and that all that matters right, Swara trust 😉

Part 2 was its aftermath..swara started believing his words..wanting to talk to him butdidnot get time..n then sahil happens...he used the opportunity as swarawas not at home...he felt insecure ..what usswara believed sansku n return to him..n by foul pkay took her sign on divorce papers...that papers were enogh to create havoc in mm n gadodia house..no body believed her ..felt bad ..sansku hoped it was some nightmare n it indeed was..she told the truth nsansku understood sahil gameplan...i loved how he proved to swara..that sahil is after all this chaos...n as planned sahil himself agreed to every false thing he did..it wasindeed amazing twist...loved it..Really happy to know you liked Part 2 and yeah it was the aftermath indeed and though i didnt want to add divorce drama i did it to show Sanskar trust on Swara which i didnt get to see on Malkin track😆..Also to show Sahil plan fail epically 😉...

After swara rescue..swasan moments were adorable...the trust she regained..she needed time..as she dont remember him..but felt on top of the world that they started their relationship with friendship again...hoping swara remember something...Happy to know you liked the SwaSan moments😳..And yeah her trust in him is regained,now it all about memories and love😉... Let Start with friendship and we will get there as well.. For that wait and read next update ,which i am still way behind on 😭...

Convert it to ss baby...SS😲.. In my schedule..But the story that is left seems long enough to be just one update..Let see Talia dearest.. I will first type it out and then decide if it long enough i will update it in two parts..

Waiting more from your side...I love you for that, but i am tad bit busy will try to update soon ..🤗

Love
Talia


Love

Nita

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear readers of this TS..The final post is posted on page one..Do read when you get time and let me know you thoughts..

Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res nita baby
Unres

😭 starting with heartfelt apology...as i have piles of unreserve post..n im unreserving whenever im getting chance...n this one got delayed...sorry...

Coming to last part of TS...i must say nita ..out of soo many memory lost track stories i have read your one wasby far the BESTEST...👏 i soo enjoyed it...

Part 3 was simply incredible...😉

Depicting swasan journey of friendship...with outmost care and perfection.i just loved swara waiting for him..their talk n deep conversation on any thing onweek days..n on weekends just trying to pass time..pinning for each other..hoping week end soon..their five question part was amazingly woven.you were so good with dialogues...was wowed..😳

U handled swara memory loss thing soo delicately...iwas shocked when read that swara had vision of ragini stabing her n pushing her in river..but the way u filled that part in swara's life was commendable...with sansku efforts n input too obviously..i loved his teasing onlakshya n ragini matter...👏

N finally after sorting everthing ..one thing left n that was her n his relationship...after getting boostup with help of ragini..swara confessed...it was magical.n they kissed thrice or more...😆we didnot get chance to know it...😉 but it was drool worthy..i just cherished it baby...😊

Thank ufor this one awesome memory of swasan...love u muaahhh😃

Loads of hugs n kissy
Talia😳
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