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Posted: 8 years ago
Obsessive part 11

Sanskaar called the doctor...
He came n checked laksh up...N left..
After an hour he gained conscious...
L-Sanskaar..
Sa-are u ok...
L-haan...woh..raa...
Sa-Ragini is not here...
L-but then where is she...
Sanskaar said nothing but pulled him n made him sit in the car..
Sa-go n search... But let us work atleast... The business u snatched from her won't run own it's own...U r toh all lost in ragini... Go search her n get her back... N from tomorrow u only enter the office if u want to work without ur ragini chant...
L-(like a lunatic)- r8.. great idea... Its the best... I will search her...
He asked the driver to leave n he drove away. N sanskaar nodded his head hopelessly

Same day .. at 4pm.. laksh was searching for ragini in the whole Kolkata n then he reached hoogy.. in a hope to find her... He stood near a park.. n started gulping a drink ...
Closed his eyes... When .. he opened his eyes n because of a shock a ball has hit n broke the glass of his car...
He furiously came out...
L-what the hell...who did this he shouted... With the ball in his hand...
Children in the park ran... Shouting-" Diiidiii..."
L- shouted- get ur didi here if u dare I will show her how to Break glasses...

Intinal tune of the song dhunki starts...(dhunki- sort of magical spell...)
A girl comes running.. in a yellow top.. n shorts... Having no shoes.. her hair are flying open.. they are soaked in water n mud...
(O malang hua
Dil ye mera
Hai mast malang hua
Dil ye mera)
Seeing her laksh lost his temper seeing her ...
His lips curled into a smile.. he couldn't move an inch...


(Ishq fikar da chadde palla
Mauj karda ho ke jhalla jeeve...
Ishq mein dil na
Hoyea fakeeri
Maange sab ki
Khair sukayya, jeeve..)
She was running to him.. her feet soaked in mud..
Her eyes opned wide seeing him here.. but then she smiled n nodded her head...
She was thanking him more than she was cursing him every second..
He made her free... N this was the best of all she could get ...

(Gira deeware...
Laga lalkare...
Ishq di masti de
Vich sone de jaage...yeah...)
She reached him..
"Ragini..." He whispered...She moved to him..pulled the ball out of his hold n threw it to the children.. who ran back... happily...
She moved closer. ... N closer .. a chill ran through his spine... He hit his car..N the next moment... He felt her lips on his...She kissed him.. he was beyond shocked... He did not respond.. she bite his lower lip.. he gasped ..N then she entered his mouth... Exploring it... She parted when needed oxygen...
"Thanks a ton Mr.Maheawari..." She whispered on his lips...N now she parted... N ran back...

(Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...ve..
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...ve..
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...)
It was Magic... The Magic she did...the spell she casted on him...

He pinched himself several times... To confirm if it was her n he wasn't hallucinating... It was her... He thought...no no... But then he touched his lips... He noticed the car glass broken... He felt the cut on his lips...
But still he wasn't able to accept it.. but then he idiotically smiled n ... Touched his lips again.. even of it was a dream then too it was the best...


He left... So did she again playing with those kids... Soaking herself in mud n dust n Dirt...

@mm...
Laksh entered...
L- mom...
He shouted .. no one replied .. all were angry at him...
He ran down...
L- mom...He again shouted...
N held ap's handn turned her...She looked on...
L- mom mere yanhan... Yanhan..(showing her his lip) koi cut h Kya...
Ap nodded... He jumped...
N left to his room leaving all shocked at what had happened to him..
L- yes. . I wasn't hallucinating... Yes... N he danced n left for his room...
But then he stopped in the mid way n ran back to his mother...
L- mom...
He held her hand...
L- mom is it a dream...
AP- what...
L- mom MATLAB me n u .. n everyone are we real or am I dreaming...
AP- laksh bte... Are u okay...
L-yes mom tell Na am I dreaming...
AP- no ...
N laksh finally left for his room...
He lied on his bbed with a thud. ...
He touched his lips... N again ... Felt happy ..He stood in front of the mirror n thought of her .. their kiss...
L- yes..now I got her... I will get her back at any cost or I will die...
He slept .. with his lips curled into a smile... N all happy...

Ragini POV-
Oh I met him today again... I couldn't help but kissed him..I know I should hate him slap him... But no I can't...he gave me my freedom... I know he broke my heart... But I still can't resist him... I just.. I don't know y... Y can't I hate him... I can't be angry on him... Aaah... What ever it is... I like everything... His revenge... His eyes... His shock...his lips... I don't know y .. but he is the one ... I can't resist n hate .. perhaps the 1st one. . after mom who fakely but atleast cared...
Ragini POV-ends...
She smiled n slept while sipping alcohol... N smoking cigarettes... in her mansion...

Next mrng-...
It was early morning... 8am.. laksh was waiting for her at the hoogly park... He was standing. Waiting for her... He had just arrived..when her voice caught his attention... He. Sipped acohol.. n drowned in her Beauty... When he saw a pair of lustful eyes on her... He turned n found few goon type of men stairing at her. Before her could understand clearly...They moved to her n touched her sensuously... It was clear that she shivered... She turned ..her eyes red in anger... What ever be the reason...N condition..She couldn't tolerate anyone around doing this accept laksh.. .. she turned n with disgust n haterate... Slapped the goon hard on his face... He held her hair...
"Aaah..." She shouted in pain... Laksh was moving towards the goons... He clenched his fist in anger ... How dare he touch his ragini...
The goon started to pull her to a corner ... Ragini being ragini started hitting him... She was at the best of her protest... Abusing the goom... To an extent ... where even laksh was surprised but he knew that jerk deserved it... He threw her on the ground... N pushed her... Laksh now ran to them... He held the collar of that Moron.. when.. his men pulled laksh n started beating him...Laksh replied back...He too Beated them black n blue... Meanwhile the main goon slapped ragini... N pushed ..her. She rolled n ran again but the goon pulled her...
"Laksh..." she shouted...Laksh moved to the goon... His blood boiled like anything... He Beated him.. untill he almost reached the death bed... N left him...


"Ragini" he ran to her n cupped her face... Are you okay...
She jerked his hands .."y do u even care..." Yes the non enraged state was deep inside her heart but all she did here was to thank him all the time for her freedom n taunting him for this betrayal...
"Yes I do" he held her face close to his.. when... She pushed him...
N moved away...
He grabbed her hand n pulled her close...
*So miss gadodia..."... He was speaking... When she cut him...
"Ragini..only ragini... No gadodia..."
He chocked Sue to tears ... Thus was a result of his stupid ego... She was alone..She needed him... She loved him but he.. he betrayed her... Oh he was cursing himself for this every next second... N there she was going far from him jerking his hand...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Res Harshi.😊
Unresed.😳
Laksh to pura pagal ho gaya hai Ragini k pyaar mein!!!😉😆
Ragini's re-entry in her 'dhunki style' was good.😛
Laksh was stunned by her nature and style!!😉
Awww!! She kissed him, that too in lips!!☺️
Haahaa!! AP is thinking that her son became mad!!😉😆 (Even I'm thinking the same!!😳😛)
Laksh saved Ragini from the goons!!😃
Ragini is still very hurt with him, and its very obvious.😭
Now lets see how he wins her back with his real and genuine love for her.😳
Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
After a long time.. 😆

Actually I was waiting for your update..
Nice update.. Ragini kissed Laksh..😳
Laksh has gone mad.. 😆


Update soon.. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update.
continue soon..
thanks for PM..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update but after long interval of time...
So finally laksh find ragini but in the end she jerk his hand and going away from. Him...
Laksh beta whatever you had done with ragini you deserve it..
Update soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update harshita😊
Ragini kisses laksh☺️

What is laksh going to do now

Waiting for the next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Okay.. first of all sorry for late reply...
I was regularly reading ur updates but didnt comment on last few chappyss...

As usual Awesome update,,,,

I like everything here..

Now waiting to see how will Lakshya win her back..

At last, UPDATE SOON!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awsome update!!
im loving it

Laksh's craxy obbession for ragu 😛

please please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Obsessive part 12
Ragini was going back.. n away from laksh... He came running...
N held her hand...
L- ragini... (Holds her hand)
R- leave my hand laksh let me go...
L- no..
R-yes..
L- nooo..
R- yes...
L- y...y u want to go... That day same place u kissed me...
R- it was a thanks for giving me my freedom ... N now if u will take it I won't allow u...
L- trust me ragini I won't... I love u pls come back...
SHe sarcastically smiled...
R- none loves me Laksh.. what else u want tell directly.. I have nothing... No money .. no business... Nothing... What u want...
L- I want u... Because ...
R- u r not satisfied.. u want me back in ur bed r8...
Laksh pulls her close ..only an inch gap in b/w them... Thus line had triggered his rage...
L- shut up... N be in ur limits...
R-u be in ur limits n leave me u don't have any r8 to do so...
L-n u don't have any r8s to hurt me...
R- y u can use me... U can play with my heart.. I told u Na.. don't play .. don't hurt me.. I am alone n I am broken... But no u...U have to do that... U betrayed me in the worst possible way Mr. Laksh Maheshwari... U used my body... N then u left me in the mandap...
L- I agree ki I left u at the mandap that was my fault I apologize but that n8 .. u.. u were also their n u instigated me... I didn't have any intention to do so...
R- ohh really then y did u come late night...Haan..who does that...
L- Milne aya tha tumse...
R-itti raat ko...
L-haan... I want to see u...
R-correction u wanted to use me...
L- no u .. n u started all that .. n not me...
R- shut up...
L- kyun sach kadwa h Na... Is it paining...
R- leave me laksh...
(Struggles to free herself from him...)
L- don't even try ragini.. don't even think I will leave u...
R- y.. u have already left me...
L- shut up... Don't change the topic... Tell me Na u r not able to accept the truth... H Na.. actually the truth is u too had lust me... H Na... Yes u did ...
R- leave me laksh...(her throat chocked ..N eyes formed moisture...)
L- ragini.. bolo Na... Y have u stopped have u stopped talking... Bolo Na...
R- laksh leave me...
L- no I won't... Tell me y u did that ..Haan.. bolo Na.. the fact is our relationship was lust based... Money binded... Nor u nor me loved...h Na...
Laksh completed his words... Ragini looked at him... N the next second ... He felt burning sensation on his left cheek...
She slapped him... N slapped him hard...
His rage increased... N he dragged her along with him...
R-laksh leave me...
But he wasn't listening...
R- help...help somebody save me... (She started shouting...)
Laksh stopped n then pulled her close ...
L- listen ragini no body is coming to save u from me...got it...
N he again pulled her n made her sit in his car forcefully...
R- leave me.. Laksh...
L- listen I want to hear the truth 1st... Either accept I was correct...
R- truth u want truth so listen... U.. u.. n u were the reason for all that happened that n8...I never thought.. U the Casanova ... The womensier will accept my alliance ... But u did it.. I knew the reason ... It was the merging of companies.. I begged my dad for not doing this but he beat me... N threaten me... I was forced to accept it... Samjhe... I wasn't out of the trauma of marrying a casonover like u .. ki we had our engagement fixed n also our wedding... I was broken.. I knew it ki once u will marry me... U wont leave me but u will use me n then when u will be satisfied u will treat me like a trash... I fainted on our engagement because I couldn't handle the fact... N the reality... N that n8 I drank... I tried to smoke... Which u too knew I couldn't... I wanted my self too completely die before I marry u... I wanted my feelings to die .. n hence I myself sracted my own soul... I spent my n8 with u.. ab leave me... N yes Mr Maheshwari ... I loved u... I loved you with my whole heart... Not because of ur body..But because of the fake care which i thought was real... Yes... I loved u because u were the one who came n had dinner with me.. I had it alone since I was 16... Since I lost Maa...U took away my loneliness... U helped me smile... U.. yes u... N laksh ... Pls say anything but not that I had lust on u ...never... Pls...

Saying this she was on the verge of breaking down... Laksh losened his grip ... he hung his head down.. she too left the place... She was all tears... He too hung his head down... It was paining his heart... He had hurted her badly... He sat n decided to stay away... Let her go... N punish himself for all he did... But the question was will he be able to do so...


He left ...
Ragini reached her place .. she was hurt n hurt beyond limits .. she was hurt more than his betrayal .. today he question her love.. labled it as lust... She was all tears... N she took a blade n started making cuts on her hands n legs... N then poured liquor on them.. it burnt n pain but less than her heart...
R- laksh y ..y u did that ... Y u questioned me... I love you... Y ...Han... U don't know but when u do so it hurts more than anything... More than any any any dam thinking... She drank the remaining liquor n slept with wet lashes...
@ laksh room ...
He was drinking .. n smoking ... He was badly drunk... He again hallucinated... He was seeing Ragini In b/w smoke clouds...
L- ragini... I ... Am sorry...
N then he imagined her going away...
L-ragini... I ...I... I ... Am.. Sorry...
But she wasn't stopping... He ran behind her... But she moved n moved out...
L- Ra.. Ragini... Listen Na...
But she moved out Again...
He ran behind her ... He wasn't able to walk...yet took fumbling steps following his imagination...
L- ragini...listen...Pls...He followed her... N while doing so... Lights went off... He.. tried n called her name again n again..He saw her jumping from the railing...
L- ragini.. stop no don't do so... He ran behind her n was about to climb the railing ... When collided with Sanskaar...
Sa- pagal ho gaya h tu lucky... U were on the verge of falling u want to die...
L- ragini.. woh ...woh ... She too jumped... Sanskaar leave me... I ...
Sanskaar made him stand n slapped him hard..
Sa- koi nahi h yanhan stop imaging... Understood... Now come n sleep...
L- nahi Mene dekha... Ragini ne jump kar diya..
Sa- (shaking his shoulder)- laksh just calm down koi nahi h yanhan u come n sleep...
L- par ragini...
Sa- she is safe..
L-pakka..
Sa- pakka..
Sanskaar made him sleep but he whole n8 kept on babling .. "ragini I love.. I cNt live without you... I will die...Pls..Pls come back..."


Next mrng-
Same park...
Laksh reached their n Parked his car... He saw ragini Again..He was smiling when he saw her talking with some other guy he fumed with rage... Laksh funed in jealousy as soon as ragini laughed... He somehow controlled himself... N stood in his place he turned his face the other side...
They both started walking n ragini laughed n kept her hand on his shoulder... Laksh's jealousy increased... He made a drink n gulped it...
Soon it started raining.. she was getting wet... N the boy started to leave but was looking at her again n again.. now this crossed the limits of his rage n Envy. ..He moved close to ragini n turned her...the next moment he smashed his lips on hers.. n started kissing her vigorously... She tried pushing him...But in vain... He left her when he was out of breath...
Before he could understand anything.. ragini smashed her fingers on his cheek... He looked up but she again slapped him.. again again n once again... N again .. she herself lost the no. Of times she slapped him... .
Laksh said nothing n left ...
At mm laksh room-
With red eyes... In rage .. his heart paining in separation of love n bleeding in guilt.. n his mind screaming for his ego being hurt...He sat all enraged
Laksh (monologue)- ragini I told you Na.laksh Maheshwari has ego issues then too for the second time u again played with me... N I am stuck here...I can't leave u.. I can't hurt u... I am dieing for u... Yet I am hurt today... U agin did that .. u ...N only u...can do that... (He smashed his hand on the bottle which fell on the ground n broke into several peaces... ) Na Marne deti ho Na jeene deti ho... What u want ragini... What u want... I love you... I will die... N how dare u talk to someone else... Y...y...
No i will I will do something... U will be mine I won't let u go ... I can't... But this bloody ego of mine ... N more than that is my love... I love u ..I tried but I can't let u go. ... I can't see u with someone else... I am obsessed with u... I will get mad... Soon ragini... But no today I will get u... Anyhow... Bas...
At ragini's place...
Ragini (monologue)- I had slapped him several times perhaps because I hated him or perhaps it was the frustration of the betrayal... Or perhaps I still loved him.. I loved his touch yet I couldn't trust him... (She toiched her lips feeling him...) Yes laksh... U r bad ... U r worst ... But I can't yet hate u... N for this thing I hate myself... She was angry as well .. she smoked n drank at the sometime..But then .. changed into her swim suit n entered the pool...


After 30 minutes


He entered her room.. she wasn't here... then were was she ..he like a mad searched for her..
L-were r u ragini...
Just then his eyes fell on her personal pool.. she was relaxing there.. he smirked..n changed ..
Ragini was in her short swim suit... it was Black in colour.. her body was all wet.. it was turning him on... she rested her head on poolside..

L-baby I am coming...
He slowly enters the pool... n moves close to her... he touches her belly sensuously...
She did not resist instead responds she took a deep breath.. experiencing his fragrance...
He too moves more close.. he touched her seductively...
It turns her on ... but on realising n reminding the past she decided to widrew..

R-laksh... stay away n go...
Laksh pushed her waist even closer to him.
L-y don't u like it .. when I am close...
He replied in husky voice.. he turned her back towards him n kissed her nape.. follwed by wet lingering kisses on her shoulders.. she was melting...
R-laksh... leave...
But he didn't stop instead now he turns her face to him n starts kissing her neck like a hungry man...
R- laksh.. not again...
She said her words contradictory to her actions... she was movie neck according to give him space but there she was asking him to leave...

L-y .. y u want me to Leave.. are you not enjoying..
Saying this he captured her lips without letting her answer...
It was wild passionate hungry.. kiss.. he kissed her until he was out of breath... she pushed him away...
R-be in ur limits...
L-baby y r u so angry upon me..
R-shut up .. u cheat... stay away...

Thus evokes his anger n he pinned to the wall of the pool n pressed himself harder on her...

L-really should I go...
R-yes I don't want to.be with u again..
L-we will see...
He.lower down.. n kisses her neck again... n then leaves a love bite..
He then removed the thin back stripe of her swimming costume.. it revealed her milky back n evoked the wild beast in him...
He caressed her back sensuously... he then pecked her back through her spine n then removed the remaining cloth from her upper body...

He kissed bosoms .. n then the neck n then her lips.. she responded with equal passion...

He then she then moved out of the pool .. covering her parts with her hands n he smirked..he followed her to her room..
He came over her..n moved all the cloth which hid any of her body ..
He kissed her passionately again... this time it ended when she bit his lip..

L- I like u my jungle billi...

R-u r such a desperate man..

L-ain't u lusty women..

R- y r u always mistaken ... u r forcing me..

He smirked..

L-then I love doing that...

N he entered.. her body.. she screamed.."laksh"..
He enjoyed it more with that ..
He kissed her collarbone..
N then her neck n then he licked her earlobes..
Followed by kissing her lips again...
He rocked against her ..her hands pinned to he bed n fingers interweaved with his.


After some time..

R-u bloody...
L-sshhh.. I love you baby...
R-shut up. ..u have only n only lust on me.

Laksh- then okay... he pushed her again...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome 👏

update soon 😃

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