Obsessive-a 16+ ragya [UPDATES after March 3 2017] A/N Page one. - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome 👏👏
Aww I want to see laksh dying for Ragini's love 😳😳

Cant wait to see what happnes next updt soon please 😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww!!! This is awesome 😃 😃

Poor Laksh and Ragini!! But I'm enjoying this 😆


Can't wait to read the next part!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Harshu,😊
Such an emotional one!!!!😭😭
Poor Ragini!!! Had to suffer so much!!!😭
Laksh's tarap is good!!!😉 Want to see him dying to get Ragini's love.😳😛
Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update harshita👏
Poor ragini. Nice to see laksh pining for ragini

Waiting for the next one
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Posted: 9 years ago
Harshu awesome awesome awesime once again.
N this time m late in commenting again :')
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really nice update it's nice Ragini is trying to be strong and let Laksh go it's nice she feels free how can any father treat their kid like that, wow Laksh punishing himself that's a start can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Unexpected update...
Loved what the ragini did... 😆
Poor laksh... In miserable state due to his ego. 😕
Update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Please Please Update Karo na 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Obsessive part 10
Hi all thanks for your response on the last part here is the next ..hope u will like it..
Laksh was lying on the ground... N moaning her name.. n ragini was sleeping on the footpath...
There in the mm ap was walking here n there...
AP-sanskaar laksh ragini where they r .. especially ragini we Don't know where she us how she is..
Sa-don't worry badi Maa I am going I will bring both if them back .. u don't worry...
AP-sanskaar idk how to thank u...
Sa-Maa nk need for it .. I am going ..U take care..
Sw-sanskaar pls drive carefully the weather is not at all good..
Sa-swara u take care of Maa n I am coming a soon with laksh n ragini..
He pecked dher forehead n left...

Laksh was somehow again managed to get up n again started walking.. n Calling ragini.. but in vain..
L-ragini.. ragini... Where r u... Ra..Ra... Ragini...
But this time his leg hit a rock n he fell down again... With his bleeding foot n drenched body due to rain.. his body lacked energy to go any further.. his lips started to turn blue due to cold n pain...
There ragini woke up due to rain drops.. she took a look at her alcohol bottle it was still half left so she drank it ... She collected her bicycle n bag n moved to a shelter nearby n slept there...
Meanwhile sanskaar was worried n was searching for them... He saw ragini.. he stopped his car n patted her cheeks..
Sa-ragini.. ragini...
R-(opening her eyes slowly)- sanskaar bhai..
Sa-hmm.. come with..me..
R-where ..
Sa- ghar.
R-I have no home.
Sa- but I have Na u come with me..
R-nooo... (Makes a wiered face as she is drunk)
Sanskaar held her elbow and made her sit in the car..
Even after few hours there was no trace of laksh.. sanskaar tried to locate him .. his car with the help of the police n found his location in a forest...
Sanskaar reached running n searched him when he saw him lying on the ground... He somehow managed to take him to the car... N make him sit on the back seat along with Ragini..
She was drunk yet she saw laksh...
R-laksh.. kya hua... (Poked her finger in his cheek ..)
Laksh herd her voice n held her hand..
L-(semi unconscious)- Ra..Ra.. Ragini... U here. R . U..ok...
R- laksh...
But then she fell on his hand n slept under the effect of alcohol...
Sanskaar somehow managed to take them home n make them sleep..
He called a doctor..
Ap was with Ragini... Along with swara..
AP-kya halat ban rahi h yeh ladki apni... Y is she punishing herself...
Sw- Maa everything will be fine u don't worry..
Sa-Maa meet laksh ..
AP- I don't want to meet that spoilt brat ... Sanskaar gently patted her shoulder n left.. he entered laksh's room n sat on the couch... He dossed off in the sitting position..
He woke up with the scream of his brother...
L-ragini...
Sanskaar woke up n ran to him...
Sa-laksh u okay..
L-no no.. where is ragini...
Sa-drink this.. she is alright..
L-I want to meet her ...
Sa-no laksh not after what u did.. but u know 1st tell me y u did this to her . What had she done...
L-what had she done... She had hurted my ego.. I started to love her bht she.. she insulted me in front of all...
Sanskaar stood up n slapped laksh..
Sa-laksh.. do u really love her. .
L-yes I do...
Sa-noo.. don't u spoil n Tain this feeling called love.. if u would have loved her then this ego thing no never ... Ego is never a problem when u love someone... Understand...
L-idk.. but yes it is love for ragini n I am sure...
Sa- then u did not even once think how will she feel .. n how will u live without her.. just think once again laksh .. ego n love never go hand in hand ..
L-b..but..
But sanskaar had left... Laksh felt u uneasy... He dragged his leg n limbing searched for ap... But saw ragini sleeping ... He felt .. happiness...He went to her... N sat by her side..
L-ragini i love you
N he kept his head on hers... N pecked her forehead...
He again dosed off like that...
Early mrng..the whole mm is asleep...
Ragini woke up n found herself on a new place..N then she had fain flashes of sanskaar taking her here...
N then she noticed laksh...
She pushed him...
R-door ... Stay away from me Mr. Maheshwari...
L- Ragini.. r u okay..
R-who pays a damn ... Weather I am dead or alive n don't try to act... If u want to sleep with me again...then do tell me.. we can be together...But u stay away...
Laksh was again enraged by her words...
L-shut up... Ragini... U know what ... just u dare not speak that again..
R-I am not interested in talking to you so get lost...
L-but I want to..
R-shut up...N she got down ..
She tries to go out but Laksh ran n lashed the door..
R-what the hell laksh...
L-listen to me..
R-no..
L-y...
R-Because you are a bloody cheater lier...N trait..
Before she could complete laksh smashed his lips..on hers...He kissed her roughly...She too responded in the same way...it kissed wildly n roughly... Laksh started to moved forward towards their bed without Breaking the kiss... Ragini had no option accept to move back.. they fell on the bed...
Laksh came on top of ragini...
L-now listen to me...
R-nope ..get lost...
L-pls..
R-oh ur learning n adding new words to ur dictionary great..
L-yes adding any problem...
R- going great but leave me...
L-no..
R-yes...
He lie by side... His arms on her waist... N his on leg on her both... Putting an halt to any moment in her body...
L-now listen...I am sorry..
R-but I don't forgive u...
L-atleast give me a chance..
R-already granted n u have wasted it..
L-but...
R-no ifs no buts...
Ragini applied pressure n threw him away I. The bed...
L-ragini...
But she ran n escaped laksh somehow managed to get up n walk but she was already gone...
L-(monologue)-where will u go ragini.. I u r mine...mine n mine only.. n I won't let u go..
A week later...
Laksh POV-
Aah.. another mrng which began without her... Well the fault was mine only...But u see she won't be ever able to escape me..yes me.. my love .. I have loved her...N only her..U will be soon with me.. u want it or not I will find u out soon... (He gulped more of alcohol..) (he took out his phone n opened her pic..He touches her face n a tear escaped his eyes...)... Once n for once if I find u then I will definitely not let u go again ever ... I won't ragini I won't... I love u like a lunatic yes I do... I have been hallucinating u all the time...
Fb--
Laksh's Pa enters..
PA- sir.. u have some files to be signed..
But before she could complete laksh lashed the door.. she started to sweat..
PA- s..ss..sir... Woh.. woh..
L- bolo Na ragini...
(Touches her face sensuously...)
Pa shivers in fear...
PA- sir it's me...
L-haan I know it's u ... Ragini... Don't u know how much I missed u...
Pa - ss..ir ..it's me .. ruhi...
L-haan I know it's u Ragini...
He moved close to her n opbed the zip of her top n caresses her smooth back... The girl shivers more..
L-ragini y r u soo silent..Bolo Na...
PA- sir...Ra.. Ragini nahi sir..ruhi..
L- haan bolo ...Na .kuch bhi aage ... I know u r ragini...
Laksh starts to move close n the girl took steps backwards untill she touched he couch...N fell on it...
Laksh came on top of her...
He moves close to her earlobe n nibs it...
L- (husky tone)- ragini I knew it u also carve for me..
Ruhi ..starts crying n Begging laksh to leave her..
Ruhi- sir..Pls..sir leave me... Pls..I ..I can't do this sir.. pls. ... My mom n dad will die sir...Pls...
L- ragini y r u crying .. u don't want all this..
Ruhi- nnnooo...
Laksh gets up... N zips her dress..
L- is it okay ...now..
Ruhi all tears nodded her head.. n laksh hugged her.. imagining her to be Ragini..
Ruhi-sir pls sir..(trying to free herself) pls let me go.. sir pls. ... I am ruhi..N not ragini..
She again n again repeated it...N laksh gained his senses...He noticed her it was ruhi... He in anger n frustration pushed her down n her head stuck the table.. causing the bleeding... But she still felt relived..
L-what the hell...how dare u ...
(Pushes her...)
Ruhi- sir..woh.u only..
(Laksh is reminded about what he just did...)
L-get lost... N where is ragini...
Ruhi- idk sir...
Laksh goes to her n holds her hair...
L-y y y.. u don't know... Kyun...
Ruhi- I am sorry sir..aaah..sir..(holds her hair..) pls leave me sir idk any thing..Pls...
She crys n begs..
Laksh realises his mistake . ...
He left her hair...
L-ruhi.. I ..I am soo..so..so..Sorry woh.. ragini u know Na...
Ruhi- yes sir...N I am sorry sir..
L- u go n work n idk what happened to me.. I am sorry...
Ruhi somehow felt comfortable n she left ..
Ruhi-sorry sir...
Laksh felt guilty for hurting her .. n almost taking away her dignity...
He sat on his chair back... N started working... All the time again his mind was occupied by ragini all the time...
Fb ends------

L-Ragini .. I love u ...Pls pls I have changed for u..will die soon ... without you...Pls come back... Pls... One Chance last. ... One pls..

He turned his chair towards the big glass. Window of his office n looked out n there ... He saw her. . .yes ..his face lit up again...
L(monologue)- no no no ..koi Bharosa nahi I may be imaging again...
He came out running n went to sanskaar...
L-sanskaar... Sanskaar...
Sa-haan Bhai bol...
L-chal ..(pulled his hand. )
Sa- kanhan...
L-woh ..woh ragini...
Sa-kya chahta h ab tu..want to kill her ..(angery+taunts )
L(holds his collar)- tu chali n just shut up...
He pulled sanskaar with him...
He showed him a girl...
L-see woh..that one in the blue jeans is she ragini...
Sa-nope she isn't...
L-but see she is there...

Sa-laksh... R u okay...that isn't ragini ..
Laksh felt chocked ...
Sanskaar soon felt some weight on his arms...
He turned towards laksh...
Sa-laksh...
Sanskaar held his body...
Sa-laksh..ankh khol...kya hua Bhai...
He patted his cheek but he fell down on the floor...

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